Seconded! And put the link in your signature when done!videowiz186 wrote...
BLACKOUT228 wrote...
videowiz186 wrote...
BLACKOUT228 wrote...
Hey, does anyone remember the Captain of the Neema's name? I'm making some notes before I start writing a big Tali story tomorrow, and I can't seem to remember it, can't find it, and don't have a save file anywhere near that part in the game.
Who's perspective are you telling the story from?
Not 100 % sure yet what it's exactly going to be. Either Tali's or someone in a squad with her. Maybe even Kal'Reeger. Right now just collecting notes about the characters in the story so I make sure to keep everyone in character as best I can.
Well, if you do it from Tali's, then as a small request, can you tell what her thoughts are on shepard? I really liked how they had terminals placed throughout the mission that talked about shepard. I just thought that was neat. And good luck with you Tali fanfiction.
All Tali fans, read this! IT'S UP TO US TO KEEP TALI ALIVE!
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#4501
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:13
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Retour en haut
#4503
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:14
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epoch_ wrote...
well thats 4500...
Sweet merciful baby Jesus. I see great locks in our future.
#4504
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:14
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My current one is about Tali and Kal'Reegar.
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Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:15
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epoch_ wrote...
well thats 4500...
And growing. All for Tali.
#4506
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:15
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Then we shall start anew in a glorious fit of...of..."I won't quit!"SgTKilmor wrote...
epoch_ wrote...
well thats 4500...
Sweet merciful baby Jesus. I see great locks in our future.
EDIT: YEAH! ALL FOR TALI!
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#4507
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:16
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Pressly! What do the scanners say about the thread's Mass Effect field levels?!
#4508
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:17
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Here's chapter one in my fanfic "The Migrant Fleet" if anyone's interested.
"Damn that Veetor," an angry Prazza spat, folding his arms. "This is stupid, Tali'Zorah. We all know that."
Tali's gaze retracted from the window outlooking space, and she turned to meet Prazza's masked glare. "I am giving the orders, Prazza," she said, voice showing signs of irritability. "And I do not need your input."
Prazza scoffed, looking away. "Bosh'tet..." he muttered. Tali ignored the insult.
"Nira, how much further?"
"We are pulling into orbit now," Nira replied from the cockpit of the small shuttle. "Though there aren't any signs of life on the planet... I was led to believe Freedom's Progress was quite the populated human colony?"
"It is." Tali confirmed, unsure. "They aren't hailing us?"
"No," assured Nira. "Odd. I hope Veetor is okay."
Prazza removed himself from silence. "To hell with him," he began again. "Pulling us all the way from the Flotilla just to--"
There was a stop to his words, as Tali pointed her pistol towards his head. An awkward silence filled the shuttle, as the other Quarians that had been assigned to Tali's command watched silently. Prazza was not know for his tolerance. Nor was Tali, for that matter.
She slowly hoistered her weapon, glancing towards the planet below. Prazza remained silent for the rest of the ride.
* * * * *
The team of Quarian's exited the shuttle, stepping into the human city. There were no human,s Tali noted. And an uneasy feeling in the air, that sent chills even down Prazza's spine.
"What happened here?" asked Keema--a female Quarian, armed with an assault rifle.
"I don't know," Tali replied, stepping forward. Her team followed. As they progressed, they continued to notice the lack of humans. All of the lights remained on, as if they had just gotten up and left.
Prazza spoke up. "We shouldn't be here..." he noted, looking suspicously around him, jumping at any sound. Tali, again, ignored him. The team pulled up to the nearest building--a small, human home--Tali had assumed. The doors opened when they approached, and thermal rounds tore at the Quarian team from the other side.
"Bosh'tet!" Tali exclaimed, pressing her back against the side of the building in order to escape fire. Her team had already done the same. They removed themselve's from cover, and returned fire of their own, with the difference of dealing damage--a task their new attackers hadn't pulled off so well.
Prazza was the first to inspect the remains of their foes. "Mechs," he noted, examing them for any useful parts. Expendable, he thought.
The rest joined him. "Mechs?" Keema asked. "They shouldn't be programed to attack us."
"No," agreed Tali. "They shouldn't."
"I hope Veetor is okay," stated a worried Belek--a male amongst Tali's group.
"Keelah, this is stupid! Veetor is most likely dead, Tali'Zorah, can we not just go back to--"
"I'm in chrage, Prazza!" snapped Tali. "If you don't like it, go back and wait on the ship."
