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*Inspired by the song Need You Now by Lady Antebellum. Lyrics have not been changed so no ragging on me for keeping them the way they are. It’s not the point anyway. If you have not listened to this song I suggest you do for added effect. Link to Video of song here!


They traveled weeks back to Redcliffe to prepare for the final battle against the Darkspawn. The Landsmeet put Alistair on the throne as the rightful King of Ferelden. Having Alistair on the throne wasn’t without consequence. He had to make a political choice and ended the one pure thing he had in his life. He let her go all for the sake of an heir. The silence between them seemed to echo the pain they both felt. Everyone in the party could tell things were not the same anymore. Their final night at Redcliffe Castle was not without excitement.

Shayera had agreed to the ritual Morrigan offered and Alistair agreed only because of the look in her eyes and the fact he owed it to her. It was only after the ritual was finished it began to set in, the feeling of guilt. Shayera stood in the study looking over the books though her thoughts drifted to seemingly happier times when she was in his arms.

Picture perfect memories scattered all around the floor
Reachin for the phone cause I can't fight it anymore
And I wonder if I ever crossed your mind
For me it happens all the time


Slowly she walked, bare footed, over to the window as her white nightgown brushed the cold stone floor. As her eyes gazed out at the moon she sighed. Slowly her hand touched the cold glass of the window and she felt lost.

It's a quarter after one, I'm all alone and I need you now
Said I wouldn't call but I lost all control and I need you now
And I don't know how I can do without
I just need you now


Alistair was in another part of the castle sitting in the dark with his choice of drink. He had taken a bath after that ritual but still couldn’t shake the feelings of guilt. His eyes closed as he saw her face looking at him in disappointment. Like he had torn what little spirit she had out of her. He sighed then opened his eyes again. The light of the moon provided the only light into the room and his eyes became fixated on the door. It was almost as if he could feel her on the other side of the door.

Another shot of whiskey can't stop looking at the door
Wishing you'd come sweeping in the way you did before
And I wonder if I ever cross your mind
For me it happens all the time


He rubbed his face feeling the stubble on his chin before he forced himself to get up and walk over to the door. As he opened it he could have sworn he saw the hem of a white gown disappear around the corner. Quickly he ran after it without question.

It's a quarter after one, I'm a little drunk and I need you now
Said I wouldn't call but I lost all control and I need you now
And I don't know how I can do without
I just need you now




Shayera ran down the hall trying to find Alistair with tears in her eyes. The skirt of her gown flitted behind her along with her long hair, flowing freely behind her.

Guess I'd rather hurt than feel nothin at all.

She made out into the courtyard feeling the cold night air against her bare shoulders as she ran along the corridor opposite of the very man she was searching for.

It's a quarter after one I'm all alone and I need you now.

He nearly fell over when he rounded a corner in his drunkenness and looked across the open courtyard seeing her finally. His heart ached as he watched her running as if trying to escape something, and he knew exactly what it was. His lips parted as he tried to find the courage to call out for her but nothing came out. Instead he bolted down the corridor hoping to cut her off.
And I said I wouldn't call but I'm a little drunk and I need you now
They both came to a halt when they say each other just a few paces from the other. She had so much pain in her eyes as did he for hurting her.

I just need you now

I just need you now


He stopped denying himself as he walked right over to her and pulled her close. Their lips met in a bittersweet kiss. He could taste the tears on her lips and felt he had failed her. As their lips parted there was an unspoken understanding between them. It was not over, not for them. He caressed her cheek to wipe away the tears and she closed her eyes as she turned her lips into the palm of his hand. Forgiveness was there now.

Ooo, baby, I need you now


Author's Note: I just did this on a whim. I tend to find music that will make me think of a scene and write it up. Just a silly thing really. If you find this to be amusing then I can try to do these more often or in fact I challenge the other writers of this forum to do the same! Artists I issue the same challenge with your own skill with the pen. If you enjoy it wonderful and if you find this to be complete crap your comments are welcome but remember...constructive not destructive! Anyway I'm off to my dark corner of the forums now.

Modifié par tallon1982, 31 janvier 2010 - 03:49 .


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may have been a whim Talon, but wonderful.



And thanks for the song, not heard of it OR her.....bookmarked for posperity...



*goes to look for the album*

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It's actually a country group and I've never been a huge fan of country though I find myself listening to it more often. The song just came out not too long ago and I just loved it. There's something just haunting about the the four notes on the piano. And I'm glad you liked the short story.

Modifié par tallon1982, 30 janvier 2010 - 10:54 .


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Story with the song is very powerful and expressive...good stuff ;)

Modifié par Maviarab, 30 janvier 2010 - 11:02 .


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Edit...album came out 4 days ago lol...just bought it :)



Thaks, always open to new stuff that catches me :)

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tallon1982

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You're welcome lol.

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Very lovely, I'm all sniffly.

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Meh see what you started now Tallon...

Modifié par Maviarab, 31 janvier 2010 - 12:19 .


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*cackles all evil like while wearing her Darth robes* All is going according to my plan lol Kidding! I'm a soundtrack freak too. I have all the Star Wars soundtracks and Lord of the Rings. I'll lean towards symphonic rather than lyric but I like the Latin/Gregorian Chants (Carmina Burana). Once I get around to playing ME1 and ME2 I'll probably be searching for the soundtracks too.

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Ohhh gregorian chants...now your talking my stuff..



*wonders where she been all my life* rofl.....

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LOL!  I'll probably get flammed for this but I do like the music from Final Fantasy. One of them is this Liberi Fatali

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Hate the games personally....but yeah the music is quite good.

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I like the stories from the games. The actual game play can be tedious but I still like the characters and the storylines. Anyway ... lol

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It's just lovely, Tallon.



The week after I sacrificed my mage, leaving Al at the city gates, I kept hearing songs that would bring to mind the long walk to the gates with him standing back there watching her go, and her thoughts as she fought through the city up until that final moment when she died, and he was not with her. I did write about it, maybe I'll polish it and put it up at some point.

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Ooo do post it! I'd love to see how it came out =)

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*hums song to himself as he reads*

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Loved this! And, umm, I adore Lady Antebellum too! Brava!

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Hehe I got brownie points from AA! Woot! lol