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adriano_c wrote...

JohnnyDollar wrote...
You guys are spitting out this fanfic like crazy. I'm too lazy to read all of it. ;-)


I've never actually read one of these...

Shepard walks into the port side cargo hold.

Grunt: Shepard.
Shepard: Grunt.
Grunt: ...

From a distance, Shepard can hear Tali scream "Keelah!" as Ken yells everyone to clear the engine room. There is the unmistakable sinking sensation of a massive biotic manipulation of mass. Out of the corner of his eye, Shepard sees Zaeed flying through the window to the cargo hold itself, glowing an unmistakeable aura of blue electric.


Shepard: Let's do this again sometime.
Grunt: Shepard.

And thus did adriano_c read his first fanfic ever.

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Pacifien wrote...

adriano_c wrote...

JohnnyDollar wrote...
You guys are spitting out this fanfic like crazy. I'm too lazy to read all of it. ;-)


I've never actually read one of these...

Shepard walks into the port side cargo hold.

Grunt: Shepard.
Shepard: Grunt.
Grunt: ...

From a distance, Shepard can hear Tali scream "Keelah!" as Ken yells everyone to clear the engine room. There is the unmistakable sinking sensation of a massive biotic manipulation of mass. Out of the corner of his eye, Shepard sees Zaeed flying through the window to the cargo hold itself, glowing an unmistakeable aura of blue electric.


Shepard: Let's do this again sometime.
Grunt: Shepard.

And thus did adriano_c read his first fanfic ever.

:lol:^_^

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See... this is what I like about this thread. We can hate on other characters and nobody minds.

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See... this is what I like about this thread. We can hate on other characters and nobody minds.

Jack's a complicated character who walks the line between criminal darkness and one almost drawn into the side of good against her will. For every character, I'd throw in a plus and minus to their characterization, focusing more on the minus because the flaws are what give that character realism and depth in my mind. I don't like seeing the good in everyone, even if the person is one of the most paragon of the game. It makes sense that Jack's character draws people with similar mindsets to my own.

It might come across as hating on the other characters if you come into the middle of my discussions without the context of where I'm coming from. Lord knows that Mondo seems to excel at drawing people in right in the middle of her poking fun at some other character. :whistle:

It's difficult discussing a world of grey around here, more so than people think.

Modifié par Pacifien, 22 juillet 2010 - 10:30 .


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Pacifien wrote...

NICKjnp wrote...
See... this is what I like about this thread. We can hate on other characters and nobody minds.

Jack's a complicated character who walks the line between criminal darkness and one almost drawn into the side of good against her will. For every character, I'd throw in a plus and minus to their characterization, focusing more on the minus because the flaws are what give that character realism and depth in my mind. I don't like seeing the good in everyone, even if the person is one of the most paragon of the game. It makes sense that Jack's character draws people with similar mindsets to my own.

It might come across as hating on the other characters if you come into the middle of my discussions without the context of where I'm coming from. Lord knows that Mondo seems to excel at drawing people in right in the middle of her poking fun at some other character. :whistle:

It's difficult discussing a world of grey around here, more so than people think.


To quote Warlord Okeer: "But I approve!"

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NICKjnp wrote...

See... this is what I like about this thread. We can hate on other characters and nobody minds.

Hate
"1 a : intense hostility and aversion usually deriving from fear, anger, or sense of injury b : extreme dislike or antipathy"
http://mw4.m-w.com/dictionary/hate

I  think you're using the word where it does not apply NICK.  Which seems to be quite frequently the case on this forum.

Modifié par JohnnyDollar, 22 juillet 2010 - 10:41 .


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JohnnyDollar wrote...

NICKjnp wrote...
See... this is what I like about this thread. We can hate on other characters and nobody minds.

Hate
"1 a : intense hostility and aversion usually deriving from fear, anger, or sense of injury b : extreme dislike or antipathy"
http://mw4.m-w.com/dictionary/hate

I  think you're using the word where it does not apply NICK.  Which seems to be quite frequently the case on this forum.

I hate Morinth in a category b sort of way. :whistle:

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Pacifien wrote...

JohnnyDollar wrote...

NICKjnp wrote...
See... this is what I like about this thread. We can hate on other characters and nobody minds.

