*Comes in having read every FF from page 456*I.....LIIIIIVVVVEEE!!!!
Now get swamped.
[quote]axl99 wrote...
I think Sundown is trying to erase the imagery of Jack running her lips down his neck, among other areas.
I kid.[/quote]
lol I'm not gunna let this die, nosir.

[quote]Mondo47 wrote...
I think I should thank ElectricZ for making me think of this little scene, plus everyone seems to want Grunt and Jack to be such good friends...
The Normandy Medical Bay, 18:44 Standard Operational Hours...---------------
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Haha! I was so expecting something horrible. Loved how you wrote everyone, Shepard especially so,
[quote]Pacifien wrote...
But Jack's past any of that gut reaction to the point where she simply sees a krogan as an equal. That has to be
somewhat of a refreshing reaction for a krogan to experience.[/quote]
True indeed. Even if she's intimidated by their size, I don't think she would be afraid nor show it, even if half a dozen krogan were bearing down on her, her only concern would be "Where's the quickest path through these guys" even if she knew she would die. Grunt approves.
[quote]JohnnyDollar wrote...
It's funny, you have the explosion (fire), but you can still see her right hand with the biotic ball in it, in the 3rd pic.
We don't know how she does it exactly.[smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/policeman.png[/smilie] It's all speculation, so you guys that say she uses a punch, are wrong.[smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/policeman.png[/smilie][smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/tongue.png[/smilie]
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Laggy computer couldn't screencap the speed of Jack's flying hand, creating the illusion that the mech is exploding before she even touches it! Or maybe it wasn't an illusion, and the mech self destructed itself, evolving from basic networking functions to a true AI at the sight of Jack's fury, and decided to take control of one aspect of it's existence that it could.
Yeah...I like that.
[quote]Sundown Native wrote...
Got another one up. Continuation of the one I jotted down, a while ago.
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To Be Continued[/quote]
Pretty intense. A lot of these are particularly gruesome. Not that there's anything wrong with that
[quote]Mondo47 wrote...
How about a little epilogue (just for giggles)...
The Normandy Crew Deck, Women's Restroom...---------------------
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So good. This friendship is actually believable, and I didn't think Jack could have one on the Normandy besides Shepard.
[quote]Sundown Native wrote...
Third part of the "Eyes And History" story.
Might not look it, but I tend to write more when I'm putting a fight scene in. Hope you guys enjoy.
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Long (for my lazy ass) but good read. If Jack were really angry at someone like that, I imagine her using her biotics to slowly crush their body like a soda can
[quote]JakeMacDon wrote...
Since there's a spate of fanficking go'n on, I thought I'd give it another shot. Okay, the last one went over like a fat male stripper at Billy's Sixth Birthday Party, but... what the hell. I'll just post a snippet and if no one likes it,
*shrug*. I call it
"Best Served Cold".-----------------------------------------
To be continued... maybe....
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Wow. I think I just saw the abyss. And not the movie, either.
I like the writing, Jake. Have to explore even the dark side, right?
[quote]JakeMacDon wrote...
Continued....
snip
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Oh man...I cried manly tears. That was...inspiring, Mr. Jake.
[quote]Mondo47 wrote...
Now
this is how you "clear the engine room"...
The Normandy Engine Room, 12:31 Standard Operational Hours...-------------------------------------------------------
snipShep: Wait... what happens if someone comes back?
Jack: I'll have to bust you in the chops and storm off... so, better move fast.
snip[/quote]
Hahah!
I think I'm starting to like you, Shepard Mondo.[quote]Pacifien wrote...
The only issue Jack needs to overcome at this point is that constant feeling that it won't last, that someone will prove she's just a tool again. By the end of ME2, I think she's been on the Normandy long enough to start to feel like that won't happen.
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Good read, this part hit me
here <3
[quote]yorkj86 wrote...
Ah, I see now. Jack just kicked Grunt's ass at a FPS, and he's pissed at her. That's why he's standing, that's why his chair is knocked over, that's why he's pointing at her, and that's why she's looking smugly over her shoulder at him.[/quote]
That is priceless

[quote]Mondo47 wrote...
Meanwhile in Shepard's Quarters...--------------------
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Hot! That conversation felt scarily in-character, you're really good at this, Mondo. A lot of good FF writers in here. As time consuming as all that reading was, it was totally worth it. Looking forward to moar.
So yeah, I coulda just posted something short and sweet like "I lurked the past 10 pages and I must say all the fanfiction and discussion made for excellent reading *insert smileyface* but no, I say fu
ck that noise.
I'm sorry, this post has so got to die.
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