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[LadyAly]

thanks

@erratic - not bad at all - even if I don't  like this -- glowing eyes in combination with such dark hair. I would raise and thin the eyebrows a bit.

@mochen Maybe give him a bit more .. manly edges ?

Modifié par LadyAly, 16 avril 2010 - 08:24 .

[VirusCat]

@Aly

Mmm, pretty eyes

[Lady Jess]

@Aly Oh she's gorgeous, and...fiery! Never make a redhead Angry, stupid Howe. And that armor looks much better than I thought it would in action. Hmmmm...does it make females look less chubby?

[LadyAly]

@LadyJess Well I simple thought it could fit her as a rogue - and yes... it looks damn sexy during fights - I bet even Sten will drool

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

she's workin' that leather, that's for sure

[VirusCat]

To update on my own work: I have started a huge project... dundundun... I'm trying to make a "better" version of Aarya!

First trying to copy her into the toolset, and then "fix" her up as I want her to be. It won't be Aarya when I'm done tho, I will make a new character named Aaryanna since my Aarya is pretty liked here

Didn't think I could do this tbh. Aarya was made in the CC so...

[LadyAly]

www.dragonagenexus.com/downloads/file.php 

Here we go @mochen

@VirusCat  good - you keep Aarya - maybe a assassin is behind you to watch your steps *lol*

Modifié par LadyAly, 16 avril 2010 - 08:39 .

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

mochen: it's Mord Sith Armor (http://www.dragonage...ile.php?id=1055) well you know what ladyaly?

viruscat: the neck looks a little too thin. perhaps an eye color / texture where you can see more of her pupils?

Modifié par yasuraka.hakkyou, 16 avril 2010 - 08:40 .

[VirusCat]

She isn't done yet I will change alot on the left one so that she's more of an "upgraded" Aarya, not a "toolset-copy" which she sorta is atm (half an hour from when that pic was snapped, they are even more alike now)



I will change most things so that she resembles Aarya but still has her own personality.

[LadyAly]

No - I'm innocent like a white silvery glowing angel, ;P

I'M curious what comes out of her in the end VirusCat:)

Modifié par LadyAly, 16 avril 2010 - 08:45 .

[Petehog]

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

an alistair rework?

[meathook]

@ petehog & mochen, Thanks for your comments and advice on my character. I will try and apply the changes suggested and see where it takes me.

Both Anders and Alistair are improvements on the original designs imo. Very nice work. It must take some skill to copy faces like that in the toolset. I've only just begun to use it!

[Lady Jess]

LadyAly wrote...

No - I'm innocent like a white silvery glowing angel, ;P

*raises an eyebrow* Realllllllllly now:huh:

[Lady Jess]

The Alistair face is very handsome, without a doubt. But...I just can't put Alistair's inherent innocence with that face. He looks experienced beyond Al's personalty. But still a very good looking guy.

[VirusCat]

I have a new fav char (of those created by me, I mean). She might be a bit human in appearance but what do I care? She's stunning. I love her!

Meet Aaryanna:




Now for a more interesting project...
What it is? TBA!
("I'm not making chars anymore"... HAH :innocent:)

Modifié par VirusCat, 16 avril 2010 - 10:25 .

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

quite nice, Aaryanna.

[Pode8]

@viruscat - i love Aaryanna's look, probably cause i love Aarya..
                   I know i have no place to criticize but is there something wrong the left side of her face       
                   near her mouth? Idk it just looks weird, but very nicely done.
@Meathook- I love Flora! Keep the eyebrows!! I think they add a unique quality and alot of personality
                      to her. She reminds me of Kherington Payne from Fame
                    
                     

Notice the darker eyebrows aswell?

[Petehog]

Lanaya redesigned

Modifié par Petehog, 17 avril 2010 - 07:33 .

[meathook]

@ Pode8, Thanks! I saw mochen do the eyebrow thing with his/her design Aveline. I tried to apply it here. Maybe it's not so bad? Hmm. Oh I didn't realise I'd made Kherington Payne! haha



@ Petehog, Lanaya is ok..but her eyes seem a bit..."stretched" around her head? Just a though.

[LadyAly]

@meathook Probably only the view from the Camera - I mean the ankle ( or whatever it is spelled damn english *lol* )

@Petehog Both redesigned NPC are very well done - you took this pure innocent away I can't stand at some of the NPC -
If you have any advice about my *firefly* Daireen, please let me know.Its really appreciated - just keep in mind I must change it with the sliders

@VirusCat A very exotic beauty and I think she doesn't look like a human, not at all ! With her hollow cheeks her appearance is a little bit famished, though

Modifié par LadyAly, 17 avril 2010 - 08:59 .

[Petehog]

@LadyAly

Sure, I'd be willing to help.

Looking at the pictures you have provided, it is a bit difficult for me to tell.

If it's not too much to ask,  I would need a direct frontal screenshot and a side profile screenshot, sort of like a mugshot.  These two types of photographs are the best ways to discover ways to improve upon a design.

The way to do a frontal screenshot is to have your character face a wall and then use the mouse to rotate the camera.

The way to do a "side profile screenshot" is to have another character move behind your main character. Then rotate the camera until you can see a perfect half of your main PC's face.

Make sure that both screenshots are well lit.

Ok, it is really late now. Time for me to sleep.

Modifié par Petehog, 17 avril 2010 - 09:32 .