Fanfiction Sucks
#6276
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 03:04
I've noticed also that this fandom can be very boxy and that people clump together in their boxes, more so then, you know, real life. I'll happily cross over into other genres and such and try new things, but fandom is more clique-y, weirdly. "Oh, that has _____ with [character A] and is primarily about ____, not interested."
Or is that fandom in general? No clue.
With regarding my emo!post previously, despite my HURRAH WRITING words, my creativity has been vacuumed up, which might corallate with the interest shrinkage Mousestalker mentioned. I want to finish DDW though, considering I'm nearly at the last hurdle anyway. I put so much work into it, might as well finish!
#6277
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 03:30
#6278
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 04:05
I have no idea. I've never gotten involved with a fandom before DA beyond just writing and reading stories for it. It can certainly be a trying experience sometimes. (I have NEVER managed to ****** people off online quite so much, often, and quickly before I started talking to the Alistair fans)I've noticed also that this fandom can be very boxy and that people clump together in their boxes, more so then, you know, real life. I'll happily cross over into other genres and such and try new things, but fandom is more clique-y, weirdly. "Oh, that has _____ with [character A] and is primarily about ____, not interested."
Or is that fandom in general? No clue.
#6279
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 04:12
People have characters they are attached to. Alistair, Zevran, Leliana and Morrigan all have their defenders.
I was shocked at how protective I am about my canonical Warden and her family. Fictional characters and I was actually getting quite worked up at one point.
#6280
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 04:25
#6281
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 05:52
As for the cliquishness... I don't know. If there's a story with a character I like I'll usually go out of my way to read it. I read most of the Anders stories (but that isn't many). I generally don't AVOID anything because of the characters. Just... some parings and topics seem to have more than their fair share of < diplomatic >stories that I do not care for < /diplomatic >. HN/Alistair is a big one. Maybe because it's the most common. But... marriage/princess fantasy isn't really my bag and there's a lot of it when those two characters come to the party.
#6282
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 06:14
The other story killer is the pure Mary Sue Warden.
#6283
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 06:17
*glances uncomfortably over Warden list* Yes. Absolutely.mousestalker wrote...
The other story killer is the pure Mary Sue Warden.
#6284
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 06:19
#6285
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 06:25
Or like this: "Angélique Amell, Circle Mage for all of six hours and Grey Warden for less than half a year, was not very happy and had no problem letting everyone around her know it. "This is such a drag," she complained, sweeping her long golden hair out of her bright violet eyes as she walked along the empty halls. She was very pretty and liked nothing more than to be reminded of it by the less-beautiful people of the world."mousestalker wrote...
Probably the worst way to begin a story (for me) would be "Mary Sue Aedbrosbrisana was that rarity, a half elf/half dwarf. Dwarven royalty as she was, she had learnt the skills of the finest dwarven warriors as well as the most closely guarded magical secrets of the Circle of Magi."
#6286
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 06:28
#6287
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 06:31
Sarah1281 wrote...
*glances uncomfortably over Warden list* Yes. Absolutely.mousestalker wrote...
The other story killer is the pure Mary Sue Warden.
Part of why I'm writing about Tayte Cosuland, instead of "Varen Caron" (my Awakening run.) Varen had maxxed cunning and coersion, the best weapons and armor, the best Sword and board abilities, the works. He even convinced Sigrun to hug darkspawn.
And I'm still trying to keep Tayte realistic. She dreadfully wants to just blow everything up, no matter how well she hides it... (note: she's not a mage.)
#6288
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 06:49
Granted, he IS an Orzammar noble so that kind of justifies it. I'll have to be careful not to make him look too awesome before the Orzammar part. That will be the really complicated stuff of his life.
The problem is that the game actually does make it possible for the Warden to become a Mary Sue / Gary Stu, or very close.
#6289
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 06:58
Raonar wrote...
The problem is that the game actually does make it possible for the Warden to become a Mary Sue / Gary Stu, or very close.
tbh, I'd go as far and say they are.
*everyone wants to sleep with you
*everyone expects you to solve their problems
*even nobility, kings and queens bows to your whims
etc and so forth
<.<
#6290
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 07:44
Sarah1281 wrote...
Or like this: "Angélique Amell, Circle Mage for all of six hours and Grey Warden for less than half a year, was not very happy and had no problem letting everyone around her know it. "This is such a drag," she complained, sweeping her long golden hair out of her bright violet eyes as she walked along the empty halls. She was very pretty and liked nothing more than to be reminded of it by the less-beautiful people of the world."mousestalker wrote...
Probably the worst way to begin a story (for me) would be "Mary Sue Aedbrosbrisana was that rarity, a half elf/half dwarf. Dwarven royalty as she was, she had learnt the skills of the finest dwarven warriors as well as the most closely guarded magical secrets of the Circle of Magi."
Hah! Sarah this is quite obviously parody, and therefore fantastic
#6291
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 10:33
#6293
Posté 16 octobre 2010 - 11:05
#6294
Posté 17 octobre 2010 - 07:53
#6295
Posté 17 octobre 2010 - 09:24
Even sending Alistair away can be put down more to fear than selfishness.
#6296
Posté 17 octobre 2010 - 11:04
#6297
Posté 17 octobre 2010 - 11:37
Raonar wrote...
A question to you all here. What do you feel about lady Isolde? Am I too harsh to see her as a selfish, annoying ****?
I see it from a Mother's POV. When you have a kid, you turn selfish. The entire world is **** and your want to save your child. Basic human reaction to protect the young, really.
#6298
Posté 17 octobre 2010 - 12:25
Of course, I did immediately add the scene of him going to comfort Connor (and the kid starts crying in his arms... Poor thing.)
I always liked how Connor was totally willing to assume responsibility for that whole mess, and for how he would accept dying to stop it.
#6299
Posté 17 octobre 2010 - 03:30
The fact that Connor gets possessed mainly seems to be Jowan's fault. Yes, he wasn't allowed to take his Harrowing because he was suspected of being a blood mage but he turned to blood magic in the first place because he wasn't particularly talented and felt he wasn't up to Circle standards (which may be true). He wasn't a competent instructor to begin with and Isolde really would have been better off going to the mage's collective. Then there's the fact that Jowan left those 'bad books' around for Connor to see that may have played a part in the possession, that we don't even know if he could withstand a possession as he never underwent his Harrowing, and the poisoning. Jowan neglected to instruct Connor on demons at all and possessed Connor has no idea what's happening to him. Even if he didn't recognize the demon at the time he agreed to let it possess him, if he had been aware of demons then he probably would have realized what was happening at some point. The demon doesn't overpower Connor and force itself into him which could have happened even if he were at the Circle. The demon makes a deal with Connor. It would possess him in return for saving Eamon. Why does Eamon need to be saved? Jowan was poisoning him which was his primary reason for being there (and likely affected the quality of limited instruction he gave Connor).
Yes, Isolde ignored the law. Yes, the law is there for a reason. I just can't hold her solely - or even mostly - responsible for Connor getting possessed. The only way she really could have stopped the situation would have been murdering her son (when you go to the Circle and appeal to Irving for help, his initial thought is 'kill the abomination' and she doesn't know of another way and needs a mage to suggest it). I can't join in with the others going 'OMG, why didn't you murder your own son, you selfish ****?'
#6300
Posté 17 octobre 2010 - 03:47
Her reluctance or inability to understand what was going on and what her responsibility to her people was is *understandable,* I think, but not *excusable.*





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