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yorkj86 wrote...

Jack helping Sole-Survivor Shepard with his PTSD.  Their relationship can't be all about Shepard helping Jack.  It has to be about the ways Jack helps Shepard, too, apart from their physical companionship.  It would be very revealing of her to hear her internal monologues about the ways she thinks she can help Shepard.

To give you an idea: My Shepard's nightmares about Akuze changed since being resurrected.  Previously, he would see the terrified faces of his soldiers as they panicked about the Thresher Maw.  After having been brought back, he sees the faces of his soldiers looking at him with contempt and disgust, for dealing with Cerberus.  He doesn't understand why they're angry with him, because it's not his fault that he's in this situation, but he's stricken with such terrible survivor's guilt that his nightmares don't need to be rational. 

I came up with this idea after reading your Hannah & Jack fanfic, where Jack tells Shepard's mother that she sometimes wakes up at night to find him awake and physically paralyzed by his grief.

Too grimdark?


This, very much.

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New Jack sketch in the making -

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axl99 wrote...

New Jack sketch in the making -
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Her legs look really powerful there.   I like it :lol:  Will she be surrounded by a biotic corona, or will it just be on her hand?

Modifié par yorkj86, 29 avril 2010 - 11:23 .


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Probably that and more. You'll just have to see once it's done :D.

Modifié par axl99, 29 avril 2010 - 11:28 .


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axl99 wrote...

Probably that and more. You'll just have to see once it's done :D.


FINE!   I didn't want to see it anyway.   Hmph.  :bandit:

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Mondo47 wrote...

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Mondo47 wrote...

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(hope we're not going too off topic here)




You're telling me! I created a monster! ;)

So, about those Bears... Jack! I mean Jack!

Anyone have any requests for a scene, after the last one was received so well (and considering I'd probably have never thought of it without someone requesting it :D )?

Oh, and not discussing tattoos - I'm already toying with something like that already...


How about a scene where Jack is conversing with other squadmates. It'd be interesting because they're all intimidated by her and try to keep their distance from her, but now she's Shepard's girlfriend and they all like Shepard, so they feel like they have to talk to her when she's around even though they really don't want to :lol:.


I did start one like that, though it was much less serious, revolving around the aftermath of a birthday celebration for Shepard... you know the way a party never dies in one fell swoop unless the cops turn up; they die by slow degrees as the morning wears on and fewer and fewer people cling on to conciousness? Jack, Grunt and Miranda discussing why Jack gave Shep nothing for his birthday (somewhat drunkenly)... it was shaping up to be rather silly, and it had a mildly lame punchline. I might go back to it, might not. But I have wondered about things like that... Grunt would be given a wide berth by virtue of being a Krogan (and the resultant stereotypical reactions of other species) and Jack would be by virtue of being a "psychopath." And both are strong warriors (and have always been together at the Rite for all my Sheps so far... so it's canon for me for Jack to be truly considered part of Grunt's krant)... it's only right for them to actually get on better with each other than anyone else.

I'll think on it... any other suggestions?


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I think the Jack/Chakwas one might be a goer... I'll give it a spin tomorrow I think!

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Mondo47 wrote...

I think the Jack/Chakwas one might be a goer... I'll give it a spin tomorrow I think!

Clearly Jack will need to chug her entire stash of ice brandy.

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Mondo47 wrote...

I think the Jack/Chakwas one might be a goer... I'll give it a spin tomorrow I think!

Hey, I must have missed that post Mondo, because I was actually thinking along the sames lines a minute ago and was going to suggest it.:wizard:

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MHRazer wrote...

Mondo47 wrote...

I think the Jack/Chakwas one might be a goer... I'll give it a spin tomorrow I think!

Clearly Jack will need to chug her entire stash of ice brandy.


The only issue I see with it is that the ending of it will be a foregone conclusion... regardless of how much Jack would not trust doctors, everyone ends up in love with the Doc. Too nice by far ^_^

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Mondo47 wrote...

I think the Jack/Chakwas one might be a goer... I'll give it a spin tomorrow I think!


Oh Jack and Chakwas would be a goer alright. Wink wink nudge nudge know what I mean?

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yfhfrg wrote...

Mondo47 wrote...

I think the Jack/Chakwas one might be a goer... I'll give it a spin tomorrow I think!


Oh Jack and Chakwas would be a goer alright. Wink wink nudge nudge know what I mean?


Say no more!

Of course, not to add to an already sturdy workload, some more NWJ would be nice.  I'm feening for a simple yet elegant grasp of prose.  Because right now I'm reading Dickens and I need a break.

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Mondo47 wrote...

MHRazer wrote...

Mondo47 wrote...
I think the Jack/Chakwas one might be a goer... I'll give it a spin tomorrow I think!

Clearly Jack will need to chug her entire stash of ice brandy.

The only issue I see with it is that the ending of it will be a foregone conclusion... regardless of how much Jack would not trust doctors, everyone ends up in love with the Doc. Too nice by far ^_^

How about this Mondo?

