What does that say about the writer(s) that covered Jacob's/FemShep's romance? Obviously they need to make a change wouldn't you say?yorkj86 wrote...
I don't really think it takes a romance novel author to realize that "But the priiiiize" is a bad way to start an intimate scene. Just reading the scripting of the scene will do. Besides, I'm sure there's a lot of completely disposable shlock out there that's better than Jacob's final romance scene, anyway.
Into the Bad Girl: Jack Fans
#8076
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 06:13
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
#8077
Guest_yorkj86_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 06:23
Guest_yorkj86_*
JohnnyDollar wrote...
What does that say about the writer(s) that covered Jacob's/FemShep's romance? Obviously they need to make a change wouldn't you say?
It could tell us several things. It could tell us that he/she has no business writing romance scenes. In the extreme case, it could tell us that the writer needs to be replaced.
I just don't understand. Did the writer actually think that the writing for the scene was good?
Modifié par yorkj86, 06 juin 2010 - 06:25 .
#8078
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 06:41
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
I have honestly wondered this myself for a while now. "What the hell was he/she thinking". I haven't done the romance, but I watched the video of the love scene and various dialog between the two. The voice director plays a role in this also.yorkj86 wrote...
It could tell us several things. It could tell us that he/she has no business writing romance scenes. In the extreme case, it could tell us that the writer needs to be replaced.
I just don't understand. Did the writer actually think that the writing for the scene was good?
Was this some kind of a joke or what? Did Bioware executives get a big laugh from it? They have some quality assurance issues here. This goes beyond the writer and the voice director actually. The responsibilty is ultimately at the top. Bioware needs to reorganize a little here I think.
SNAFU
I don't want to exaggerate here, because a lot of people will tell you that it is mainly just a few lines, and also how Hale speaks to him. I don't want to blow this out of proportion, but this still takes it back to QA. Someone made a lousy error in judgment whenever this was reviewed while the game was being developed.
Edit: Formatting, added a few words.
Edit again spelling
Modifié par JohnnyDollar, 06 juin 2010 - 08:26 .
#8079
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 06:48
Pacifien wrote...
Oh, I like to think that the Samara romance is still in the pursuit stage, she just doesn't think it is. Shepard will wear down her resolve eventually.![]()
Let's hope. Samara is gorgeous in a rather broad sense (as well as physically appealing), and there is absolutely nothing wrong with the older woman and the younger fella. Teach 'em boys a thang or twenty.
Funny that she took Jacob's romance as comedic effect while Garrus was charming, because I get the impression the writers were going for the opposite effect.
I would hope not. Taken in a purely platonic sense, Jacob - bro, all the way, no worries. But, man, that guys needs some coaching or sensitivity traing or sumfin - "A better man than me, not you - Miranda", and the priiize. Forgeddeaboudit! My wife's response to that was "I would have laughed him out of my quarters, fab-abs aside."
Garrus is bumbling over his words, bringing the wine, the cheesy music -- completely not sure of how this whole romance thing is supposed to be done.
She found that charming and sweet. "A pity it'd be like getting laid by a crocodile." was her only hesitancy for Garrus.
Jacob, on the other hand, is asking about Shepard's feelings and telling her he loves her. Just who ever wrote it and whoever voice directed it did it completely wrong. It's comedic by accident.
Unfortunately, accidental or not, just too ridiculous, according to her.
Some people mention the possibility of Jack's romance being just as much a downer as Thane's, if you read into the upgrade information of her biotic implant with the mention of her neural degeneration. However, it somewhat implies that neural degeneration might be a problem for all biotics and doesn't mention that Jack's is particuarly accelerated in any way. And it's not even mentioned within the game dialogue, so it's really a nonissue considering how often the game dialogue and codex entries contradict each other.
Doesn't it also say that in spite of it, Jack is just getting stronger? What does "neural degradation" imply and how serious would it be? Impending brain damage? Or just forgetting a few things? Technically smoking a cigarette or drinking heavily is "neural degradation", and there are people who can smoke three packs a day, drink a crate of whiskey and live to be ninety. There are those who just have to be in a room where a cigarette was smoked once upon a time and croak three days later from massive cerebral tumors. Jack can easily be in the former category. Personally, I'd think neural degradation is a bit of a grab-bag.
