I'm an author.
I was molested as a child by my half brother.
I'm a rape victim.
I'm bi.
TMI? Tough.
I didn't find this game even remotely offensive.
This is a classic example of a person attributing the beliefs or actions of a character or characters to those of the author. People can argue the quality of the writing all day long, but when it comes to content, I find people miss the point a lot of the time.
I recently caught a ton of flak. For a story I won an award for no less. the protagonist was young, female, and vulnerable. She was abused by anything that came out of the woodwork throughout the story (she was woobified and in hindsight, I overdid it, but that's another topic). Her mother and sister were murdered, she was implanted with a device that slowly sapped all her energy, and the antagonist (the guy who murdered her family) generally came off as a psychopathic misogynist (he wasn't, but that's how it came off.. he wasn't all there, so who knows anyways). In the end, the protagonist sacrifices herself to undo it all (my one and only time travel story) by erasing herself from existence (its complicated).
Most of the feedback I have received has been overwhelmingly positive, but at the time, there was a small number of extremely angry, stupid people (especially self proclaimed amateur critics) who attributed Dr. Albright's actions to ME, who thought that *I* was a misogynist. That's way up there on the ridiculous conclusions board.
No.. I just wrote a really horrible person as a character. He turned out to be a very effective villain in most peoples' eyes, and made you absolutely hate him. His actions were not glorified, but condemned. Most people saw the protagonist as weak, meek and useless, when in actually, she is the one who is strong enough to organize the actions that lead to all this being undone despite her condition, both physical and emotional, and then has the strength to give up her very existence because she loved her family. Pretty strong IMO.
OP.. you are attributing the actions of characters to the beliefs of the writers, and it's one of the most horrible things you can do in this kind of situation, honestly. Jacob's loyalty mission wasn't about how freakin' cool it was to rape women and be the king of the island paradise, it was about how power corrupted him, and how abhorrent and inexcusable his actions were. Not one person thought it was okay, not Shepard (even with renegade options), not a squadmate. I can promise you the writers didn't think it was okay either.
As for race, well, you're just drawing parallels where none should exist. I can't comment more than that. When you create a new world with your imagination, you invariably takes bits and pieces from both the real world and other fiction you have known. I can pretty much guarantee that until you get to sit down with the lead writer for an hour or so and just talk to him, you don't really know WHAT he was drawing on when he made the Volus or the Hanar or anyone else.
Most of the time, when I see authors intentionally try to draw inspiration for a race, ethnicity or culture from a real life equivalent, it doesn't work out well. Why? Creative people. They like to put their own spin on things, and whether its the Volus, the Reapers, good guys or bad guys, the author loves them all and treats them with tender loving care. Just as an example, Viamontians from Asheron's Call. Explicitly stated to be based closely on Italian and French culture. Nothing remotely like either except for some naming conventions (and they're BLUE) lol.
Likewise, the lead writer on Mass Effect is Drew Karpyshyn. I have read both of the Mass Effect novels released so far. Both books strongly feature Kahlee Sanders, a strong female lead, and include Hendel Mitra, the coolest damned gay guy in the universe (BARRIER! ;O Sorry other gay guys, he's cooler).
Which leads me to the sexuality of the asari. The majority of alien models in the game are male, so it isn't a surprise that the majority of the asari you see with alien bondmates are with males. As mentioned in this thread, there is at least one plot important f/f pairing, and I see in a couple areas in both games a human female standing with an asari in a way that screams "We're dating!". I really feel like you're digging here, just to look for something to be offended about. You need to lighten up on that front.
Also, not ALL asari are strippers and dancers and stuff. So you go into afterlife and there are some asari shaking their asses.. In a sleazy club on a lawless world... This is a surprise? You don't see that on Illium. This isn't JUST for the male population of Omega ya know, I'm sure other asari find it pretty damned hot (even with the stigma against purebloods, which is itself a commentary on self hatred) -- but guess who is upstairs? Aria. An incredibly strong, competent, intelligent woman (asari) who has managed to keep the lawless, practically anarchical Omega under her thumb for CENTURIES. Oh, she manages to be pretty damned feminine too. Are the writers stupid and offensive for this? Don't **** with Aria
You can argue the quality of the actual storytelling until you are blue in the face.. as in, with how much clarity and precision was the story executed. How powerful or clear was the sense of rising action? Were we engaged with a clearly defined goal, and did we feel connected to it? You can argue all that and more, but I take issue with anyone attributing the actions of characters or story elements and attributing these as the opinion or political standing of the author or authors in question without really KNOWING.
Your post is a massive, knee-jerk assumption based your own (valid) personal beliefs.
Arguably, I always consider my story a success when I make my readers FEEL. That's what I write for, emotion, but I'm gonna go ahead and defend them this time and say you've pretty much looked RIGHT PAST what they were TRYING to show you, and directly to what you WANTED TO SEE.
Anywho, I'm outta this thread. I have more interesting and constructive things to do.
Modifié par Aisynia, 17 février 2010 - 10:34 .