I did enjoy. Nice to see Pinnacle Station makes for a romantic getaway.Urdaniel wrote...
Time once more to beg your indulgence and thank you for your time and comments. Day 2 is up (or should be shortly at any rate):
Things Worth Keeping
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Into the Bad Girl: Jack Fans
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 03:42
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 05:20
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Urdaniel wrote...
Time once more to beg your indulgence and thank you for your time and comments. Day 2 is up (or should be shortly at any rate):
Things Worth Keeping
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This is an improvement. The conversation flows much smoother. I like how you keep things from being too easy for them by making them a good but imperfect match, which Jack and Shepard are. The part where Jack has nothing to say to Shepard telling her about his awful memories and nightmares, except for a comment about his breath, was good. Jack hates the shrink type, and she doesn't want Shepard trying to be her shrink. She doesn't want to be his shrink, either, and it'll be interesting to see how they deal with their issues together without the process being so structured and therapeutic.
When reading Jack's dialogue, I heard her voice in my head, though there were some times where the dialogue was still a little bit stuff, and it pulled me out of the immersion.
I like how their relationship is rocky enough at points that it seems as if Shepard is "whipped" (I hate that term), but it makes you think about whether or not Jack is actually being possessive of Shepard.
"Didn't say you couldn't look. Just to stop pretending you aren't." Definitely something Jack would say, and definitely how Jack would say it. Good stuff.
Also, I learned a new word today. "Nipple rouge". I had no idea.
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 05:35
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yorkj86 wrote...
Someone on /v/ took this screenshot. Consider this my apology for posting the picture of Jack with hair. Jack's smile <3
Now this should have been Jacks reaction when she first see Shepard after the Suicide mission.
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 05:39
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Hey folks thread just passed 5K mark, drinks on us! *pours round for everyone* 
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 09:43
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^ nice pic!
Although strangely, I like Jack's renegade 'romance' more. It's not that I'm mean like that or anything, i jsut felt that Jack's paramance seemed rather overdone.
*Hides under a rock and awaits beratement*
Although strangely, I like Jack's renegade 'romance' more. It's not that I'm mean like that or anything, i jsut felt that Jack's paramance seemed rather overdone.
*Hides under a rock and awaits beratement*
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 10:03
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Pacifien wrote...
I wouldn't mind one that concentrates on an all out raid of one of the Illusive Man's other Cerberus facilities -- the ones that manufactures his cigarettes for him. Take that, Illusive Man.
/signed
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 01:24
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Urdaniel wrote...
Time once more to beg your indulgence and thank you for your time and comments. Day 2 is up (or should be shortly at any rate):
Things Worth Keeping
Please enjoy.
You don't have to beg, I will glady read it
. Right now I have to get ready for classes, but I look forward to reading it when I get back home.
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 01:45
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Hey, guys. Remember two games called Effect 1 and 2, where we kicked the asses of the "bad" Geth, and told TIM to get lost?
Bioware doesn't.
http://kotaku.com/55...oadable-content
Bioware doesn't.
http://kotaku.com/55...oadable-content
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 05:17
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Well, it's my understanding the Geth you encounter in this DLC aren't True Geth or Heretic Geth, but ones that are being experimented on along with humans.yorkj86 wrote...
Hey, guys. Remember two games called Effect 1 and 2, where we kicked the asses of the "bad" Geth, and told TIM to get lost?
Bioware doesn't.
http://kotaku.com/55...oadable-content
How that place could not be another Cerberus facility confounds me. I mean, I know there are plenty of evil organizations out there, but come on... that's, like, right up the Illusive Man's alley. And I want to blow up more of his stuff.
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 05:19
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We didn't destroy or rewrite all of the Heretics in Legion's loyalty mission. Just most of them - those who were not connected to the database were not affected.
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Pacifien wrote...
Well, it's my understanding the Geth you encounter in this DLC aren't True Geth or Heretic Geth, but ones that are being experimented on along with humans.yorkj86 wrote...
Hey, guys. Remember two games called Effect 1 and 2, where we kicked the asses of the "bad" Geth, and told TIM to get lost?
Bioware doesn't.
http://kotaku.com/55...oadable-content
How that place could not be another Cerberus facility confounds me. I mean, I know there are plenty of evil organizations out there, but come on... that's, like, right up the Illusive Man's alley. And I want to blow up more of his stuff.
If it does turn out to be Cerberus, I hope Sole-Survivor Sheps get an extra line in there.
(They won't.)
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 06:46
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We didn't destroy or rewrite all of the Heretics in Legion's loyalty mission. Just most of them - those who were not connected to the database were not affected.
Yeah, that reminds me of the PS3 bug some months ago. I can imagine a Geth newsletter saying "do not connect to the database until we fix the problem".
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 07:44
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Urdaniel wrote...
Time once more to beg your indulgence and thank you for your time and comments. Day 2 is up (or should be shortly at any rate):
Things Worth Keeping
Please enjoy.
Loved it. That was great, and such an improvement from the first chapter. I agree with York how it's very nice and realistic that they're not some perfect couple, they still have their rough moments. I thought the dialogue was very, very good. I cracked up at the part on pinnacle station where Jack was like, "Yes, we **** all the time!" That is so something I would expect from Jack in that situation. I think you do an excellent job at capturing her character. Everything about it was amazing, except two things. Jack kind of came off as an alcoholic in the beginning when she's asking Shepard where the booze was in the morning. And I rejected your reality of a visor-wearing Jack, and substituted in my own image of a visor-less Jack
. I hate that visor so much.Oh, and that dream scene in the beginning was great. When they found out the mysterious figure Shepard shot had tattoos, I was like, "Oh ****."
