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I limit my writing to my D&D campaigns.  >.>  And it's not nearly complete as my fics are.  I just enjoy running through stories in my head.  Also, writing some of the stuff from the campaigns hurts b/c I do terrible, awful things to my characters.


Newbie here...so, enlighten me about the campaigns.  Are they for some mod project (maybe I should look at your profile page for that info) or for ... well, what exactly?  Am I on the right path in thinking that's like writing an episode rather than an entire story?

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lol, no, my Dungeons and Dragons pencil and paper campaigns. I DM one of the campaigns we play, so I have to plan and write out storylines and adventures for the players. They don't get fully fleshed out like my fics do. Most character synopses, histories of locations. Sometimes more extensive backgrounds if we're starting something brand new.



A campaign is a very long, involved story. There are a couple we have played for years, and writing it all out would be like writing multiple novels, so I don't do that. I've been tempted to write out certain sections, but like I said, I like hurting my characters so it tends to be fairly brutal.

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Oh LadyD, maybe you need to give them a safety word. Mine is "banana." :innocent::P

I love D & D. Used to play it and our GM used to do awful hurty things to us too. And Vampire the Masquerade, and Star Wars too. Okay, Gil is a total geek. :lol:

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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...

Oh LadyD, maybe you need to give them a safety word. Mine is "banana." :innocent::P

I love D & D. Used to play it and our GM used to do awful hurty things to us too. And Vampire the Masquerade, and Star Wars too. Okay, Gil is a total geek. :lol:


I guess the only saving grace is that I always did the most awful things to my characters.  I never imposed the truly twisted things onto the other player characters.  And weirdly, the more I liked the character I was playing, the worse things I did to them.  >.>  I guess it's the price they paid for ultimately having a happy ending.

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Well, see, I'm glad I asked.  I was completely blind in my direction...years, huh?  Yeah, I'd probably be hurting a character or two if I was writing that long and it didn't get finish. 

Glad to see you're alive, Gil.  I figured your readership fans were plying you with loads of feedback now that you've got a chapter or two up.  :happy:

Modifié par EtteStarz, 22 avril 2010 - 05:39 .


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ROFL Ette, I am just glad I got a chapter up again. I am cleaning house, as mum and dad are coming this weekend, and they are my best friends in the world. But my house was a disaster. So, that  I managed to do so, is amazing. Though I feel terribly guilty when I don't get a chapter out everyday. :blush:

LadyD, you sound like my husband. Call of Cuthulu. His characters always got the worst, everyone else's not so much. Though we did have a friend who had to keep remaking characters as his had the bad luck of the dice roll. It was horrible the bad rolls he made, poor chap.  Though it was very amusing to the rest of us.:lol:

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I like your husbamd. ^_^ And yes, the d20 can be a tricky b*tch. I get really attached to my characters, so I don't ever kill my players characters permanently.



The character I did the worst things ever to refused to be resurrected and had to be cajoled for weeks by her dead grandfather and her god to go back to help her friends. She was not a happy camper.

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Good lord, you're cleaning at this hour? I can't hold a coherent thought at this hour - which means I'm probably heading to bed soon. You've got way too much energy, Gil...and you too, LadyD with all that writing. Dang, that makes my little fan fiction seem like a cake walk.

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Well, keep in mind, I said I don't write out the D&D campaigns. Just little snippets, really. All the work really takes place in my head. XD

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Yeah, but you know...sometimes thinking is a small victory for me. So, you can imagine how your ability to develop story lines, histories that keep the players in line - well, maybe I'm just marveling at your ability to tell others what to do and they do it. Hmmm...

Modifié par EtteStarz, 22 avril 2010 - 05:49 .


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Muhahaha, LadyD is da' ruler! Okay, LadyD you are HOT, rowar, telling people what to do. LOL, sorry getting weird, and time for bed.

All I can say is recovery time from a bad review took less time than I thought, and thank goodness for my beta reader who helped slap me back from hysteria to my old self. And to you all, so much thanks to you too. Ette, LadyD, Tasmen, MireliA, Miri1984, Shadow o' LD. I can't thank you all enough. Love you guys, you helped me get over it. Posting here, what a great group. *HUGS* And see you all on the flip side tomorrow. :wub:

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 22 avril 2010 - 06:05 .


