Goat_Shepard wrote...
Kinda makes me wonder if she really has a full body tattoo. Aside from her face, of course, she wouldn't want to put anything important on her legs, rear, or anything she'd normally not expose. Some ink doesn't mean anything, they're just awesome looking.
I'm pretty sure Jack must be inked all over. Most of the designs on her body (particularly the star on her belly and the "circuit-diagram" on her back) suggest continuing down beyond the waistband of her overalls - for them to just stop would be a mite silly. I fully expect Jack to have tattoos on her legs, buttocks, feet... it just makes sense for the designs to continue, and also expland the canvas that is The Book of Jack. I don't think Jack would really care about things being exposed to be honest... I don't think she's going to go running about naked, mind you, I just don't think she'd really be that bothered about her skin getting exposed.
axl99 wrote...
[Needs editing work. Help? Mondo?]
*snippetysnip*
I like what's there, Axl... the only thing I'd be tempted to do though is expand it beyond a screenplay-dialogue setup. I only tend to write that way myself because of time and keeping a hand in for my comics-writing. I think your little story would be all the better for having the dialogue written traditionally - as it stands it kinda straddles the two styles. That's about the only thing I can say about it critically, because I really liked it





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