okiness wrote...
Why are you biased, and how are you biased? You, yours is long enough and I don't feel you'd be offended if I gave you critique. It's weird that several people were recommended to me or asked me to read theirs. Is my input so valuable? Hah!
I am biased in the way that I absoluately LOVE it when I get reviews (I have 21 in total so far, half of which are from Sarah1281)
Sarah actually magnanimously reviewed every SINGLE chapter, even though the first three were published at the same time since I had to wait until my account allowed me to upload documents. And she actually picks up on the more subtle details that will ultimately prove quite important.
For instance, she said she wanted to know the story behind Cailan chasing Trian through the Shaperate, even though everyone else probably dismissed it as a minor mention. I tell you, that thing will actually make Trian cry later.
Yes, major spoiler, but I am just that impressed by how she spotted the subtle yet major plot relevance of that small hint I put in.
My story IS Supense after all. And what Trian meant when he said "I should've just..." in Chapter 3 will actually be revealed much later, even though everyone probably forgot about it already. And that's actually a good thing.
EDIT
In other news, Sarah1281, I FINALLY added your story to my favorties list. I seem to have a way of forgetting to do that for some reason.
Modifié par Raonar, 07 août 2010 - 10:58 .