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#451
Stuffy38

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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...
If I may? I don't know what this is worth, but I try to limit it to around 4-6k. Any longer and I start looking for a cut off point and starting a new chapter.

soignee is right, the attention span for online reading is different than a book. I have only had a couple of chapters that were longer, 7k and one 8k. But those I felt were pushing it.

The reason I say this is that I tend to read at work in between calls at a call center. So it is really hard to read something too long. I suspect many people snatch stolen moments with their fav fanfics.


Yes, when I hit page 5 when I'm typing, I'll start thinking about wrapping up the chapter or finding the next logical break to end it.

Gilgamesh1138 - you're Erynnar on FF, aren't you?  You have the cool Soulmates 75+ chapter fic?  Yeah I have been keeping an eye on that one :) 

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Uh oh! Guilty as charged Stuffy! *waves* Hey linky to your stuff please! I want to read and give a shout out in my next chapter.  Oh I like the sound of 'coo'l in regards to my work.  Many thanks for that sweetie.  :happy:

I am afraid I scare a lot of people away with my fic, it is a monster. :blink:

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 19 avril 2010 - 03:39 .


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Stuffy38 wrote...

Yes, when I hit page 5 when I'm typing, I'll start thinking about wrapping up the chapter or finding the next logical break to end it.


I wish I had the restraint, lol. It's like: *look at post it notes on desk* "NOOOOO I CAN'T FINISH THIS YET I NEED TO WRITE ABOUT *this character* and *this scene* before it's finished!"

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I'm not scared...just in awe, Gil.

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Aw, thanks Ette! I figured though most look at it and go "230,383 words, 75 chapters? Aw hell no!" ROFL. I mean I might look at that and go, um, yeah I only have so much time, so uh, no. :blink:

soignee, I need links to yours too sweetie. And I am glad I am not the only one with post it notes stuck to their desk. You make me feel better. Looks like an insane person sits there. OH wait, an insane person does sit at my desk.:o

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 19 avril 2010 - 04:01 .


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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...
Uh oh! Guilty as charged Stuffy! *waves* Hey linky to your stuff please!


Happy to oblige!

Cheers!

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:D  Hey, Gil.  I think it's great that your reputation/work proceeds you.  Keep it up.  I'll talk to you laters...gots to get some sleep for that day job thing I've got going on. 

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Night night my dear Ette! And if Ette keeps stroking my ego, my head is going to swell!

And thanks Stuffy! OMG you are my Rancho Relaxo reviewer! *HUGS* Oh boy, oh boy! I am so happy! HUZZAH! :D

I shall give you a shout out too my friend. So nice to meet you on the forum. This is like Christmas! :lol::wub:

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 19 avril 2010 - 04:43 .


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Okay Stuffy, now you have done it. I am totally smitten with Uncommon Soldier! I gave you and it a shout out. I reviewed it too. *sigh* another fanfic to steal moments with. Like Weird Al in his music video for "Too White And Nerdy." I am going to have fun with my bubble wrap known as fanfic. :wub::D

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 19 avril 2010 - 05:39 .


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"The praise of the praiseworthy is above all rewards"



J.R.R. Tolkien

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If you are going to quote Tolkien to me, I am going to fall in love with you Stuffy, watch out! :P

On another note, not deflecting with humor, I am going to tear up and blush profusely! *shuffles shyly* Gee, thanks, I am humbled. *HUGS*^_^

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 19 avril 2010 - 05:39 .


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On word count/page totals, when I'm writing I shoot for a general goal of no less than 1500 words (this is a goal but by no means a standard for me). Sometimes I go over and other times I'm just about right there. I think the longest chapter I've written was 3800 words and it involved wall sex, so go figure. The power of faux smut compels you to write!



Honestly, for me, it's not the word count that matters so much as the story. If you can capture what you need to in a chapter with less words great. If you can't? That's ok too. Shake your word maker and show the fanfic world what you got is what I say.

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On the subjects of length...yeah. I've been trying to average 3k words per chapter. Apparently (according to FF.Net) my shortest chapter in The Hunt is just under 1,400 words ('Bathing'...guess I should have added sex ;)).



As Tasmen said though, the story is more important than the word count. I'd rather have good pacing and a relatively cohesive structure than something that's been deliberately padded out to look bigger. And I especially like ending a chapter in what feels like 'the right place'.

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3K is about my limit, I recently split a chapter that was going on for 5K because I thought it was too long and out of proportion to the other.

