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[#Kal Reeger Said
Not at all
“Coherence is best defined as the degree to which a story makes sense structurally. Is the story consistent, with sufficient detail, reliable characters, and free of any major surprises?
And how we decide is the details are sufficient? Arbitrary.
I admire you for the source you look for, but really, these are at best good advices about how to write a good story and how to keep your readers happy and satisfied.
Mac Walters is not a good writer, I fear]
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At least you admit Mac Walters is NOT a good writer - which is the cause of this multi paged debate. Continuity issues are a major issue with writing and writing competency.
And also, sufficiency of detail is not really a subjective detail when it comes to logical processing, like you mentioned in epistemology. What is true is proven, you have not proven that the catalyst could not open the arms in ME1 (when we clearly see it can operate them in ME3 and has the will to control the citadel when it needs to). You have presented a number of interpretations to try to reason it out mixed with assumption. But nothing solid from the material. Here is an example, if - in ME1 we notice the arms not opening and Saren is needed but in ME3 we see the arms opening/closing where is the citation that shows how/where the catalyst had control over the citadel? Or, what is controlling those arms and platforms?
Do you have this citation? Once you do, you will have the proof you need to move your argument from a belief to truth. It is very simple 
And these are not "best practices". You can try to argue this way but it is a false premise at best. Narrative Coherence is narrative coherence until we adopt a new meaning of narrative coherence. I doubt you are a post-modernist (though it would not surprise me) but I think if you are willing to entertain the notion of epistemology and logic, then you would at least understand and respect standards as they are - sans redefinition. I may be incorrect, as it seems you do not. But hey, anything to try to win an internet argument right?
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[#Kal Reeger Said
But bad writing doesn't mean that the story is inconsitent.
I don't see any explicit contradiction in the Me3 ending.
Contradiction arise only if you choose, in the range of the possible interpretations (and the range is very wide, giving the vagueness), certain interpretations.
And why would you choose one of them? Why, within possible (unlikely as you wish, but still possible), would you deliberatley choose the impossible?]
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Bad writing is a more general term that some like to throw around to shift the debate to subjective areas, lets keep things on track. As many people can still enjoy something that is poorly written. The correct word I have used is competency. And in the terms of narrative coherence, there is no competency. I have shown this via the definition of Narrative Coherence and relating the plot hole created by the catalyst. You have continued to make a false comparison (The citadel being part of it means it cant influence it since I cannot control my body or your newest:
Something responding to part of you has nothing do to with you controlling that something <snip>
Part of me =/= part of AI catalyst here buddy. You cannot compare me or you to the catalyst. We can only compare the Catalyst to the Catalyst. And we only meet the little bugger in ME3.)
I have a funny feeling you don't WANT to see any contradiction in the ME3 ending as you have stated prior that if two pieces of information contradict, we need to make them consistent. Either that, or you are just arguing a point to see how far you can get or how angry someone can get. Thankfully, not far on both counts
Leveraging assumption, headcanon, and fallacies to back your point up do not a logical argument make my dear boy
. I do hope you had a look at the intellectual honesty link I delivered - it will help immensely.
Not even sure what you are talking on the "why would you choose this?" Look, I get it is really cool and edgy to push the "they are just hating to hate" point but I don't think this is an argument. I am not choosing to see this contradiction - a contradiction YOU acknowledged and then said we needed to remove. So, the only person here choosing to do an optional task is you buddy.
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[#Kal Reeger Said:
Dude, have you got a phd in fallacies and argumentation theory? Fascinating
No tactic, btw. Verificationism is a legit point of view and a cool philosophy. Simply, it is not the only possible one.
When? How?
I use ALL in game information, and than I put them together in a sensible way. There are many ways to do so, many sound interpretations.
On the other hand, you arbitrary choose which info are valid and which doesn't deserve attention, and than you analyze these informations like they were compartmentalized.
It is a legit method, but it is not THE method.
