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#4776
Posté 28 août 2010 - 05:52
#4777
Posté 28 août 2010 - 05:52
*tickles Sandi's tail* I love you Sandi.
#4778
Posté 28 août 2010 - 06:33
#4779
Posté 28 août 2010 - 08:09
re: Highever's alienage being better than Denerim's, I must have missed Iona's dialogue! Merely due to Vaughan, though, I would have hoped Highever was better, yes. The idea of the Denerim elves being told Highever is worse to keep them from leaving and reducing the city's menial workforce is a cool one, however.
#4780
Posté 28 août 2010 - 08:17
Tellervo wrote...
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
All I can say on this note is that the elves need permits from the Chantry to marry each other, as well as someone to perform the ceremony. And in one CE ending where Soris marries a human it is considered a 'scandal'. (Although we don't know if she was highborn or common or if the elves or humans or both were scandalised)
...! I had completely forgotten this and it's terribly relevant to my fic! I mean, the level of prejudice there and it being Chantry supported....
And the *interesting* thing is that Soris and his wife must have somehow gotten approval to marry from the Denerim Chantry...they didn't have to elope.
Wonder what happened to Mother Boann. :/ She seemed pretty cool, even if she couldn't stop Vaughan at the CE's wedding.
#4781
Posté 28 août 2010 - 11:22
Related to the Hero fo Ferelden? Yeah, I think that would be enough to be allowed to marry.Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
Tellervo wrote...
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
All I can say on this note is that the elves need permits from the Chantry to marry each other, as well as someone to perform the ceremony. And in one CE ending where Soris marries a human it is considered a 'scandal'. (Although we don't know if she was highborn or common or if the elves or humans or both were scandalised)
...! I had completely forgotten this and it's terribly relevant to my fic! I mean, the level of prejudice there and it being Chantry supported....
And the *interesting* thing is that Soris and his wife must have somehow gotten approval to marry from the Denerim Chantry...they didn't have to elope.
Wonder what happened to Mother Boann. :/ She seemed pretty cool, even if she couldn't stop Vaughan at the CE's wedding.
#4782
Posté 28 août 2010 - 11:46
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
Tellervo wrote...
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
All I can say on this note is that the elves need permits from the Chantry to marry each other, as well as someone to perform the ceremony. And in one CE ending where Soris marries a human it is considered a 'scandal'. (Although we don't know if she was highborn or common or if the elves or humans or both were scandalised)
...! I had completely forgotten this and it's terribly relevant to my fic! I mean, the level of prejudice there and it being Chantry supported....
And the *interesting* thing is that Soris and his wife must have somehow gotten approval to marry from the Denerim Chantry...they didn't have to elope.
Wonder what happened to Mother Boann. :/ She seemed pretty cool, even if she couldn't stop Vaughan at the CE's wedding.
Thanks for naming the good Mother, just been given an idea...
#4783
Posté 28 août 2010 - 02:03
Sandtigress wrote...
The lines in the CE origin are "Moving to a different alienage isn't easy. Travel and bribes cost money" and "Humans are a suspicious lot. I've heard the ones in Highever are worse than here" immediately following.
If these quotes are accurate, without any missing lines; what the elf is acutally saying is that the Humans in Highever are more suspicious than other humans. Not that the alienage itself is worse. Usually when somebody says bribes I take it to be a not so legal transaction. So moving from one alienage to another does not seem to be sanctioned so the elves need to give money to the right people to get permission. Heh, you all just keep making me replay all the origins don't you! hehe. Off I go to see what is said
#4784
Posté 28 août 2010 - 02:10
Maria: Ooh... np
DreGregoire: I think the Male CE gets a lot more info available (esp right after the wedding crash).
#4785
Posté 28 août 2010 - 02:18
DreGregoire wrote...
Sandtigress wrote...
The lines in the CE origin are "Moving to a different alienage isn't easy. Travel and bribes cost money" and "Humans are a suspicious lot. I've heard the ones in Highever are worse than here" immediately following.