I'm not as familiar with the development of Miranda's romance, but from what I see of all the other romances, what makes Jack's unique is that you will see a side of her that cannot be seen in any other way. In Tali's romance, you know she's cute and adorable and has always looked up to Shepard. In Garrus's romance, you know he's had a rough time of it and could do with having something positive happen for once. In Thane's romance, you know he'd been resigned to death until he met Shepard. In Jacob's romance, you, uh.... hmm. But with Jack's romance, you see someone who never thought she'd care finally learn to care and show she cares. This is a completely different side of Jack that can only be seen with a romance.
Hence my wife wishing that FemShep could have had that.
EDIT: Speelin
Modifié par JakeMacDon, 06 juin 2010 - 07:06 .
#8080
Guest_yorkj86_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 06:53
Guest_yorkj86_*
I'd like for it to be the former, because I'd gladly listen to Jack **** about her headaches (like Kaiden did) than have to watch her slowly lose herself
#8081
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 07:03
yorkj86 wrote...
Why only Jack?
Because in my wife's opinion, Jack is the best romance in the game. She simply felt that the female Shepard deserved a male version that deep - and if it could have been a boy-Jack, so much the better. She found the idea interesting, but was not advocating it in any way. Nor was I. I was simply attempting to discuss the pros and cons of such a thing theoretically occuring, not whether or not my wife is being shallow and selfish for being curious.
I'm still sensing some self-entitlement.
For whom? And how did you reach this conclusion in something I could have sworn was blatantly self-evident?
It may be unfortunate to FemShep players who like her, and would like to romance her, that Jack is apparently only romantically attracted to males, but to simply write an archetype, a simple idea for a character, detracts from the character's identity.
Then you've missed what I and my missus were getting at almost entirely. I'll try and make this is clear as I am able:
Jack, repurposed as a male - romanceable by a female Shepard. Nothing changed but gender and references to said gender. Only Jack done this way, because other FemShep romances sucked, and missus considered Jack's the best. FemShep deserved what ManShep got - deep, meaningful relationship with coolest character. If no same-sex allowed than make Jack a man. Problem solved.
That was all. No self-centred gimmie-gimmie involved. Just interest in characters and story.
As a writer, she occasionally gets that way, and I just can't bring myself to dissuade her from it.
#8082
Guest_yorkj86_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 07:17
Guest_yorkj86_*
#8083
Guest_yorkj86_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 07:34
Guest_yorkj86_*
"Garrus and Femshep however have this great "partners in crime" vibe going on that they can really expand upon if they have a continued relationship in ME3. Same with Jack and Dudeshep."
It's true. This needs to be done in ME3. Characters actually affecting each other. I don't know why this even needs to be said, but apparently, it does. Since Shepard is an emotionless block, we should at least be able to see Jack changing.
#8084
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 07:46
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
The renegade pounce would be a small example of her character taking a different direction. I think it would only better the Jack character in the ME series myself, by adding even more depth. It may not be the right move for Jack to take, but it could still exist nonetheless.
My Shep likes the paragon Jack, but there can still exist a renegade Jack for RP'ing, and it might add a little replay value. We would still have the paragon side also afterall.
I don't see it happening though.
Modifié par JohnnyDollar, 06 juin 2010 - 08:18 .
#8085
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 10:14
JohnnyDollar wrote...
And now a little motivator for the Jack fans.
Tada!
*snip*
Awesome
#8086
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 11:02
PL voice actress as SuZe, quality... well... isn't bad, only this digitally shaved head looks terrible. Scans from Machina magazine.
http://i.pinger.pl/p...17fae4b449bb9/
http://static.machin...na_Page_052.jpg
The truth is only geeks can make real cosplays
#8087
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 12:17
yorkj86 wrote...