Hate
"1 a : intense hostility and aversion usually deriving from fear, anger, or sense of injury b : extreme dislike or antipathy"
http://mw4.m-w.com/dictionary/hate

I  think you're using the word where it does not apply NICK.  Which seems to be quite frequently the case on this forum.

I hate Morinth in a category b sort of way. :whistle:

That's fine.  I don't hate any of the characters, at least not any that I can think of off of the top of my head right now.  I like some more than others of course, and I have my favorites and least liked ones.  I suppose I do have a dislike for Morinth, but not an extreme dislike.^_^

Whenever I joke and make fun of another character, that is exactly what I am doing.  I am not hating anything.

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Whenever I joke and make fun of another character, that is exactly what I am doing.  I am not hating anything.

That's kind of what I was getting at with my own post. It's going to be perceived as hate by someone who doesn't know me. But in a colloquial sense, which is an overexaggeration on their part. More like feeling somewhat hurt that a stranger is being mean to their character and possible mean to the fanbase that enjoys that character.

Then, if you don't want to come across as the bad guy, you then spend half a page trying to defend yourself, say you're not really a bad guy, and explain the joke all at the same time. Then everything is ruined because nothing quite fails as a joke that needs to be explained.

Then suddenly you're crossposting to each character thread, poking sticks at each other trying to figure out who was the instigator, who was initially at fault, who has it more wrong out of all the wrong. Look, Miranda's got a bubblebutt and she's a lying Cerberus b*tch. Oh sh*t, we're in trouble now.

No wait, that was a joke. And a demonstration. I don't mean it.

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JohnnyDollar wrote...

NICKjnp wrote...

See... this is what I like about this thread. We can hate on other characters and nobody minds.

Hate
"1 a : intense hostility and aversion usually deriving from fear, anger, or sense of injury b : extreme dislike or antipathy"
http://mw4.m-w.com/dictionary/hate

I  think you're using the word where it does not apply NICK.  Which seems to be quite frequently the case on this forum.


I'm using it as slang... more along the lines of poking fun at.

but to add to the fun: link

Modifié par NICKjnp, 22 juillet 2010 - 11:10 .


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Alright. Here's the fourth -- and last -- part of the "Eyes And History" story I jotted down. Might be the last one I do for a long while; I want to try and write some other stuff.

Anyway, hope you enjoy it.

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Shepard and Jack have made it to the Normandy, and were being tended to, inside of the infirmary. The ship has long since departed the Citadel, until things calmed down, and C-Sec drops the investigation. A course had been set for Omega.

Although they'd eventually recieve more trouble from the Suns, now, they acquired the time to rest. No mission was gained, no favors were called in. No visiting. No sight seeing.

A gunfight they barely survived was good enough.


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Jack's right forearm was almost finished with being bandaged by Dr. Chakwas, who had extracted the glass that tore through her skin. They'd had been sitting at a table, across from each other. Standing at the exit -- behind Jack -- had been Miranda Lawson and Garrus Vakarian; both of which had their own reasons with being concerned about the situation.

"You couldn't stay inside the ship, could you?" Miranda said, arms folded. "You could have gotten the commander killed."

"But he's not." Jack answered, inattentively. "How about you save the **** fit for later, cheerleader? I'm not in the mood." Jack's eyes had been focused on her own hand. She could see a narrow streak of blood forming vertically down her forearm, though it was almost transparent.

"What were you doing outside, in the first place?" A curious Garrus asked.

"Needed some fresh air."

"In a space station?"

"Change of scenery."

"You mean you needed to shoot something."

"Y'know what -- I don't need to explain myself." Jack just gave up. The same inattentive tone was evident, in her speech.

"I left. We fought. We came back. That's it."

Miranda shook her head. "Shepard almost DIED. Do y-"

"Garrus?" Jack said, cutting her off. "Apparently, the cheerleader ain't able to understand that the bossman ISN'T dead. So could you repeat that to her..." Jack's left arm raised up, pointing back to Miranda. " Before I paint the walls with that ****?"

Dr. Chakwas had finished the last strap.

Before Miranda could respond, a cough was heard from the bed, where Shepard had been resting. His right shoulder and abandomen had been wrapped in bandages, and his arm had been encased in a sling. Jack had gotten up, quickly, moving toward Shepard, without thinking.