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Absolutely - you need to have proper break in the story to start a new chapter. Before I started writing FF I never managed to write in chapter lots - part of me really loves the discipline of posting chapter updates - it really makes me focus my writing down to what needs to happen in order to progress the plot. Also great fun!

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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...

Aw, thanks Ette! I figured though most look at it and go "230,383 words, 75 chapters? Aw hell no!" ROFL. I mean I might look at that and go, um, yeah I only have so much time, so uh, no. :blink:

soignee, I need links to yours too sweetie. And I am glad I am not the only one with post it notes stuck to their desk. You make me feel better. Looks like an insane person sits there. OH wait, an insane person does sit at my desk.:o


www.fanfiction.net/s/5771314/1/Dead_Duster_Walking


15 chapters so far, 55000ish words. And I think I got 8 chapters left, give or take. >< And a sequel planned. Let me gooooo muse!

Does anyone know where their main character came from? Because I don't. Missa Brosca just appeared, kneecapped me to write and she seems to be her own sentient being now with a voice. My head I know there's at least one other crazy person writer who thinks like that, but honestly I can talk about Missa as if she's a person and some how it makes sense, lol.

Gilgamesh1138 wrote...
If I may? I don't know what this is
worth, but I try to limit it to around 4-6k. Any longer and I start
looking for a cut off point and starting a new chapter.

The reason I say this is
that I tend to read at work in between calls at a call center. So it
is really hard to read something too long. I suspect many people snatch stolen moments with their fav
fanfics
.


Requoting this, as according to the traffic on my ff.net, the chapters with the most graphic sweaty bits in are the most well read. This amuses me, somewhat.

Modifié par soignee, 19 avril 2010 - 01:36 .


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ROFL soignee! My character too kneecapped me and begged me to write her story. She isn't hte noble I am still playing through in game. And I would never let Ali sacrifice himself, LOL. So I don't know where Kai came from. And like you she has a voice and personality. I am her slave.:D

I am not surprised that the saucy chapters are the most read. When I write or read the the phrase 'stolen moments,' I invariably picture Weird Al in his music video "Too White And Nerdy," having a stolen moment with a huge roll of bubble wrap. *snicker*:devil:

Oh soignee, I love Dead Duster Walking! Thanks for the link. I shall put a shout out for it on my next chapter.  I don't want Ms. Brosca to kneecap me.  My patellas are still recovering from Kai. :lol:

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soignee wrote...
... as according to the traffic on my ff.net, the chapters with the most graphic sweaty bits in are the most well read. This amuses me, somewhat.


That's pretty much true for 'Duty Doesn't Come For Free' as well.  Stats are weird and intriguing at times, eh?

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Or it just proves what advertisers have known all a long, sex sells, LOL!

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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...

Or it just proves what advertisers have known all a long, sex sells, LOL!


Yes! Though curiously I have two audiences who read my stuff.

I got the "this has dwarves in, I approve" lot who don't like it when it gets to the sex bits, and then I got the "this has Zevran in, I approve" lot who are all "...well I suppose it's interesting what you did with the dwarf bits and the other characters, is there more sexy Zevran bits?"

*tries to juggle them both*

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LOL I had an image of your avatar juggling Zev and and Oghren, LOL! What is wrong with sex and dwarves? Um, how do they think dwarves have babies? Find them under stones? ^ _ ^

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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...

LOL I had an image of your avatar juggling Zev and and Oghren, LOL! What is wrong with sex and dwarves? Um, how do they think dwarves have babies? Find them under stones? ^ _ ^


some people do not like reading it, I suppose >.>

*juggles Zevran and cops a feel*
*realises I just grabbed Oghren instead*
*drops Oghren in disgust*

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I don't get why people don't like sex and dwarves. Although my husband is taller than me, I've always had a soft spot for short men.



And unlike many, many others I loooooove Oghren to bits.

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Miri1984 wrote...

I don't get why people don't like sex and dwarves. Although my husband is taller than me, I've always had a soft spot for short men.

And unlike many, many others I loooooove Oghren to bits.


Is Felsi your middle name? :)

Oghren is a great character though.

And is that why the number of dwarf babies is decreasing?? (Not just Oghren :))

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I do love Oghren, he is so damn funny. I really enjoy writing for him, and getting him into trouble. Well trouble he gets himself into. Usually involving Leliana. : D