I don't really think it takes a romance novel author to realize that "But the priiiiize" is a bad way to start an intimate scene. Just reading the scripting of the scene will do. Besides, I'm sure there's a lot of completely disposable shlock out there that's better than Jacob's final romance scene, anyway.
I don't know... if they'd added a line or two to it it could have worked even with "the priiize" in there. For me, Jacob wins a lot of extra brownie points for having the only scene where a potential love interest shows a genuine regard for Shepard's emotional state; with almost everyone else (though in some cases rightly so - while she does think about Shep in a keep-out-of-harm's-way kinda sense Jack has to think about number one primarily, Thane's only had number one for so long) it's all me me me me me. If they'd maybe asked a woman (makes me wonder if a guy wrote Femme-Shep) a line that lame might have passed muster and made Jacob look endearing at the same time, and since Hale's reading is a little predatory...
Shepard is sitting in her cabin, biding time before Death comes a'callin'...
Jacob: Shepard? Look at this... like sneaking into the Captain's quarters. Heavy risk, but the prize...
Shepard looks over her shoulder and shoots him a mocking grin.
Shep: I was wondering when you'd get here... so, what's your intention, Jacob?
Jacob: To give the Collectors every kind of hell I can, suicide or not. But until then, I want all the time I can get. Win. Lose. Doesn't matter. I want you.
Shep: (chuckling) Jacob, I know you're heart's in the right place, and we are flying into certain death... but seriously, you should get whatever you paid for that line back.
Jacob: (smiling) Ouch. I'm trying here, but you're a hard woman to read sometimes... a little intimdating, too. A guy just... well, I -
Shepard hushes Jacob.
Shep: We're on a suicide mission against impossible odds and you're still talking? Don't complicate this. You're going to have to make every minute count Mr Taylor...
Shepard takes Jacob's hands and puts his arms around her. They kiss. Shepard pushes Jacob's arms up and helps him peel off the upper half of his uniform. She trails her fingers down his solid torso, and with a grin steers him backwards across the room to her bed. Shepard pushes Jacob down and settles astride him.
Shepard: ... besides, right now, you're the prize.
Jacob and Shepard kiss. Fade to black.
And that's just off the top of my head. Lesson here - nothing's too cornball or sleazy if Femme-Shep says it
#8088
Guest_yorkj86_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 04:03
Guest_yorkj86_*
Rzepik2 wrote...
In case it wasn't posted here.
PL voice actress as SuZe, quality... well... isn't bad, only this digitally shaved head looks terrible. Scans from Machina magazine.
http://i.pinger.pl/p...17fae4b449bb9/
http://static.machin...na_Page_052.jpg
The truth is only geeks can make real cosplaysCurious thing though.
That's her voice-actress? They don't look so dissimilar. That's pretty good. Is there a translation of the text on that page?
Jerry would not approve of the man-hands, though. I, myself, am indifferent.
Modifié par yorkj86, 06 juin 2010 - 04:06 .
#8089
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 04:18
Maybe because the Miranda one would have ended in tears and blood, but still...
#8090
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 06:36
yorkj86 wrote...
Rzepik2 wrote...
In case it wasn't posted here.
PL voice actress as SuZe, quality... well... isn't bad, only this digitally shaved head looks terrible. Scans from Machina magazine.
http://i.pinger.pl/p...17fae4b449bb9/
http://static.machin...na_Page_052.jpg
The truth is only geeks can make real cosplaysCurious thing though.
That's her voice-actress? They don't look so dissimilar. That's pretty good. Is there a translation of the text on that page?
Jerry would not approve of the man-hands, though. I, myself, am indifferent.
What's PL? And I'm assuming the voice actress we're talking about is not Courtney Taylor? And I agree about the hands, they are beastly.
Are those pictures CGI? Or is it a real person, or is it a bit of both?
#8091
Guest_yorkj86_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 07:11
Guest_yorkj86_*
Jackal904 wrote...
What's PL? And I'm assuming the voice actress we're talking about is not Courtney Taylor? And I agree about the hands, they are beastly.
