One of ME3’s endings’ main problems is that the options for the final choice all appear to be the Catalyst’s options, which means the antagonists options, so that the ending scenario comes across as “the antagonist wins”. This is an alternative ending exposition, which describes the same choices but is found and presented to us by one of the scientists who works on the Crucible. I’ve chosen Brynn Cole for that role, for no other reason that she’s the only named scientist in ME3 I recalled except for Mordin, who can be killed by main plot developments.
In another thread, I’ve explained why it is most plausible that the source of the ending options is the Crucible, in spite of the rather blatant assertion added by the EC that it’s the Catalyst. This exposition is based on that conclusion.
Regarding the Synthesis, I've added a few things that might be considered an interpretation, but I wanted it to be better grounded and less "space-magickey". Also, its rationale is vague since the Catalyst’s motivations aren’t known at this time. I’ve added some uncertainty with regard to the outcome which I thought was only plausible with its necessarily limited understanding. Shepard’s replies fit the information in the scene, it’s not meant to be an ultimate dismissal of the option. Also, at the start of this scene “Destroy the Reapers” is the goal that’s in everyone’s mind. That Shepard mentions it as “the” goal at this time is not meant to be an endorsement.
Shepard’s replies in this scene are the replies I’d have written for my own main Shepard, and I didn’t bother to write alternatives. Sorry about this, but if these replies don’t fit what you’d have chosen, just imagine your own.
This scene would occur on the Normandy in the room where you do usually do all your external communication. I omitted any intro or greeting. It would occur after Priority: Horizon.
BC: We’ve deciphered significant parts of the Crucible’s functions.
S: You don’t look exactly excited. I take it the Crucible can’t destroy the Reapers?
BC: Well….yes and no. The Crucible’s main function is to use the mass relays to distribute pre-programmed effects over the galaxy. There is a number of scenarios with widely varying data, of which we’ve deciphered three. We’d likely find more, but I hear we’re running out of time.
S: You said it can destroy the Reapers. If that’s not a cause for celebration, I guess there’s a problem.
BC: Indeed so. One of the scenarios does destroy the Reapers, but the targeting isn’t exactly specific. It targets technology above a certain complexity, which means that at the very least, it’ll destroy all AI and VI hardware up to 50 parsecs around any relay. Other technology may be affected, depending on how well we’ll be able to calibrate it…
S: I’ll just ask Garrus to do the calibrations….sorry, please continue.
BC: In addition, this is a high-energy setting. The mass relays will end up at least severely damaged, if not outright destroyed.
S: So we’ll buy our survival at the cost of the geth and our civilization….yeah, not appealing at all. What are the alternatives?
BC: No less unpleasant I’m afraid. There is an option to take control of the Reapers.
S: Why isn’t that good? We could fly them into the next star and be rid of them.
BC: It has to do with the missing part we haven’t found yet, the Catalyst. It appears that the one who would take control has to undergo a destructive mind upload to the Catalyst. We don’t know anything about it, but the descriptions indicate that person will become very powerful, comparable to those “AI gods” some of us speculated about when we discovered Ploba.
S: An ultimate authority, perhaps comparable to that “master of the pattern” mentioned by Vengeance…
BC: Yes. Depending on the hardware, it may turn out effectively immortal as well. I’m not too comfortable about creating such an entity, no matter who’s used for the initial template.
S: Yeah, if Vengeance was right, there already exists one, and it’s responsible for the cycles. Still, it would mean everyone gets to survive, right? What about the mass relays?
BC: They will not be damaged, as far as we’ve been able to determine.
S: Hmm….we’ll possibly buy our survival at the cost of our freedom. Damn it. What’s the third option?
BC: That’s an odd one. This will alter the biochemistry of life in the affected areas….
S: What? Is it even possible to do that?
BS: Apparently. I must admit the technology is completely beyond us. As far as we’ve been able to decipher it, certain biochemical compounds will be replaced by some kind of assembler made from sub-elementary matter.
S: …and it’ll turn us all into grey goo.