If these quotes are accurate, without any missing lines; what the elf is acutally saying is that the Humans in Highever are more suspicious than other humans. Not that the alienage itself is worse. Usually when somebody says bribes I take it to be a not so legal transaction. So moving from one alienage to another does not seem to be sanctioned so the elves need to give money to the right people to get permission. Heh, you all just keep making me replay all the origins don't you! hehe. Off I go to see what is said
Yep that's what it says I totally took that the wrong way when I played it the first 10 times.
Shadow of Light Dragon, you are trouble *mock glares* now I have to go and play past that point to see what happens heheh. I actually have replayed the Origins more than anything else. There is just something about the transition from life as it was suppose to be and what it becomes
Modifié par DreGregoire, 28 août 2010 - 02:19 .
#4786
Posté 28 août 2010 - 03:16
That's assuming that this only happens when the Warden is a CE. I know we only see the epilogue if we are but I think that's more a matter of interest because the, say, DE probably wouldn't have an interest in what that random guy he found in the dungeon did post-Blight. In the same vein, you only find out that Cullen either is a super-strict lead Templar replacing Greagoir or goes on a killing spree if you're a mage and I think that's equally likely to happen with all oriigns.Raonar wrote...
Related to the Hero fo Ferelden? Yeah, I think that would be enough to be allowed to marry.Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
Tellervo wrote...
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
All I can say on this note is that the elves need permits from the Chantry to marry each other, as well as someone to perform the ceremony. And in one CE ending where Soris marries a human it is considered a 'scandal'. (Although we don't know if she was highborn or common or if the elves or humans or both were scandalised)
...! I had completely forgotten this and it's terribly relevant to my fic! I mean, the level of prejudice there and it being Chantry supported....
And the *interesting* thing is that Soris and his wife must have somehow gotten approval to marry from the Denerim Chantry...they didn't have to elope.
Wonder what happened to Mother Boann. :/ She seemed pretty cool, even if she couldn't stop Vaughan at the CE's wedding.
#4787
Posté 28 août 2010 - 03:46
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
DreGregoire: I think the Male CE gets a lot more info available (esp right after the wedding crash)....
Who is the information from. Do you remember? Because those people leave before the wedding
#4788
Posté 28 août 2010 - 11:49
DreGregoire wrote...
Sandtigress wrote...
The lines in the CE origin are "Moving to a different alienage isn't easy. Travel and bribes cost money" and "Humans are a suspicious lot. I've heard the ones in Highever are worse than here" immediately following.
If these quotes are accurate, without any missing lines; what the elf is acutally saying is that the Humans in Highever are more suspicious than other humans. Not that the alienage itself is worse. Usually when somebody says bribes I take it to be a not so legal transaction. So moving from one alienage to another does not seem to be sanctioned so the elves need to give money to the right people to get permission. Heh, you all just keep making me replay all the origins don't you! hehe. Off I go to see what is said
You can actually take it even one step further: the humans in Highever are harder to bribe, which marks Highever as a whole a more law-abiding Alienage. The laws are still stacked against the elves, perhaps, but the guards more or less follow them better.
#4789
Posté 29 août 2010 - 12:01
Dean_the_Young wrote...
DreGregoire wrote...
Sandtigress wrote...
The lines in the CE origin are "Moving to a different alienage isn't easy. Travel and bribes cost money" and "Humans are a suspicious lot. I've heard the ones in Highever are worse than here" immediately following.
If these quotes are accurate, without any missing lines; what the elf is acutally saying is that the Humans in Highever are more suspicious than other humans. Not that the alienage itself is worse. Usually when somebody says bribes I take it to be a not so legal transaction. So moving from one alienage to another does not seem to be sanctioned so the elves need to give money to the right people to get permission. Heh, you all just keep making me replay all the origins don't you! hehe. Off I go to see what is said
You can actually take it even one step further: the humans in Highever are harder to bribe, which marks Highever as a whole a more law-abiding Alienage. The laws are still stacked against the elves, perhaps, but the guards more or less follow them better.