So again, great job
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 07:51
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EffectedByTheMasses wrote...
^ nice pic!
Although
strangely, I like Jack's renegade 'romance' more. It's not that I'm mean
like that or anything, i jsut felt that Jack's paramance seemed rather
overdone.
*Hides under a rock and awaits beratement*
*Yanks you out from under the rock and kicks your ass* Just kidding
. I'm not sure what you mean by overdone, but Jack's "renegade romance" isn't much of a romance. It doesn't count as an actual relationship, and she kinda hates you if you have casual sex with her because you fit into her belief that everyone is seflish and just wants to use her.yorkj86 wrote...
Hey, guys. Remember two games called
Effect 1 and 2, where we kicked the asses of the "bad" Geth, and told
TIM to get lost?
Bioware doesn't.
http://kotaku.com/55...oadable-content
I think that sounds pretty kool. I just hope that it lasts us more than an hour. At least 2-3 hours would be very nice.
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 07:53
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If it's worth anything, Casey said the DLC will take from 2 hours to 2 and a half hours.
Also renegade "romance" = fail. It's just sex, and you're proving her opinion about people.
Also renegade "romance" = fail. It's just sex, and you're proving her opinion about people.
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 08:45
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Epantiras wrote...
I can imagine a Geth newsletter saying "do not connect to the database until we fix the problem".
Funny...seriously!
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 09:14
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I love how Jack is the only human LI who doesn't bore me to tears.
*supports Jack* *leaves before he gets flamed for Tali sig*
*supports Jack* *leaves before he gets flamed for Tali sig*
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 09:16
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Hey now. I have a Tali avatar and no one seems to care. You can stay and talk about Jack, this thread is pretty chill.
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Odd. I seem to remember Jack fans hating Tali fans. Sorry for making stupid assumptions. But, yes. Jack is awesome. One of the few squadmates who gets to use finger quotes as well.Collider wrote...
Hey now. I have a Tali avatar and no one seems to care. You can stay and talk about Jack, this thread is pretty chill.
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 09:38
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Aw, I don't think there would be any hating of fans around these parts. Hating on Miranda maybe. And even then, it's less hate than mock relentlessly until Miranda and Jack stop denying the love.Mukora wrote...
Odd. I seem to remember Jack fans hating Tali fans. Sorry for making stupid assumptions. But, yes. Jack is awesome. One of the few squadmates who gets to use finger quotes as well.
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 10:44
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Why there isn't any women IRL with shaved head ? Alot of guys find it attractive, I've seen the normal long thick hair too many times. Jack proofs that it's possible to pull off the shaved head look.
Well there is, but they are always some ****ed up anarchists,skinheads or mental hospital patients. Or lesbians.
Been trying to find a shaved head woman since I saw Jack for the first time, saw one shaved girl in a bar but she actually was a mental hospital patient
Well there is, but they are always some ****ed up anarchists,skinheads or mental hospital patients. Or lesbians.
Been trying to find a shaved head woman since I saw Jack for the first time, saw one shaved girl in a bar but she actually was a mental hospital patient
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Maybe because most women, you know, like their hair. And most men like women to have hair. Jack pulls off the shaved head look, but I don't think all women could on the same level.
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She pulls off the look because she's facially absolutely stunning. Most normal people can't pull off odd looks because they're normal to begin with.mawdudi wrote...
Why there isn't any women IRL with shaved head ? Alot of guys find it attractive, I've seen the normal long thick hair too many times. Jack proofs that it's possible to pull off the shaved head look.
Well there is, but they are always some ****ed up anarchists,skinheads or mental hospital patients. Or lesbians.
Been trying to find a shaved head woman since I saw Jack for the first time, saw one shaved girl in a bar but she actually was a mental hospital patient
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 10:59
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Collider wrote...
Maybe because most women, you know, like their hair. And most men like women to have hair. Jack pulls off the shaved head look, but I don't think all women could on the same level.
I've always hated it when women shave their hair. They think they're being unique or something, I don't know. What I do know is that they look stupid. Only two females in the universe can pull off the shaved head, Jack, and Natalie Portman. And I would never want Jack to change her hairdo. Natalie Portman looks good with a shaved head, but I prefer her with short hair like she has in her SNL rap video.
Mukora wrote...
Odd. I seem toCollider wrote...
Hey now. I
have a Tali avatar and no one seems to care. You can stay and talk
about Jack, this thread is pretty chill.
remember Jack fans hating Tali fans. Sorry for making stupid
assumptions. But, yes. Jack is awesome. One of the few squadmates who
gets to use finger quotes as well.
Nah we don't hate Tali fans. It's just that a few trolls that have been in here are Tali fans, so we they make us bash Tali and her fans
. I garauntee no one here will tear you apart for being a fan of another character. As long as you don't make a comment like, "lawl Jack sux!", then you're good .
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Posté 13 mai 2010 - 11:05
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Yea I know most women couldn't pull off Jack look, they would look like ridicilous. Just like most men couldn't pull off Riddick look, they would look like bald eggs.
But there are many women who could pull it off, but they don't even wanna test it. Mainly cos they are afrad of reactions from other people I guess. And they love their hair too much like u said.
IMO everybody should atleast once in their life try long hair and short hair. I know people who have had long/short hair their whole life, but once tested the other end they liked it(and others too) and never went back.
But there are many women who could pull it off, but they don't even wanna test it. Mainly cos they are afrad of reactions from other people I guess. And they love their hair too much like u said.
IMO everybody should atleast once in their life try long hair and short hair. I know people who have had long/short hair their whole life, but once tested the other end they liked it(and others too) and never went back.