We have already proved that there is no inconsistency, unless you want them to be so. Let's take this good definition of non-contradiction principle: "The same thing clearly cannot act or be acted upon in the same part or in relation to the same thing at the same time, in contrary ways"
During ME3 blue ending the catalyst is controlling the citadel (let's assume that he is in full control). During the event of ME1 the catalyst wasn't controlling the citadel.
Are we talking about the same thing? No, we are talking about the catalyst vs the sheparlyst. But let's move on, this point is controversial.
Are we talking about the same time? No, the time in different, the circumstances are completely different. So, no inconsistency here.]
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Not a PHD, but I am aware enough to know when someone is lying or trying to push their opinion as fact, and don't think I don't sense that condescension. Also, another great tactic that others like to use when defending the ending is prance around in philosophy. Let's keep to objective deduction here shall we? Trying to divert the discussion into potentially subjective arenas can never a factual conversation make. Epistemology is a great measure of truth, but the doctrines it uses are doctrines, the key aspect of Truth vs Belief is the key value I want to get across here (and it seems you do to although maybe to a lesser extent).
And I am not talking about a doctrine of epistemology, I am just asking FOR actual proof from the material - not your interpretation of it. You consistently dodge the question whenever I do and present your interpretation or attempt to leverage the redefinition fallacy (please review my prior posts when I noted this behavior). If you cannot represent the proof in the material, you have no argument, the material is thus inconsistent. You may not agree, but hey, life isn't fair. It comes down to burden of proof, if you cannot source the material to support your argument but instead continue to try to focus on your interpretation, you have no argument.
When? How?
I use ALL in game information, and than I put them together in a sensible way. There are many ways to do so, many sound interpretations.
On the other hand, you arbitrary choose which info are valid and which doesn't deserve attention, and than you analyze these informations like they were compartmentalized.
First you said there would be no headcanon required. Headcanon as we know is player interpretation that may not be completely validated by the lore. Then you said that you were using your interpretation to remove the contradictory elements in order to make it work and then backed it up with assumption and fallacies (thus removing the logical bounds). Next you launched into ones interpretation is just as good as fact by a certain point of view so long as it isn't contradicted. And now we are trying to go back to the logical piecing of information but still being contradicted by the material presented as well as leveraging a few fallacies & assumptions. If you want more information, please re-read your posts. So far, you have been contradicted by even your own methodology AND the lore.
And I do like how you list the non-contradiction principle. It is quite literally what I have been saying. You cannot have statement A and statement B in direct contradiction of each other at the same time. One supersedes the other, because the latter retconned the former. I get this happens in developments, but at least a writer could try to keep to their continuity.
Now, let us look at your reasoning.
During ME3 blue ending the catalyst is controlling the citadel (let's assume that he is in full control). During the event of ME1 the catalyst wasn't controlling the citadel.
Are we talking about the same thing? No, we are talking about the catalyst vs the sheparlyst. But let's move on, this point is controversial.
Are we talking about the same time? No, the time in different, the circumstances are completely different. So, no inconsistency here.
It is NOT just the blue ending big boy. It is post anderson death we see the platform rising, the arms flower open, and post catalyst exposition the choice platforms rise. A bit more than Just the blue ending. But even looking at your logic here...
Are we talking about the same thing? No, we are talking about the catalyst vs the sheparlyst. But let's move on, this point is controversial.
Where is it shown that the Catalyst has less abilities than the shepalyst? I can see how they may have different objectives but the abilities are never verified and in fact it is confirmed that shep is going to control the reapers when he takes control. You are just assuming based on nothing here. This point is a point that you may not like but it shows the catalyst can operate the arms. Do we have a citation from the material that shows the blue ending gives the catalyst these new arm-controlling powers? If so, what was controlling the arms up to this point? Is there a citation for it? All, in all, the catalyst abilities == shepalyst abilities from what we have seen.
