Badpie wrote...
Midnight Reyn wrote...
Doug84 wrote...
Honestly... I don't think the dialog was badly written. Why? Because given the emotions, turmoil and sheer randomness of the meeting, Shepard and Ashley where going to say things they'd regret.
For me, it was what Shep was unable to say that led to the regret. The 'you've moved on - I don't want to reopen old wounds' line was great - if there was a sentence added to that it would have been fantastic.
And I would have liked Ash to have had different dialogue to Kaidan in that scene, but that's a point for another discussion. 
God I loved and hated how both of them handled it. I can just imagine Shep's thoughts were something like this:
Good to see you Ash. It's been too long. "good to see you?!" omg what the hell was that, John. yeah real smooth guy!
You've moved on. Why would you even suggest that to her you dolt! Stop talking right now! I didn't want to reopen old wounds. Could you be more of an ass?! Get it together, marine!
So long, Ash. YOU IDIOT! DON'T JUST LET HER WALK AWAY! YOU ARE PATHETIC! GO TO YOUR CABIN AND CRY! YOU DON"T DESERVE HER!
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hahahahaha. yes, those were my feelings exactly.
after the initial opening salvo, I was certain that Shepard would surely have someting wittier and more thoughtful to say with his next response.
so I examined my options carefully and.... "youve moved on, Ash....." Well I certainly havent!
At that point, I saw where the whole thing was going, and I was pretty much thinking, John you need to stop talking. Stop talking right now.
but he didnt.
instead I mumbled something along the lines of "Cerberus is helping me but they dont control me...." what bull****. I mean, really, what an ****hole.
but surely, SURELY Shepard will not go down without a fight. Oh no, this is the woman he loves standing before him. it goes without saying that the man who defeated Sovereign, spat in the face of death, and is now the leader of the most badass squad of mercs in the galaxy WILL come through in the end and not let Williams walk awa.......
"Come with us, Ash. It'll be just like old times." Shepard, you wimp.
You loser. Go sit in your cabin and stare at her picture like an idiot and wait for an email. An email!
To quote Badpie once more:
YOU ARE PATHETIC! GO TO YOUR CABIN AND CRY! YOU DON"T DESERVE HER!