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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...

All I can say is recovery time from a bad review took less time than I thought, and thank goodness for my beta reader who helped slap me back from hysteria to my old self. And to you all, so much thanks to you too. Ette, LadyD, Tasmen, MireliA, Miri1984, Shadow o' LD. I can't thank you all enough. Love you guys, you helped me get over it. Posting here, what a great group. *HUGS* And see you all on the flip side tomorrow. :wub:


*hugs* to you too!  I had a look to see if I could find out who this nasty person was who gave you the bad review (an anon poss?) but I got drowned in a sea of reviews LOL :lol:

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EtteStarz wrote...

Alright, I'm taking a small break from whatever I'm supposed to be doing.  So, this is off topic - sort of - but what other creative writing does everyone else do besides for dabbling in fan fiction?  Seems we have a lot of angsty writers floating around...


Well, until I started writing The Hunt, I was using a D&D campaign  I play in for my creative writing outlet. Basically writing out each session from my character's POV, adding in a lot of her thoughts and observations which wouldn't have been voiced during the game itself. It was pretty fun, and the other players always got a kick out of getting inside my angsty samurai's head and seeing what she thought of things they did/said. :) The GM is a little huffy I've stopped writing for the game now I'm working on a fanfiction. :D In my defence, 250k words is pretty hefty. The Hunt hasn't hit 100k yet!

I do a bit of poetry, but rarely, only when the mood strikes me or I actually want a poem for something.

I also did dialogue writing for a Dungeon Siege mod (Ultima 5: Lazarus remake) a while back, which was awesome fun and we even got a double-page spread in Computer Gaming World. :)

Nothing professional, though. I've only ever done creative writing for fun, but it'd be great to do it professionally.

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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...

All I can say is recovery time from a bad review took less time than I thought, and thank goodness for my beta reader who helped slap me back from hysteria to my old self. And to you all, so much thanks to you too. Ette, LadyD, Tasmen, MireliA, Miri1984, Shadow o' LD. I can't thank you all enough. Love you guys, you helped me get over it. Posting here, what a great group. *HUGS* And see you all on the flip side tomorrow. :wub:


Oh dear, what happened? o_O *hugses?*

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Oh it was just a review that threw me. It wasn't nasty, more nit picky and out of context. Made me second guess myself. Some of it was something I did think about, I try to, after all on any review. I think the problem was they read my story as a novel. It isn't one. It is story arcs all threaded together by a common theme, if that makes sense. Anyhoo. posting here with you all really helped. Posted Image

Shadow, I still have to catch up to 33, but read and reviewed 32, LOVED it. I feel for your Zev. I want to cuddle and console him. I love that you have a ton of followers here and FF. A true mark of your ridiculous awesomeness, to paraphrase Zev. Posted Image

And thanks for the hugs! To quote the dwarf who pays you to wrangle nugs: "Suraka! I'm back in the game!"Posted Image

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 22 avril 2010 - 03:38 .


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Hugs to you Gil, I haven't had a bad review on FF yet but I gave my mom the link to my story - she is a huge SciFi and fantasy buff and has written 2 novels (never published but still very good) and she said it was too angsty and stopped after 2 chapters. I wouldn't even have sent her the link but I told her I was writing again and she requested it.



As far as my writing I have only recently discovered FF. I wrote a fair amount of poetry in high school and college but none since then. I have a fantasy series (9 books in 3 different ages) that I have been working on intermittantly for 20+ years. I don't know if I will ever finish them, I have an overall outline for everything but only bits and pieces written - every time I go back and look at my older work it ends up in the trash. I hope writing FF will improve my skills as I have recently picked up on the first series again and started putting more time into it. The story arc over the 3 series involves the establishment and gradual corruption of an order dedicated to preserving human lands and culture and furthering what is perceived as "good".

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Aw, I don't think yours is too angsty at all! In fact, I love it, been a fan for a long time now.



Oh, when you get your books published, I am so buying them. *squee*

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Thanks Gil, ever since she made that comment I have been really worried about over doing the emotion.

I don't know if I will ever finish my books to even try to get them published but I would like too. After all, if I am going to torture my characters so unmercifully, then they should be in print. The heroine (or perhaps anti-heroine) in my last series is a bit like Zevran except she wasn't forced to be that way, she actually thinks what she is doing is right.

