I'd have written that sooooo differently...

This is the
Paragon Version:
Miranda: I've got work to do Commander, go chat with your friend Jack if you want smalltalk.
Shep: I thought you were smarter than that, Miranda. I expect that kind of attitude from Jack, not you.
Miranda: She's a child. Why would you side with her?
Shep: Of course she's a child - she couldn't be a child when she should have been one, and then someone cranked her biotics so high she can turn bulkheads into origami paper. You think she's going to be completely rational? Reasonable? Sane? You can argue about Cerberus not being responsible, but if you were her, would you see it differently? Look at what was done to her, Miranda. Can
anything excuse that? Because if you can, you really are your father's daughter...
Miranda: I'm not saying it was right, Shepard, but can we seriously rely on someone that damaged? This mission -
Shep: I think about the mission. All the damn time. But I think about people too. Maybe you should as well.
Miranda: I'm sorry, Commander. Cerberus has been my family for so long, I...
Shep: I understand. I really do. I'm not the person you should be apologising to though.
And this is the
Renegade Version:
Miranda: I've got work to do Commander, go chat with your friend Jack if you want smalltalk.
Shep: I'm here to talk, and you're going to listen.
Miranda: Comman -
Shep: Have you any concept of the odds we're up against? What's at stake? Because if you do, I'm not seeing it. The kind of person I need on my team would know when to act and when to shut the hell up.
Miranda: She's a child! Why would you side with her?
Shep: Because like it or not, we need Jack. That was what she needed to hear to keep her functional. You should have understood that. I need everyone at their very best for this mission, and if you can't manage that, then I don't want you on my ship.
Are we clear?
Miranda: Yes Commander. You're right, the mission comes first.
Shep: Good. Once this is over you can tear each other to pieces for all I care, but for now, our success should be your primary concern, not some playground fight. That's why the Illusive Man put you on my team, and that's what I want to see from now on.
Modifié par Mondo47, 24 août 2010 - 04:32 .