Perhaps Jack goes to see the doctor about her headaches, or something else similar.  While she is being examined, the doctor's pleasing bedside manner allows Jack to open up a little to her.  Jack delves into her feelings to a degree with Dr. Chockwas.

Possibly even opening up more material for future writing?

Modifié par JohnnyDollar, 30 avril 2010 - 12:56 .


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Something tells me Mondo's Jack canon is going to be more satisfying than what BioWare comes up with. Call it a hunch.

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JohnnyDollar wrote...

Mondo47 wrote...

MHRazer wrote...

Mondo47 wrote...
I think the Jack/Chakwas one might be a goer... I'll give it a spin tomorrow I think!

Clearly Jack will need to chug her entire stash of ice brandy.

The only issue I see with it is that the ending of it will be a foregone conclusion... regardless of how much Jack would not trust doctors, everyone ends up in love with the Doc. Too nice by far ^_^

How about this Mondo?

Perhaps Jack goes to see the doctor about her headaches, or something else similar.  While she is being examined, the doctor's pleasing bedside manner allows Jack to open up a little to her.  Jack delves into her feelings to a degree with Dr. Chockwas.

Possibly even opening up more material for future writing?


That seems too similar to a shrink and patient relationship, which Jack has said she doesn't like. Sure there could be some opening up, but having Dr. Chakwas ask Jack about her feelings while she lays on a bed would seem too... simple.

royceclemens wrote...

Something tells me Mondo's Jack
canon is going to be more satisfying than what BioWare comes up with.
Call it a hunch.


Well Jack's writer has obviously done an incredible job so far, which is why we're all big fans of Jack. So I'm sure they'll come up with something great for Jack in ME3.

Modifié par Jackal904, 30 avril 2010 - 01:38 .


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Jackal904 wrote...

JohnnyDollar wrote...

Mondo47 wrote...

MHRazer wrote...

Mondo47 wrote...
I think the Jack/Chakwas one might be a goer... I'll give it a spin tomorrow I think!

Clearly Jack will need to chug her entire stash of ice brandy.

The only issue I see with it is that the ending of it will be a foregone conclusion... regardless of how much Jack would not trust doctors, everyone ends up in love with the Doc. Too nice by far ^_^

How about this Mondo?

Perhaps Jack goes to see the doctor about her headaches, or something else similar.  While she is being examined, the doctor's pleasing bedside manner allows Jack to open up a little to her.  Jack delves into her feelings to a degree with Dr. Chockwas.

Possibly even opening up more material for future writing?


That seems too similar to a shrink and patient relationship, which Jack has said she doesn't like. Sure there could be some opening up, but having Dr. Chakwas ask Jack about her feelings while she lays on a bed would seem too... simple.

That wasn't exactly what I had in mind.  More like a friendship that evolves
between the two.  A person that Jack can go talk to about her feelings
for Shepard, or other fellings that she has.  A way for Mondo to get into her mind and reveal it to us, while not necessarily sharing all of it with Shepard, but still communicating it to someone else.

Edit:  grammar

Modifié par JohnnyDollar, 30 avril 2010 - 03:31 .


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Subject Zero, Jack, will be in some jail, and captain jack sparrow will bust her out. after, they go for rum

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 I bring a Jack pic 

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That face is just.........so.........:pinched:

Modifié par Razorsedge820, 30 avril 2010 - 02:03 .


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Razorsedge820 wrote...


That face is just.........so.........:pinched:


Feels like the dimensions are a bit off. 

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Mondo had this huge post about how it was possible Jack didn't know right from wrong during her time on Teltin and even accepted the horrible things done to her.

Chakwas could remind Jack of someone in her past who more or less gave her that twisted sense of justice, or at least tried to instill something resembling a moral compass in her.

Modifié par axl99, 30 avril 2010 - 02:25 .


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^ Nice. But is she bleeding out of her eyes and mouth?

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See, now I'm wondering what it would be like if Jack was a vampire on TRUE BLOOD.



Well, that show would be less awful, so I approve of these thoughts.

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royceclemens wrote...

See, now I'm wondering what it would be like if Jack was a vampire on TRUE BLOOD.

Well, that show would be less awful, so I approve of these thoughts.


I'd gladly trade Sookie for Jack myself. I think she and Bill would make a nice couple.

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royceclemens wrote...

Something tells me Mondo's Jack canon is going to be more satisfying than what BioWare comes up with. Call it a hunch.


Maybe, I just hope they sometimes lurk in our thread and check out Mondo's fantastic work (sign her up!) Mondo's is the first blog I've decided subscribing to, with her fanfics I'm able to hear Mark Meer and Courtenay Taylor say those lines.  Jack and Shepard - Walking After You is still my favorite...probably cuz I romanced Ash in ME1 and I could picture that scene. :bandit:

For any recent posters who haven't read this one by Mondo, enjoy :wizard:

social.bioware.com/566323/blog/3970/

Modifié par Ultai, 30 avril 2010 - 02:26 .