"You can't do that." Dr. Chakwas called. Jack had stopped, turning and and raising a brow towards her.

"Why?" Jack asked.

"Because you need your rest. And so does Shepard." Chakwas answered.

"Right. So I rest with him." Jack concluded, turning around to continue her path towards Shepard. Dr. Chakwas called after her, again.

"Jack...I can't allow you to disturb him." This caused Jack to stop, once more. But she did not turn.

"Try and stop me."

When she said that, she could almost feel that a gun was being aimed at her head. Eyes moved to the right, and there she saw Garrus, Incisor Sniper Rifle aimed squarely at her face.

"Shepard has 5 broken ribs, and his right arm is fractured." Dr. Chakwas explained. " The wounds he sustained from those gunshots were not close -- nor that powerful enough -- to cause those sort of injuries."

"So..." Garrus added, mandibles parting. "Why don't you tell us what REALLY happened, at the Den?"

Pointless, now. Suns weren't known for biotic abilities. She could blame it on the heavy weapons they carried, but once news got a hold of this -- and it eventually would -- it'd backfire on her.

Jack shrugged. "I hit him. Really ****ing hard. Bastard flew across the hall."

"You WHAT!?" Miranda shouted, taking a step forward, but was stopped, by Garrus.

"Pissed me off -- told him not to, but he did, anyway. Guess he thought it was just gonna slide." Jack scoffed. "**** that, and **** him."

"I can't have you near Shepard if you're going to be a danger to him. Or to anyone else." Dr. Chakwas concluded. "I think you should rest, down in Engineering, for now."

'A danger to Shepard'. To Jack, it sounded so similar to her initial warning to Shepard. Where she'd end up killing him. God knows she didn't want to. She didn't even realize she'd hurt him until after the doctor diagnosed the injuries. He was tough. Tough, but stubborn. Her feelings wouldn't let her kill him, and she was DAMN sure not about to kill herself. Not for him. Not for anyone. There was only one way to end this.

"Whatever, lady." Jack said, turning away from Shepard, and heading to the door, shoving past Miranda. The three looked back, as she departed, and the doors hissed shut.
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Two days pass. The Normandy was now docked at Omega.

Jack had been walking down the bridge, once more. But with more than just a pistol. This time, she had a bag, with her, slinged over her shoulder. Filled with everything she had, which wasn't much. A few change of clothes, and a couple of datapads. No one had been at the cockpit, this time. Good. She didn't need the attention.

But she was about to get it.

"Jack."

When her named was called, she practically jolted to a stop. She felt like crying. But **** that -- she needed to be strong.

"Shepard."

"Where are you going?"

"Where do you think?"

Shepard had shook his head. He'd have folded his arms, but he was still injured. He settled on adjusting his right arm, so that it wouldn't hurt, so much.

"...Were you even planning on telling me?"

"You've been around Shepard; you know what to expect."

"Jack--"

"Shepard, I'm DONE." Jack said, turning around. "I can't keep doing this ****. It'll **** us BOTH up. Hell, I'm doing you a goddamn favor!"

"I didn't ask for one." Shepard said, shrugging. He took a step forward. "I don't even want one. I don't want anything from you, Jack."

"Well, thanks, Shep. That just made this a hell of a lot easier." Jack said, turning around, to leave.

"Jack, that's not what I meant, and you know it." Shepard called, moving to block her way to the airlock. Jack nearly bumped into him, but stopped, before she could. She sighed, and shook her head.

"Move." Jack said.

"No." Shepard replied.

"Shepard, get the **** out of my way." Jack said, now irritated.

"No." Shepard repeated, a little more stern.

Jack's voice raised "If you don't ****ing move right now, I'll--"

"You'll kill me?" Shepard said, cutting her off.

"Then do it. Because that's the only way I'm letting you go."

"You..."

Jack wanted to just...do SOMETHING. But she couldn't. She was already beaten the minute Shepard caught her leaving.

"...You suck, man." Jack's voice broke, but she cleared her throat to play it off. Jack had let go of the bag, letting it fall to the floor. "Alright, you wanna play? Fine. But I've got ground rules. Rule number one, I'm doing whatever the **** I want. You don't stop me. Your friends don't stop me."

"And if what you're doing jepordizes the mission?" Shepard asked.