Catalyst Controls Reapers, Shepalyst controls reapers
Catalyst moving Citadel Arms, Shepalyst moving citadel arms
And BOTH of those segments (Reapers & Citadel) make up 100% of the Catalyst! Amazing!! And the focus is on abilities, NOT objectives. The objectives of shepalyst and catalyst are different, we have no information that the abilities would change (from the cut scenes it appears not).
Are we talking about the same time? No, the time in different, the circumstances are completely different. So, no inconsistency here.
What? The time could be 1 billion in the future, if there is no mention, link, etc to represent how the catalyst got its ability to open/close the arms then it is contrived as it does not naturally arise from the story. Come on! You are better than that defense! Besides, with that argument you automatically seemed to have assumed it CAN operate the arms which is what you have been arguing against for the past few posts. 
Silly Rabbit
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[#Kal Reeger Said:
Again... sending a signal is not necessarly something voluntary.
You can use all the deductive models of the world, nothing will change these simple truth.
For example:
The Signal to Open the Arms comes from the Citadel (do you have any proof from the game that shows otherwise on this?)
The "voluntary act" of sending the imput "open the arms" is made by Saren (ME1) and Shepard (ME3, after TIM confrontation). How the citadel transpose this imput into an (automatic) signa to the keepers or directly to the arms is irrelevant.
Is the voluntary act that determines the control over the citadel functions.
And you cannot prove that the catalyst had the capacity to perform such voluntary acts during ME1.
And again
The Citadel is part of the Catalyst
Bob the keeper responds to the Citadel
Bob the keeper responds to part of the Catalyst
Nothing to do with will. Something responding to part of you has nothing do to with you controlling that something. You keep missing the crucial point.
All this debate about the citadel/catalyst sending a signal to the keepers is pointless.
We know about ONE signal, and that signal is "open relay". The keepers doesn't recognize it.
We also know that the keepers respond to the citadel (part of the catalyst). But we have seen that if C respond to B which is part of A, doesn't mean that A can control B and/or C at will.
So what?]
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This part is what I am a bit worried about here:
And you cannot prove that the catalyst had the capacity to perform such voluntary acts during ME1.
Really? Because I can show you that the catalyst WILL engage personally if it cannot make its solution happen. And, in ME1 it had no other solution to enact except for the harvest. Here is the information in case you missed it:
Now, let’s look at the issue:
Catalyst powers over the citadel
-Lifts Shepard up on the platform
Nothing to do with will. Something responding to part of you has nothing do to with you controlling that something
Very applicable to the will of the catalyst indeed. So it cannot control the citadel operations/functions. But somehow it needed to get shepard to it to make the new solutions happen. And it did so...how? Did it tell the keepers? If it did we see an issue with ME1. If he did it himself, we see an issue with ME1. Unless you will try to postulate that he is ONLY capable of raising this one platform up and down (and the decision platforms), which doesn't really make much logical sense in context.
CITE
-Closes the arms/opens the arms
CITE
Catalyst interfering when it can’t enact a solution
-The Crucible provided new solutions to the catalyst, but he could not make them happen. Thus he intervened directly to allow shepard to do so
-“the Crucible changed me…created new possibilities, but I can’t make them happen”
CITE
Catalyst state of mind (prior to crucible docking)
-“The only certainty is its intention, Galactic Annihilation”
CITE
-“But you killed the rest."
"We helped them ascend, storing them in reaper form”
CITE
Keepers responding to only the catalyst
“The keepers are controlled by the citadel”
CITE
“They [the keepers] evolved so that they only respond to the signals emitted by the citadel itself”
CITE
Relationship of the catalyst to the citadel
“The citadel, it’s my home. The citadel is part of me”
CITE
So, looking over that plethora of citations we see the following in ME3
The Catalyst is operating the arms
The Catalyst could not enact the new solution so it brought shepard to do so
In ME1 we know the following:
There was no other solution except the harvest
(from our knowledge of ME3) the catalyst operates the arms
(from our knowledge of ME3) the catalyst will intervene if it cannot make the solution happen
So yeah bud. This is a textbook continuity issue. Did you review that video on the teacher describing narrative coherence (with the funny hat)? That one gives more in-depth models and examples.
