Melinda snodgrass again ? That's one of the two professional writers who criticized mass effect 3.
1. Arguing about people again.
2. Metric is missing meaning. How many professional writers have defended the ending?
(I mean writers who have actually played the game, and not those two who immediately send out statements similar to "Writers can do whatever they want and it is good")
>>Did you see the star trek episode she wrote ? it's structurally and philosophically very basic.<<
Deflection attempt, not based on presented argument.
Besides: OF COURSE the structure of that episode was basic. It was a 40 min. television episode with very limited time to introduce characters (2 new ones), state the relevant characters characteristics (5 characters), introduce the problem, then deal with it and come to an conclusion. In fact there were even several filmed scenes cut out from that episode and never made it into the final version + whatever did not make it into the filmed draft because of time limits.
Also: That this episode is continuously regarded as one of the best trek episodes ever, and was nominated for a writers award likely means that she actually does understand her business.
>>she compares Mass Effect to dragon age (while they can't be compared because of their story, their genre, their gameplay etc...)<<
Lets see:
Story:
DA:O.: Standard hero journey. Hero + team have to travel to several locations, recruit allies of some sort and face a vastly superior enemy. And there is a treacherous human faction in there somewhere.
ME: Standard hero journey. Hero + team have to travel to several locations, recruit allies of some sort and face a vastly superior enemy. And there is a treacherous human faction in there somewhere.
Genre:
DAO: Squad based RPG. Fantasy setting
ME: Squad based RPG/shooter hybrid. Science fiction setting.
Gameplay:
DAO: Squad based, dialogue choices, auto attack, + powers
ME: Squad based, dialogue choices, shooter for player, auto attack companions, + powers
Looks pretty comparable to me.
The real difference here is that DA:O is a single game, whereas ME is a trilogy of which the first part had to be self contained, and the second part lost track of what it should have done, accomplished and introduced to enable a really fitting last series entry.
>>The ending is amoral,[...] but it's all about moral problem.<<
Isn't presenting a moral dilemma (which the ending is supposedly now all about) without actually providing any kind of focus, emphasis on that dilemma, or even presenting it as a moral dilemma in the first place bad writing?
Besides, I still don't get how 3 games of implied "A,B,and C are good" (or bad respectively) statements fit together with ending-choices of the exact opposite attitude.
>>If you don't understand that, you can't understand why in the EC the catalyst says that there is no conflict, and compares the reapers to fire.<<
Please enlighten me!
These statements are actually complete bullcrap to me.
There is obvious conflict. There is a conflict of interests, there is an actual physical confrontation in the gorram backround and the Reapers are actively participating. So how can bratalyst completely ignoring those make any kind of sense?
Reapers are like fire?! What is that eve supposed to mean? Are they a dumb force of nature? Are they not in control of what they do? Do they reap/burn until there is nothing left to sustain them? (Hey that would actually do make some sense...)
The only way in which that sentence makes any sense for me, is if it would result in: "if controlled, it can be utilized for certain things".
But it doesn't. Instead that statement is even more hollow than the "I'm an AI in the same way you are an animal"(paraphrased) -one.
>>she doesn't care about the content<<
Considering that she is complaining about said content....
Also: Still arguing about people.
Last remark:
>>There's a real difference between writers who write to please the audience, and those who try to write literature.<<
Yes: The fact that those who try to write 'literature' these days are only read by people that try to be 'literature critics'.
Which just as well really could show for how superfluous both are.