royceclemens wrote...
I dunno, personally I'm a little ambivalent on whether or not Jack's backstory should come out. I kinda get upset when a story shoehorns in a ton if exposition for just one character, because that's basically waiting out the clock, making the story arbitrarily longer. If Jack point-blank told me that her past wasn't any of her Goddamned business, I'd accept it and move on.
I'm more concerned with what happens next, as opposed to what already happened off-screen which, if it was really important, would be in the game already. What happens next would be much, much harder to screw up, as Jack is so defined and yet her motivations are in a state of change.
I'm with Uncle Royce on this one. Personally, no matter how compelling and interesting knowing Jack's past might be, I for one do not want to see her go through half of the things we know she's endured. No matter how much it made her the character she is, it'd just wring my guts out to have to experience Jack's story in full. It's better we just know bad things happened and we never see them.
To write an 'Illustrated Man' for Jack would be just overblown and in the end worthless. To see all the light inside a character getting mired under tons of ****, just to see how they got to where they are in the here and now is, while certainly an experience, nowhere near as fulfilling as seeing the layers of **** come off and seeing the light in there still shining. It's why episodes 1, 2 and 3 of the
Star Wars saga seem like pushing a bowling ball for miles with your nose. We never
really wanted to see how Darth Vader became Darth Vader, we wanted to see him become Luke's father again; we wanted to see how that kick in the guts
"I AM your father," becomes something poignant, and how that admission isn't just a head**** for the hero, it's someone throwing out a lifeline to someone he loves. Love, from a story's murderous genocidal madman - that's why it ****ing works so well. It makes him like us. And we get the ultimate payoff that the story's biggest villain can save the day and that the lifeline was for himself too. God, I said something good about "The Saga"... and I ****ing hate those movies...

I think that as much as we'd like to know more about our girl (because that's almost what she's become; a queer sort of surrogate imaginary daughter we'll get a kick out of seeing something good happen to... this projection of ours is disturbingly
wholesome), we'd much rather see who she turns into. Kinda fits the projection, doesn't it? Wanting to see your kids achive their dreams and hopes. Have adventures... become new people. Maybe learning a snippet here or there as part of a journey to somewhere new, sure, but the whole thing would be like trying to eat a 17-course Chinese banquet by yourself - uncomfortable and ultimately messy.
adriano_c wrote...
Oh, concerning Jacob's romance story. I had been seeing a lot of references to an apparent line of his about a "priiiize", so I finally looked it up on youtube to see what's what. Wow. How disturbing and uncomfortable was that? To me, it felt like I was watching some sleazy made-for-TV movie and I had to close it, lol.
I keep having to get up and defend the guy... some men are ****ing clueless as to how the **** that comes out of their mouths sounds. All he's trying to say is he's putting himself out there and risking getting blown out, but the "priiiize" is worth the risk. All it is is a cheesy, testosterone-overloaded version of what Garrus does. Or Jack for that matter. Hell, most of the love interests come to Shep somewhat doubtful of how they'll be received. Jacob's line is just 100% pure Bloke - you can either let it slide or get hung up on it.
Trust me, I've heard some real-life classics over the years, and hell, it's not just men that do it. Some women spout some doozeys in an attempt to get intimate with someone, or to say something cute and sexy that ends up settling on the ears like pissing razor blades settles on the bladder. At the end of the day, he's kinda hot and he's at least built like a man, while Kaidan is built like a boy. Definate case of wheeling out a painful line of your own, Femme-Shep... something along the lines of
"Shut up and start licking."