Anyway, I am going to work on my FF today, haven't had a chapter up in a couple of weeks due to work. Isabela should be in port soon so my characters can get out of Denerim.

Modifié par TanithAeyrs, 22 avril 2010 - 05:42 .


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TanithAeyrs wrote...

Thanks Gil, ever since she made that comment I have been really worried about over doing the emotion.


You definitely aren't overdoing it.  :happy:

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Thanks Tasmen, I love your writing, your opinion means a lot.

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The GM is a little huffy I've stopped writing for the game now I'm working on a fanfiction.  In my defence, 250k words is pretty hefty. The Hunt hasn't hit 100k yet!

I do a bit of poetry, but rarely, only when the mood strikes me or I actually want a poem for something.

I also did dialogue writing for a Dungeon Siege mod (Ultima 5: Lazarus remake) a while back, which was awesome fun and we even got a double-page spread in Computer Gaming World. :)

Nothing professional, though. I've only ever done creative writing for fun, but it'd be great to do it professionally.


I grew up with my Atari (Nintendo, Sony, Xbox…have them all) and love my PRG’s, but I’m a casual gamer.  This is my first foray into the fandom, and I have to say that I’m pretty awed and inspired by the passion I’ve seen here.  Some of these mod projects are just damn creative and so involved. 

I was dabbling with the toolset and wanted my story to be more a simple side-quest campaign, since I’m a visual person, but after toiling away I decided that I have no technical skills whatsoever to be able to do it “right.”  So, I started my fan fiction instead – and let me tell you, it’s been a great challenge.  I look at endless chapters people are writing and am in awe.  We’re all creatures of habit, and mine is breaking out of the tight, economical journalism writing I’m so used to writing every day.  So, it’s great to see how others are expressing themselves through their writing and work. 

From what I’ve seen, you're all capable of writing and producing good work (professional quality), but I do have to admit that the transitioning into the “professional” creative writing world can be a bit daunting since it has so many different/possible channels.  I’m looking at my calendar and it’s already getting filled to (possible) submission deadlines, and I’m thinking about culling my industry contacts for possible mentors and professional advice – there’s an unspeakable about of networking needed and knowing the conventions/culture is so important – which of course seems counterintuitive since your talent or work is supposed to speak for itself…sort of, but it doesn’t go anywhere if the “right” people don’t see it. 

Anyway, as a sister in the struggle, I’m supportive of all your creative endeavors…now I’ve got to get lunch (always skipping it) before this two hour meeting.  I’ll probably just write more scenes for my fan fiction – or jot down even more things on my perpetually neglected "to-do" list. 

Modifié par EtteStarz, 22 avril 2010 - 05:46 .


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Oh it was just a review that threw me. It wasn't nasty, more nit picky and out of context. Made me second guess myself. Some of it was something I did think about, I try to, after all on any review. I think the problem was they read my story as a novel. It isn't one. It is story arcs all threaded together by a common theme, if that makes sense. Anyhoo. posting here with you all really helped. Posted Image

Shadow, I still have to catch up to 33, but read and reviewed 32, LOVED it. I feel for your Zev. I want to cuddle and console him. I love that you have a ton of followers here and FF. A true mark of your ridiculous awesomeness, to paraphrase Zev. Posted Image

And thanks for the hugs! To quote the dwarf who pays you to wrangle nugs: "Suraka! I'm back in the game!"Posted Image


My dwarf nerd comes in and says it's "salroka."

Trying to force myself to write, only written 50% of the chapter. And those bits are the easy parts! *sobs*

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Sends virtual cookies and chocolate to soignee for writing inspiration. Need my next Missa fix.

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OOPS! My apologies to the dwarves! Salroka! I' m back in the game!





Ette, I am in awe of journalists like yourself. You are so amazing. And I love your fanfic, but I tell you that all the time. Hope you don't get tired of hearing it. I too played Atari (I was a little kid when it first came out). Ah Space Invaders and Pac Man.



That's okay Soignee, I haven't even been able to start mine. It is going to get nasty and graphic, and it is going to be hard for me to write. I hope to pull at your heartstrings, but I always pull mine too.


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Flaggin' friggin' @*!@*&^  double post! Posted Image

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 22 avril 2010 - 06:17 .