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[Tarot Redhand]

You should have posted, because no matter how awful you think it is there were more game codes for me to give away than entrants. Anyway, pm your story to me and I'll take a look. BTW virtually anything overly dark can be rescued by having a snappy 1 liner for the last sentence.

 

TR

[Tarot Redhand]

To illustrate that last point, here is something I came up with some time ago -

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<Opening Scene>

An old wild west town seen from a distance and with an elevated camera angle. Suddenly an explosion shatters the peace followed by a group of bank robbers making a speedy exit.

 

<cut to>

An isolated country road. Two men on horseback, quietly riding by. Suddenly they gallop off as the camera pans to one side and zooms in revelaing a twenty strong posse in swift pursuit.

 

<cut to>

Two galloping horsemen swerve off the road and disappear behind a stand of trees.

 

<cut to>

An American civil scene featuring dozens of cannon being fired.

 

<cut to>

Second world war dive bombers releasing their bombs.

 

<cut to>

A nazi rail gun firing followed by a first world war mega blast from a mine bomb being detonated.

 

<cut to>

A long shot of a nuclear explosion.

 

<cut to>

A close up of two blackened figures crawling out of a faintly glowing crater. One turns to the other and says...

 

TBC

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I'll let you know what they say and what the inspiration for this was, in a later post.

 

TR

[Tarot Redhand]

OK, I've kept you waiting long enough so...

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<cut to>

A close up of two blackened figures crawling out of a faintly glowing crater. One turns to the other and says...

 

"Gee Hayes, I sure wish the governor would let a few more people in on our little secret!"

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For those that don't get it, this is inspired by the opening credits to an old TV show called "Alias Smith and Jones". Click here to view them on youtube.

 

TR