Prazza, again, suffered poison from Tali's sudden venom. He remained silent. And perhaps I should keep it this way. he thought glumly.
"Belek, Keema, take point." Tali ordered. "Prazza, Veran, you have the rear. The sooner we find Veetor, the better."
Her squad nodded in understanding, albeit a stone-faced Prazza. They spent about half an hour, walking slowly, carefully through the deserted city. Eventually, they came to a large gate. It was locked, and Tali growled in frustration.
"One moment," she stated, playing with her omni-tool in an attempt to overide the locks. A burst of fire sounded from behind, narrowly missing Belek's head. The team turned, only to see a dozen mechs heading their way, firing from their rifles. Their first instincts were to gain cover, and return gunfire.
"Damn it!" seethed Prazza.
"Hold on," Tali said hurriedly, still fiddling with her omni-tool. "Just a little longer..."
A large hiss escaped from the gate's pressurized doors, and it began to slowly open. Tali, along with the rest of her team, ran through, finding new cover until the doors sealed shut again, blocking them from any danger on the other side.
The Quarian's remained silent a few moments, collecting their thoughts. Finally, Prazza broke the silence:
"Damn that Veetor..."
"Damn that Veetor," an angry Prazza spat, folding his arms. "This is stupid, Tali'Zorah. We all know that."
Tali's gaze retracted from the window outlooking space, and she turned to meet Prazza's masked glare. "I am giving the orders, Prazza," she said, voice showing signs of irritability. "And I do not need your input."
Prazza scoffed, looking away. "Bosh'tet..." he muttered. Tali ignored the insult.
"Nira, how much further?"
"We are pulling into orbit now," Nira replied from the cockpit of the small shuttle. "Though there aren't any signs of life on the planet... I was led to believe Freedom's Progress was quite the populated human colony?"
"It is." Tali confirmed, unsure. "They aren't hailing us?"
"No," assured Nira. "Odd. I hope Veetor is okay."
Prazza removed himself from silence. "To hell with him," he began again. "Pulling us all the way from the Flotilla just to--"
There was a stop to his words, as Tali pointed her pistol towards his head. An awkward silence filled the shuttle, as the other Quarians that had been assigned to Tali's command watched silently. Prazza was not know for his tolerance. Nor was Tali, for that matter.
She slowly hoistered her weapon, glancing towards the planet below. Prazza remained silent for the rest of the ride.
* * * * *
The team of Quarian's exited the shuttle, stepping into the human city. There were no human,s Tali noted. And an uneasy feeling in the air, that sent chills even down Prazza's spine.
"What happened here?" asked Keema--a female Quarian, armed with an assault rifle.
"I don't know," Tali replied, stepping forward. Her team followed. As they progressed, they continued to notice the lack of humans. All of the lights remained on, as if they had just gotten up and left.
Prazza spoke up. "We shouldn't be here..." he noted, looking suspicously around him, jumping at any sound. Tali, again, ignored him. The team pulled up to the nearest building--a small, human home--Tali had assumed. The doors opened when they approached, and thermal rounds tore at the Quarian team from the other side.
"Bosh'tet!" Tali exclaimed, pressing her back against the side of the building in order to escape fire. Her team had already done the same. They removed themselve's from cover, and returned fire of their own, with the difference of dealing damage--a task their new attackers hadn't pulled off so well.
Prazza was the first to inspect the remains of their foes. "Mechs," he noted, examing them for any useful parts. Expendable, he thought.
The rest joined him. "Mechs?" Keema asked. "They shouldn't be programed to attack us."
"No," agreed Tali. "They shouldn't."
"I hope Veetor is okay," stated a worried Belek--a male amongst Tali's group.
"Keelah, this is stupid! Veetor is most likely dead, Tali'Zorah, can we not just go back to--"
"I'm in chrage, Prazza!" snapped Tali. "If you don't like it, go back and wait on the ship."
Prazza, again, suffered poison from Tali's sudden venom. He remained silent. And perhaps I should keep it this way. he thought glumly.
"Belek, Keema, take point." Tali ordered. "Prazza, Veran, you have the rear. The sooner we find Veetor, the better."
Her squad nodded in understanding, albeit a stone-faced Prazza. They spent about half an hour, walking slowly, carefully through the deserted city. Eventually, they came to a large gate. It was locked, and Tali growled in frustration.
