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[Nyltia]

Guess it does suck when they don't say much more than that. But all you can really do is to keep at it and hope that someone smart comes along and offers some constructive advice. *shrugs* Anyways, I think I'll go dig out my sketchbook from the bottom of some box and prove that 'anyone can learn' theory wrong again.
-Edit-
*whimper* I should never do that again.
But I'm working on a new Joker fic, but I has some questions...see it's another oneshot (again *cringe*) but it's set after the Normandy SR1 is destroyed. Joker's out of the Alliance, and I wanna put him in some Citadel club (Chora's Den probably) getting drunk, y'know, drowning away his sorrows and such, and some Asari dancer tries to cheer him up. What I can't decide is if Joker will let her but not really get into it, or if he just yells at her or something.
What also sucks is that in my head I can hear him swearing, but I can't write it. (I hate swearing )
Ideas would be muchly appreciated, or anything really, ^-^;;

Modifié par Nyltia, 21 janvier 2011 - 08:08 .

[NamiraWilhelm]

edited

i never know how to review someone really. They say they want contructive criticism but do they want it via pm or are they okay with it being on the page *shrugs*

More on topic... he so perdy
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*strokes screen*

Modifié par NamiraWilhelm, 21 janvier 2011 - 05:03 .

[Trapper_920]

Its hard to really explain my point of view but its one thing to say "Looks great!" or some other complement but its something entirely different to only say "You have potential".



Potential for what? That is seriously thee worst feed back word to use with out some justifiable statement to back it up. So what needs to be fixed?



Better example is: "You have potential but the way you do your dialog needs some work. You may want to try ...". "You also might want to try ..."



Does that make sense?

[Vicki Taylor]

 We need more awesomeness on new page! *poof*

[Trapper_920]

Wow your glowing today! LOL

[NamiraWilhelm]

Joker loves super-happy-fun-time

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*sighs* we're a productive bunch aint we lol

[Trapper_920]

hey its Friday... I think...

[NamiraWilhelm]

Oh yeah! Normal social protocol requires that i go out dancing and possibly become intoxicated in some form.
But fudge it. Everytime i try to leave Joker pulls this face.
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awww wook at the widdle Pilot

[Nyltia]

*hugs Joker*
This is pretty much me whenever someone tries to get me to get out of the house...


-Edit- Lookit I figured out how to make a motivational. Still lame though.

Modifié par Nyltia, 21 janvier 2011 - 11:37 .

[Sorrel]

It's coming along. Slowly. Building the background out of bits. No shading yet.

[Vicki Taylor]

Heeey guys I found something I did some time ago.

[Nyltia]

Cake?

*hugs poor Joker* There there, it'll be alright...

[NamiraWilhelm]

haha Wejki, maybe we need I Support Joker Mourning Loss Of Cookies In ME sigs?



Shepard - Joker, i wanna talk about when i died

Joker - I've never suffered such loss

Shepard - Aww Joker its cool, im back-

Joker - look at my empty cookie jar!!

[Nyltia]

Oh darn, I thought it was cake. ^-^;;

Joker: "Let us have a moment of silence for the tragic loss of my cookies..."

[NamiraWilhelm]

Actually it does look like cake, i just assumed it was cookies since they're always being passed around in here haha

[Nyltia]

I thought it was the whole 'the cake is a lie' thing. Cookies are better though. ^-^

[Vicki Taylor]

'The cake is a lie' thing is hilarious Sten rockzzz.

Yeah we like cookies. A loooot, actually. At least I do D:

Heh, Nam you're full of ideas today! Gotta do these " I Support Joker Mourning Loss Of Cookies In ME sigs" :3

[NamiraWilhelm]

haha, aww i meant to write ME3, but you get the jist.



i like cookies, but they dont like my ass



Where are the Jokers hats due out mid jan then lol, i want to take wear it on holiday!

[Nyltia]

Wait wait wait, what Joker hats??

[NamiraWilhelm]

one moment dear, i shall link you to the page!

http://social.biowar...0/index/5253110

third item down, it used to say Joker style but now it just says SR2 hat

If i get sunstroke because it hasnt been released, itll be biowares fault xD

Modifié par NamiraWilhelm, 22 janvier 2011 - 11:55 .

[Nyltia]

Oh. My. God. I must have it.

Squee there's gonna be plushies!!!! I can die of happy.

Now all I need is a job where they actually give me shifts. >.<

[NamiraWilhelm]

I think having less money is a good thing when you geek out over something that has sooo much merchandise. Seriously, you do not want to know what ive spent at the biostore recently, I dont even want to know.

Modifié par NamiraWilhelm, 22 janvier 2011 - 12:03 .

[Vicki Taylor]

NamiraWilhelm wrote...


i like cookies, but they dont like my ass

LMAO you killed me nao xD
Joker hats! Nam do you remember those names for children? I mean, Norman Dee and stuff xD
Yeah BioWare is sucking everything from fans - souls, time, goddamned LIVES and monies. Screw them <_<

[NamiraWilhelm]

Haha yeah i remember!



im playing sims 3 and ive made me and Joker, when we finally have a baby im gonna call it Norman-dee!!

[Nyltia]

But I needs the money! I'd rather be broke with a lot of Joker stuff than have money and not having anything fun. The only thing I've bought from the Bioware store was an N7 jacket, and being the nice girl that I am, gave it to my brother as a birthday present.

I must has the hat! And the plushies! And hopefully a Joker litho! I wanna be geeky happy! *curses at her work for being lame and not giving her work for a month*