Urdaniel wrote...
My Shep was a little put off initially by Jack's in-your-face attitude, but adjusted quickly. After all, he's been around hardcases in the Alliance military and he used to be one himself before the Torfan campaign. He did everyone's loyalty mission (he got to be a bit of a chump that way) but it was the immediate aftermath of Jack's LM that got him to thinking re: our favorite not-psycho biotic. What did it was the expression on her face as she triggered the detonator, that little peek at her vulnerability. He was hooked, he just didn't know it yet. So he didn't act on it initially, didn't even really acknowledge it (other things kept distracting him), but when it hit him (most likely in a quiet, unguarded moment where nothing was shooting at them or getting blown up), there was no mistaking it for anything other than what it was. And that's where the story (their story anyway) really starts.
Obviously, that's not the way it went down in-game, owing to the restrictions of format and programming, but this (extremely broad outline as it is) is the way I like to think it happened. I've never really thought of when the "quiet, unguarded moment" took place, but it's certainly after Jack's LM. If I ever manage to get TWK finished and the side-stories and sequels started, I may finally sit down and decide when and where - might even get a shortfic-length retrospective.
A moment where Jack is reflecting upon recent events, when Shepard happens to stumble upon her. The scene in axl's picture might be a good place to start. Jack has a lot to think about after her loyalty mission. Shepard has just seen how crappy her past really was. He gets to see glimpses of who Jack is, through her vulnerability. There's no one else around, and Shepard catches Jack outside of her hidey-hole. I think it's a good idea, anyway.
As an aside, I just returned from seeing "RED". Helen Mirren firing a .50 caliber machine gun is definitely one of the greatest and most attractive things I've ever seen
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