Are those pictures CGI? Or is it a real person, or is it a bit of both?
Poland, Polish.
He's talking about the voice-actress for Jack for the Polish-language version of ME2. She apparently volunteered to have herself done up to look like Jack. Her head was digitally shaved and tattooed.
Modifié par yorkj86, 06 juin 2010 - 07:12 .
#8092
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 07:50
#8093
Guest_yorkj86_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 07:59
Guest_yorkj86_*
Jackal904 wrote...
Hmmm. I wonder how good the voice actors for non-english languages were in ME2. I doubt any of the Jack voice actresses did as good of a job as Courtney Taylor.
Search on Youtube. The French voice-actress for Samara does a good job, but she's no Maggie Baird.
EDIT: Here, Jack speaking Polish:
The voice-actress makes her sound less harsh, but more...evil, I guess? Maybe that's just Polish.
Modifié par yorkj86, 06 juin 2010 - 08:15 .
#8094
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 08:16
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
Speaking about non-english languages in the game. We touched on Jacob and FemShep a little earlier. I have heard that FemShep does not use the provocative tone with Jacob in foreign languages. It's only Hale's voice. So the romance may have a broader appeal to those gamers.Jackal904 wrote...
Hmmm. I wonder how good the voice actors for non-english languages were in ME2. I doubt any of the Jack voice actresses did as good of a job as Courtney Taylor.
Modifié par JohnnyDollar, 06 juin 2010 - 08:20 .
#8095
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 08:27
yorkj86 wrote...
Jackal904 wrote...
Hmmm. I wonder how good the voice actors for non-english languages were in ME2. I doubt any of the Jack voice actresses did as good of a job as Courtney Taylor.
Search on Youtube. The French voice-actress for Samara does a good job, but she's no Maggie Baird.
EDIT: Here, Jack speaking Polish:
The voice-actress makes her sound less harsh, but more...evil, I guess? Maybe that's just Polish.
Well that was extremely strange to watch. I'm sure a polish person would find it strange to watch the same scene with Jack speaking english. But now I know how to say "****s" in polish
Here's the fight between Jack and Miranda with polish VAs. With the polish VAs, Jack sounds a lot older and Miranda sounds younger.
On a side note. It must have taken a lot of extra work to redo the lip syncing of every character for every language.
#8096
Guest_yorkj86_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 08:55
Guest_yorkj86_*
#8097
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 10:14
JohnnyDollar wrote...
Speaking about non-english languages in the game. We touched on Jacob and FemShep a little earlier. I have heard that FemShep does not use the provocative tone with Jacob in foreign languages. It's only Hale's voice. So the romance may have a broader appeal to those gamers.
I can assure you that in the Italian version, FemShep DOES use a provocative tone with Jacob 9_9
btw
Italian version of the Jack / Miranda catfight: www.youtube.com/watch
Sheploo sounds terrible, they could not hire the original ME1 voiceactor so they replaced him with someone who usually does the voiceover for TV commercials... Jack sounds ok imo, yet younger and less "femme fatale" than Courtenay Taylor. BTW for some reasons they had her say "I'll smear the walls with you" for a second time instead of "maybe I should show you what Cerberus did to me" (can't remember the exact words).
BTW2: in the Italian version Tali has NO accent! I was shocked to hear her original English vo.
Modifié par Epantiras, 06 juin 2010 - 10:15 .
#8098
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 10:18
#8099
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 10:28
#8100
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
Posté 06 juin 2010 - 10:31
Guest_JohnnyDollar_*
Hmm, maybe it's only a few of the other languages, or maybe not. I was under the impression that it was only Hale that spoke that way, but obviously not.Epantiras wrote...
I can assure you that in the Italian version, FemShep DOES use a provocative tone with Jacob 9_9JohnnyDollar wrote...
Speaking about non-english languages in the game. We touched on Jacob and FemShep a little earlier. I have heard that FemShep does not use the provocative tone with Jacob in foreign languages. It's only Hale's voice. So the romance may have a broader appeal to those gamers.





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