"One moment," she stated, playing with her omni-tool in an attempt to overide the locks. A burst of fire sounded from behind, narrowly missing Belek's head. The team turned, only to see a dozen mechs heading their way, firing from their rifles. Their first instincts were to gain cover, and return gunfire.
"Damn it!" seethed Prazza.
"Hold on," Tali said hurriedly, still fiddling with her omni-tool. "Just a little longer..."
A large hiss escaped from the gate's pressurized doors, and it began to slowly open. Tali, along with the rest of her team, ran through, finding new cover until the doors sealed shut again, blocking them from any danger on the other side.
The Quarian's remained silent a few moments, collecting their thoughts. Finally, Prazza broke the silence:
"Damn that Veetor..."
#4509
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:17
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Just_mike wrote...
Pressly! What do the scanners say about the thread's Mass Effect field levels?!
Too early.
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Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:17
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The Gay Warden wrote...
My current one is about Tali and Kal'Reegar.
How far have you gotten on that anyhow? I really liked the first chapter. I would write something, but I'm one of those people with writers block 24/7
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Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:17
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Just_mike wrote...
Pressly! What do the scanners say about the thread's Mass Effect field levels?!
IT'S OVER 4,500!!!!
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Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:17
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*BOOM* "Pressly!" *BOOM*
They won't shut us down as long as we remain on topic.
They won't shut us down as long as we remain on topic.
#4513
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:17
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Any got a side shot of Tali and still able to partially make out her face through mask? need it for picture reference.
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Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:18
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Loooking for a high res screen of Tali pointing her pistol at Legion if anyone can come across one, the Phoenix Shepard yelling objection is my current background 
#4515
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:18
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SgTKilmor wrote...
The Gay Warden wrote...
My current one is about Tali and Kal'Reegar.
How far have you gotten on that anyhow? I really liked the first chapter. I would write something, but I'm one of those people with writers block 24/7
I got chapter two down, but I'll post it tomorrow.
Still needs patching.
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Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:19
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I always wanted to make a screenshot joke with Garrus, Shepard and Liara going to fight benezia, like this.
Shepard: Garrus, what does your scouter say about Benezia's Power level?
*Screen shows benezia's power level screen with numbers drawn in, incrementing by 3000 each*
garrus: It's Over NINE THOUSAAAAAND!
Shepard: WHAT 9000?! There's no way that can be right!
Shepard: Garrus, what does your scouter say about Benezia's Power level?
*Screen shows benezia's power level screen with numbers drawn in, incrementing by 3000 each*
garrus: It's Over NINE THOUSAAAAAND!
Shepard: WHAT 9000?! There's no way that can be right!
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#4518
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:20
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I'm just starting, compiling notes and what not. I have a LOT of free time, so my story probably won't be short. Need something to pass the time right? I can only do some much in this thread.
#4519
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:21
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Sageless Ranger wrote...
Any got a side shot of Tali and still able to partially make out her face through mask? need it for picture reference.
Google images is your best bet.
The Gay Warden wrote...
I got chapter two down, but I'll post it tomorrow.
Sounds good, feel free to PM it to me, since I'll have trouble finding it in this overly active thread
antilles333 wrote...
Loooking for a high res screen of Tali pointing her pistol at Legion if anyone can come across one, the Phoenix Shepard yelling objection is my current background
Kimo...something posted one a while ago for you...
#4520
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:23
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Wish Bio hosted a chat room...
So many comments washed away by flooding replies.
So many comments washed away by flooding replies.
#4521
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:23
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The Gay Warden wrote...
Just_mike wrote...
Pressly! What do the scanners say about the thread's Mass Effect field levels?!
IT'S OVER 4,500!!!!
WHICH IS HALF OF 9000!!!!!
#4522
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:23
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I got chapter two down, but I'll post it tomorrow.
Feel free to pm me too. I really like it so far.
#4523
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:24
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BLACKOUT228 wrote...
I'm just starting, compiling notes and what not. I have a LOT of free time, so my story probably won't be short. Need something to pass the time right? I can only do some much in this thread.
Yeah, plus the more user content we get for the thread, the longer it will become, so there's always something to talk about.
Long live Tali
#4524
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:24
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Impressive....most impressive.
#4525
Posté 05 février 2010 - 04:24
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BACK ON TOPIC PLEASE! Fun as the reference is...
Restate my support for Tali on the Normandy as a squadmate and for a happy ending.
Restate my support for Tali on the Normandy as a squadmate and for a happy ending.