"Then I'll make up for it in your cabin." Jack said, shrugging. "Which brings me to my next rule. I'm on top."

And Shepard began laughing his ass off. "That so?"

"Very so. You even so much as nudge me to the side, and I'll own your ass. Fair warning." Jack would give a small smirk, but it soon faded away.

"And the next ****ing time you leave this ship, Put your goddamn armor on. If I'm gonna be stuck here, I'm gonna be stuck here because of you."

"Alright, Jack." Shepard said, still amused "I get your point."

"****ing better." Jack said, folding her arms. "'Cause if you screw up, I'll haunt the hell out of you."

"Duly noted." Shepard replied.

Jack had walked over to Shepard, grabbing the back of his neck, and pulling him to her, locking themselves into a kiss. Being jerked forward like that hurt Shepard. But he could tough it out. The pain was worth it.

Jack had broke away from the first, turned away from Shepard, and began to walk back to the elevator.

"You know where to find me."

Shepard watched her leave, with a smile on his face. Within a few seconds, however, he realized something.

"Jack, you forgot your--"

Jack had entered the elevator, and it's doors closed shut. Shepard had shaken his head, his smile still plastered across his face.

"....Bag."

#11537
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Well, after a tragically comedic cliché involving my first self-administered haircut using an electric razor, I said "F*ck it", and decided to start from scratch, as it were.



I now share the same hairstyle as our favourite character (minus the crop circle-like patterns).



Pretty annoyed about it, too, as I was so pleased with myself after the initial cut.

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adriano_c wrote...

Well, after a tragically comedic cliché involving my first self-administered haircut using an electric razor, I said "F*ck it", and decided to start from scratch, as it were.

I now share the same hairstyle as our favourite character (minus the crop circle-like patterns).

Pretty annoyed about it, too, as I was so pleased with myself after the initial cut.


It is summer... it will be good for you.

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Sundown Native wrote...

Alright. Here's the fourth -- and last -- part of the "Eyes And History" story I jotted down. Might be the last one I do for a long while; I want to try and write some other stuff.

Anyway, hope you enjoy it.

-snip-


Dawww.  Jack being protective of Shepard is sweet.  Jack demanding to be on top is also sweet.

Having Jack nearly walk away from Shepard and the mission seems to be a common theme to our fanfic.  Jack not wanting to leave an injured Shepard's side is a common theme, too.

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yorkj86 wrote...

Sundown Native wrote...

Alright. Here's the fourth -- and last -- part of the "Eyes And History" story I jotted down. Might be the last one I do for a long while; I want to try and write some other stuff.

Anyway, hope you enjoy it.

-snip-


Dawww.  Jack being protective of Shepard is sweet.  Jack demanding to be on top is also sweet.

Having Jack nearly walk away from Shepard and the mission seems to be a common theme to our fanfic.  Jack not wanting to leave an injured Shepard's side is a common theme, too.



Hell yeah. Now that I think about it, there are a whole lot of Jack/Shepard fanfics that have both those themes.

That being said, whenever I get around to doing more, I'm gonna make it a what if story. There might not be a lot of stories we could write off of those, but I guanran-damn-tee there's enough.

For instance, what if she DID kill Shepard by accident? What if Shepard allowed her departure?

What if she killed anyone else? The people that were close to Shepard, in particular.

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Hell yeah. Now that I think about it, there are a whole lot of Jack/Shepard fanfics that have both those themes.

That being said, whenever I get around to doing more, I'm gonna make it a what if story. There might not be a lot of stories we could write off of those, but I guanran-damn-tee there's enough.

For instance, what if she DID kill Shepard by accident? What if Shepard allowed her departure?

What if she killed anyone else? The people that were close to Shepard, in particular.


Oh, no!  I don't think I could read those :crying:

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Oh, no!  I don't think I could read those [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/crying.png[/smilie]

Image IPB

:P

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^^^ you posted a relevant picture to this thread in general that has a dialogue line that makes sense for the situation at hand. You sir, you win

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tommyt_1994 wrote...

^^^ you posted a relevant picture to this thread in general that has a dialogue line that makes sense for the situation at hand. You sir, you win


What he said.

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Sundown Native wrote...

Alright. Here's the fourth -- and last -- part of the "Eyes And History" story I jotted down. Might be the last one I do for a long while; I want to try and write some other stuff.