You see, continuity applies to all installments, a continuity issue is when one installment (usually a later installment) contradicts a prior installment. Here is a bit more information on Continuity and continuity errors.
So, looking at the material, from ME3 we can see a continuity issue. Something is operating these arms and it apparently could have just done that rather than let Sovereign get Saren. Basically, if you can prove it can do these actions in ME3 and have no ability to show it could not NOT have these abilities in ME1, the issue is the writing - not the reader.
Nothing to do with will. Something responding to part of you has nothing do to with you controlling that something. You keep missing the crucial point.
All this debate about the citadel/catalyst sending a signal to the keepers is pointless.
We know about ONE signal, and that signal is "open relay". The keepers doesn't recognize it.
We also know that the keepers respond to the citadel (part of the catalyst). But we have seen that if C respond to B which is part of A, doesn't mean that A can control B and/or C at will.
Here is where I think you are starting to realize your point is being beaten. Anytime someone tries to end discussing the point, it usually means that point has proven them incorrect (at least in my experience). So, lets take a look. We know about the signal Sovereign sent, but the command/signal to open/close the arms is directed to the citadel. In the case of the former it was removed from the keepers being able to receive it. In the case of the latter the keepers can obviously still receive it.
AND, we see the Catalyst does actually get involved when it cannot enact its solution - otherwise, shepard would still be bleeding out. So, riddle me this batman, how can the catalyst have the will/intention to raise shepards platform, the choice platforms, and flower out the citadel in ME3 when it has new choices but not just open the arms in ME1 or send a command to the keepers to open the arms in ME1? I do hope we have an in game citation.
Your last part is utterly defeated by the fact that the catalyst can raise shepard up to meet him bud. We see it has intention, we see it has control, the last segment of land you have to stand on is the amount of control it has which - looking at the lore - is evaporating since we logically see that it has control over the reapers (part of it) and we see it operating aspects of the citadel (also part of it). Again, I still have a funny feeling you are believing an AI is the same thing as a human. Just compare the catalyst to the catalyst, that is the most effective approach.
HA!
"So what? This is a universal, all-purpose put down. It implies that the evidence you just submitted was irrelevant. It tries to put you on the defensive by demanding you prove the relevance of what you just said. It contains no facts or logic, just a conclusory accusation."
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[#Kal Reeger Said:
but this is headcanon at its apex
If a general orders his soldier to stop fighting, because the battle is lost (or won) does it mean that soldiers are not indipendent beings?
We see the reapers stop fighiting, yes... because the puppeteers pulled the strings? Or because, through their collective intellinge (now updated with Shep personality) they've reached the conclusion that stop fighting is the best solution? We cannot possibly know.
yes yes, I know, false comparison]
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Thank you for representing the false comparison. My point still stands.
Reapers =/= organics
And, in the context of continuity. You cannot be independent (free from control) and controlled/part of a hivemind at the same time. Some like to say Soveriegn was lying/bravado w/e. While we have no information available of a reaper outright lying, they can lie by omission but that is a bit different altogether. In the end, what made the reapers stop fighting was the catalyst - NOT the reapers.
One, clearly supersedes the other which does contradict the previous installment. And, while I am aware this is an attempt to divert the subject it still does show that the catalyst does control that which is a part of it. If it can do it for one part, where is the information showing it cannot for the other part? Especially when we see the citadel just operating on its own accord.
Again KR, you can headcanon what you want to resolve the issue, point in fact you already have! And I respect that. Headcanon is intrinsic to each person. I am not here to debate your headcanon or preferred interpretation. I am only look at the material and how it interacts with the rest of the material. I have said many times that headcanon is the BEST way to deal with the catalyst issues. However, do not be THAT guy and profess your opinion/interpretation as actually represented in the lore.
Still tonnes of steam! HOO-HAA!!! And if I do not respond tonight (it is 9PM where I am) I shall see you in the morning my forum brother!