I am not comfortable making that assumption because it doesn't match the sentence structures. The second sentence definately refers to moving between alienages in the first sentence; whereas. the fourth sentence refers to the humans in sentence three.
Modifié par DreGregoire, 29 août 2010 - 12:04 .
#4790
Posté 29 août 2010 - 12:10
LupusYondergirl wrote...
It could be that there is a separate Bann or whatever for the city of Highever distinct from the tyernage itself. Like how you can be Arl of Amaranthine in Awakenings but there the city has Bann Esmerele
Perhaps it's location related, because on the map the Arling is way outside the city. It would be difficult to be that far away from the city and run it. The way I see it is that it depends on work load, distance, and favor giving heh.
#4791
Posté 29 août 2010 - 12:38
#4792
Posté 29 août 2010 - 12:50
#4793
Posté 29 août 2010 - 12:56
I don't know. I've never heard of her before and can't find any reviews/alerts to suggest that she has but there are some unusual aspects of the DN story that I have in my story (not going the 'I want to literally be the sole honorable woman in a den of thieves' route, not having a 'I want to just be a warrior and not a politician' route, not having any mention of LI although that doesn't mean she didn't have one, being actually sympathetic to Trian, not hating Bhelen for what happened) and there was the name mix-up at the end so it's entirely possible.LupusYondergirl wrote...
That is odd. Does the story itself read like she was inspired by your Aeducan? Maybe the author read your stories and that inspired her, so it's actually some kind of meta-fanfic.
#4794
Posté 29 août 2010 - 01:08
DreGregoire wrote...
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
DreGregoire: I think the Male CE gets a lot more info available (esp right after the wedding crash)....
Who is the information from. Do you remember? Because those people leave before the wedding
Oh, no, I mean info in general, not specifically about travel between alienages etc!
For instance, after Duncan's given you his sword and before you rescue the women, you can go and ask Alarith about his encounter with the Dalish when he was escaping Tevinter with his family. If you're a female CE you never get the chance to see that convo ever.
Modifié par Shadow of Light Dragon, 29 août 2010 - 01:09 .
#4795
Posté 29 août 2010 - 01:20
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
DreGregoire wrote...
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
DreGregoire: I think the Male CE gets a lot more info available (esp right after the wedding crash)....
Who is the information from. Do you remember? Because those people leave before the wedding
Oh, no, I mean info in general, not specifically about travel between alienages etc!
For instance, after Duncan's given you his sword and before you rescue the women, you can go and ask Alarith about his encounter with the Dalish when he was escaping Tevinter with his family. If you're a female CE you never get the chance to see that convo ever.
okies hehe. You definately get more information as a male than you do as the captured female
#4796
Posté 29 août 2010 - 04:45
#4797
Posté 29 août 2010 - 04:47
Sarah1281 wrote...
So as an update on the mysterious 'someone totally used my character's name at one part of their story' thing...I just got a reply from the author who told me that they gussed that they'd been reading too much of someone's 'really amazing' Aeducan stories who used Aunn as their DN's name. I guess they didn't make the connection.
I guess that can happen.
#4798
Posté 29 août 2010 - 04:56
In other news, I published my chapter 15 and I can't help but feel it's not as awesome as the previous two ones. Granted, it WAS supposed to be more of a transition, but still.
Sigh. Perfectionism will kill us, or me in this case.
Modifié par Raonar, 29 août 2010 - 04:57 .
#4799
Posté 29 août 2010 - 05:25
#4800
Posté 29 août 2010 - 05:30
TanithAeyrs wrote...
Ack, god baby stories are tough. Trying to make things belivable with the knowledge we have. Anyone else struggling with this?
If my story goes as planned, I will be (struggling with it)....in the meantime I'll read/study your story and see how you deal with the OGB.





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