[awesomefic]
 

That was really, really good Sundown. I don't really even have anything else to say, it was just pure awesome. All four parts.


On an unrelated note, I went to tonight's Yankee game and saw someone who reminded me so much of Jack in the seats in front of me. I'm not someone who walks around thinking about video games looking to relate things IRL to games, but this one jumped out at me so much I couldn't help but make the connection. She had hair, but it was in an appropriately abnormal style (looked quite good, really). She was Jack's exact build, petite but toned, and I swear to you she was wearing Jack's halter. It was black and went a bit lower than Jack's, and she had a shirt on underneath, but it was certainly the first halter I've seen someone wear in person. She was also behaving exactly how I'd think Jack would at a sporting event: thoroughly enjoying herself, dancing, and being rather outgoing (not in a let's all be buddies way, more an I'm doing my thing and you can't stop me way). She even had tattoos, though obviously not to the degree Jack does. 

Ironically, she was a lesbian. Or bi, but she was with her girlfriend. :P

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@MHRazer: I also really liked "Eyes and History", and the yankeesImage IPB, but I'm curious as to why so many people write fics about a romanced Jack trying to leave post-suicide mission. I understand what the particular writers say in regards to why Jack would try and leave, but am I the only one who think she'd want to stay with Shepard? After all she has been through, she finally met a guy who genunely cared for her for her, and not just for what she could give him. I think Jack would want to stay with Shepard, I could see her starting to love being genuinely cared for. Do a lot of people here believe that Jack would at one point try and leave? I certainly see why Jack may be tempted to leave, but ultimately I think she would want to stay with someone who wasn't just using her for her biotics, or for sex.

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To those who were actually reading my fictal nonsense, I've revised it a bit, changed the title, tweaked a bit and stuck it in my blog.  It's not finished, but you might like it anyway.

PART ONE

PART TWO

EDIT - Removed links for revision

Modifié par JakeMacDon, 24 juillet 2010 - 06:47 .


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tommyt_1994 wrote...

@MHRazer: I also really liked "Eyes and History", and the yankeesImage IPB, but I'm curious as to why so many people write fics about a romanced Jack trying to leave post-suicide mission. I understand what the particular writers say in regards to why Jack would try and leave, but am I the only one who think she'd want to stay with Shepard? After all she has been through, she finally met a guy who genunely cared for her for her, and not just for what she could give him. I think Jack would want to stay with Shepard, I could see her starting to love being genuinely cared for. Do a lot of people here believe that Jack would at one point try and leave? I certainly see why Jack may be tempted to leave, but ultimately I think she would want to stay with someone who wasn't just using her for her biotics, or for sex.



Before I respond, I'd like to say, I'm glad you liked it.


Me, I think that the majority write fics about Jack attempting to leave because...It's a good way to get started, for one. It's like, if someone wanted to write one, and needed to think of an idea, that concept would be the one of the first -- if not THE first -- ones they could think up. Though it's generally the same, it's the different dialogue and actions that keeps the concept alive, and interesting.

That being said, I can see where you're coming from. Jack WOULD probably try to stay with the one guy that didn't feign caring for her. The one guy that actually made good on his promises. She'd try to adjust to everything she'd need to, to keep from losing what she found.

The keyword is "Try", though. And that's probably another reason why people use the "Jack tries to leave" concept. Because she's so used to the galaxy she had been living in, for most of her life, she'd believe that that was her. That she wouldn't be able to change, and that trying was just going to make things difficult for both her and Shepard.

That's just me, though.

Edit: Contrary to what you might think, in my Shepard/Jack fics, the two never actually had sex with each other. I like to think that romance scene before going through the Omega 4 Relay was just kissing and comforting, and I went with that for my own sh*t.

That might change, in the future fics, though. You never know.

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Mondo47 wrote...

I always thought that she sounded like a dishwashing machine trying to get a part time job as a phone sex operator...


I'd be tempted to use this as my new signature if it wasn't already full of banners <3

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Mondo47 wrote...

I always thought that she sounded like a dishwashing machine trying to get a part time job as a phone sex operator...


You know, when I think about it...both the Asari love interests so far, counting Samara, have been rather throaty.
Should we read anything into this?