BC: Well, I can’t rule that out with certainty, but if it works as intended those constructs will constitute a significant upgrade for the organism affected, because of their versatility. If applied to a human, they will give the organism the ability to fix certain non-organic elements as well as eezo, and build from those several new components triggered by programmable brain patterns in the visual cortex.
S: Eezo, you say…I could learn a visual trigger in order to make my body grow a natural biotic amp?
BC (raises eyebrows): Some of my colleagues weren’t as fast in picking that up. Yes, that’s part of the package. Another is the ability to grow natural interfaces with various kinds of technology. In the most general sense, technology would be able to become part of us in ways beyond everything we’ve imagined before.
S: A radical advancement scenario, but the possibilities for abuse are beyond horrifying…
BC: Some of us speculated it’ll turn us all into mind-controlled slaves. Again, there are no data to support that hypothesis, but I can’t rule it out with certainty. Also, there will be no opting out. Everyone and everything in the target areas will be changed.
S: I can imagine some who wouldn’t like that at all. Apart from that, it’s all very intriguing, but how exactly does that help us against the Reapers?
BC: The data suggest that either one of two things will happen: the Reaper will treat with us as equals, or we’ll be able to defeat them on our terms in fairly short order.
S: You’ll have to explain that.
BC: Are you familiar with the singularity hypothesis?
S: The theory about what will happen as the speed of technological advancement increases?
BC: More specifically, the part about what will happen when synthetic intelligence surpasses organic intelligence. One 20the century futurist phrased it like this: once AI acquires human-like intelligence, the age of man will be over. That we can create synthetic intelligence means we have understood how intelligence works, and that means our creations will also be able to understand that. Unlike organic intelligence, however, synthetic intelligence can self-improve its own hardware. We’d be effectively out-evolved in fairly short order. Evidence exists: by everything we know, the geth consensus surpasses everything else in the galaxy in terms of intelligence by an order of magnitude or more, and it’s just a few hundred years old.
S: Again: what does this have to do with the Reapers?
BC: That our theories fail to explain how some of the Reapers’ technology works suggests that it may be a post-singularity technology from our point of few. This scenario will effectively invoke a singularity on ourselves, only that we’ll acquire the same self-improvement capability possessed naturally only by synthetic intelligence. Beyond that, we don’t know how exactly the cause – this fundamental change – and the effect – ending the Reapers’ extinction cycle – are connected. There may be something we don’t know yet about their purpose, but there may also be some intrinsic unpredictability. It is a singularity event after all..
S: So we’ll gamble with everything we are for the stake of radical advancement to a point on par with the Reapers...and….win them over or defeat them? And risk we’ll be turned into mind-controlled slaves or grey goo if we lose? Uh…I think I need to know more about the odds before I’ll give that any consideration.
BC: Also, the mass relays will be severely damaged or destroyed as well. I don’t think it will matter as such, though.
S: Don’t tell me we’ll all be able to teleport thousands of light years.
BC (laughs): No. Well, honestly neither can I rule that out. We’ve barely scratched the surface of this scenario’s scientific underpinnings. All I can tell now is that we’ll be able to miniaturize existing tech and build mass relays without having to dismantle a planet to do it. Neither will we need an ME core with the energy density of a star.
S: We’d be able to do that in the other scenarios as well, won’t we?
BC: Unfortunately, it’s not so easy. The problem is similar to why Drexler’s nanotechnology scenario hasn’t happened yet. Once you have the first universal constructor, it will change the world. But so far it has proven impossible to build one if the technology doesn’t already exist. Obviously there is a solution, but we haven’t found it. So we’ll need those subatomic-scale machines and some control over them.
S: It doesn’t matter anyway. I’d recommend staying very far away from this scenario unless we know more about the odds.
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With this exposition, I think getting corroborating info from the Catalyst in the ending confrontation would make it much more satisfying for the player. It works with the existing scene, although I’d have added variability to the Synthesis option depending on EMS, and have the Catalyst mention that.





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