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#7776
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 08:17
#7777
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 08:19
Modifié par Maria13, 14 janvier 2011 - 08:19 .
#7778
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 08:37
#7779
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 08:37
Glad they backfilled since it looks like Tuesday might be the best day I've ever had...
(and two job interviews Monday- both second interviews!)
#7780
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 08:42
#7781
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 08:46
I already have weeks of that, ugh. I'm stuck at a certain convo and can't advance past it for the sake of my life >__> Right now I feel struck by the lightening of dumbness...and the effect simply won't abate. Really frustrating. At that rate Lenya and Co are going to rot in the Deep RoadsMahkara wrote...
mousestalker wrote...
It's awful feeling writing and re-writing rubbish.
I agree. I've had days where I've nearly burst into tears over writing the same scene again and again and again and it not working out ever.
But then when it does finally work out, it is ~*GLORIOUS*~. (And that last bit means I've been hanging out with the SiB crowd *way* too much. When I start with the glitter banners or sparkle font, I've finally been converted.)
#7782
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 08:49
#7783
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 09:12
Would we really want that? It seems like it would cause them to minimize the differences between Harrowmont's rule and Bhelen's.Raonar wrote...
I assume it would be too much to hope any part of DA2 will take place in Orzammar?
#7784
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 09:30
#7785
Posté 14 janvier 2011 - 10:02
Merilsell wrote...
. At that rate Lenya and Co are going to rot in the Deep Roads![]()
So that I won't be finished with OEaH when DA2 comes out goes without saying.
Hah hah hah. I'm actually looking forward to DA2 being done before I'm finished writing Diplomatic Relations. Admittedly, it's an AU, so I can be a bit faster and looser with the plot. But since it's taking place in Kirkwall, I'm figuring that there should be all kinds of cross over with my story (as Nathaniel is returning there in DR), which should lead to all kinds of juicy side plots that I haven't even thought up yet. I was dreading the new game screwing with my stories for a bit, but now am all "bring it on!"
#7786
Posté 15 janvier 2011 - 03:40
Also, I just released my shortest chapter yet. It was the only finished part of the bigger chapter that made Tayte too close to being a Mary Sue, so I decided to fix the Tayte scenes and release this one. Link should currently be in my sig. I'd appreciate thoughts on how I did this particular scene... It was a more unique idea than I usually attempt.
#7787
Posté 15 janvier 2011 - 03:39
It would be useful to know because someone from Tallis' (I chose his name, finally
And in other news, why is it just as I am falling off to sleep I get the most awesome ideas for scenes that I can never quite remember the next morning? I had a pretty hilarious idea for a slightly cracky one-shot of Alistair/Zev, and while I can remember the bulk of it, all the dialogue I thought of that made me giggle to myself like an idiot is now rather patchy in my memory. Damn you, lack of memory recorder *grr*
#7788
Posté 15 janvier 2011 - 05:09
catabuca wrote...
I was thinking back to someone's post a few pages ago about choosing Dalish clan names (using angel names, which was a really interesting idea I wish I'd thought of) ... and I started wondering, if Mahariel is the clan name then, does that mean all members of the clan have the same last name, rather than separate family names? I've had a look through the codex and I can't find anything, but I do tend to miss the one piece of information I'm looking for in such situations.
It would be useful to know because someone from Tallis' (I chose his name, finally) clan will be joining him when he leaves, and although I could avoid the subject altogether I'd prefer to know whether this person is also a Mahariel or if I need to make up a new last name for them.
And in other news, why is it just as I am falling off to sleep I get the most awesome ideas for scenes that I can never quite remember the next morning? I had a pretty hilarious idea for a slightly cracky one-shot of Alistair/Zev, and while I can remember the bulk of it, all the dialogue I thought of that made me giggle to myself like an idiot is now rather patchy in my memory. Damn you, lack of memory recorder *grr*
*waves to a fellow Mahariel writer*
Mahariel is not a family name exactly. It is the clan name and the one your Dalish identify themselves from other clans. So my Lenya would formally introduce herself to the others as "Lenya of the Mahariel Clan", or to be really nitpicking; "Lenya of the Grey Wardens, formally of the Mahariel Clan." So all have the same "last name" because the clan is kin and family and the Dalish take proud in that. So all from the same clan are all "Mahariel", to put it simple.
Haha, I know this too well too. My mind is keep fooling me as well, always gives me ideas or complete dialogues when I am unable to write it down on a piece of paper. Under the shower, right before sleeping...it's quite nasty because later I remember only half of it, if at all. Patchy memory indeed. <_<
Modifié par Merilsell, 15 janvier 2011 - 05:09 .
#7789
Posté 15 janvier 2011 - 05:51
#7790
Posté 15 janvier 2011 - 07:06
Merilsell wrote...
*waves to a fellow Mahariel writer*
Mahariel is not a family name exactly. It is the clan name and the one your Dalish identify themselves from other clans. So my Lenya would formally introduce herself to the others as "Lenya of the Mahariel Clan", or to be really nitpicking; "Lenya of the Grey Wardens, formally of the Mahariel Clan." So all have the same "last name" because the clan is kin and family and the Dalish take proud in that. So all from the same clan are all "Mahariel", to put it simple.
Haha, I know this too well too. My mind is keep fooling me as well, always gives me ideas or complete dialogues when I am unable to write it down on a piece of paper. Under the shower, right before sleeping...it's quite nasty because later I remember only half of it, if at all. Patchy memory indeed. <_<
*waves back*
Thank you, I suspected as much. I think it's the fact that 'Mahariel' is presented in the same way 'Cousland', 'Amell' and so on are, and that threw me slightly. So Tallis wouldn't necessarily introduce himself as Tallis Mahariel, but as Tallis of the Mahariel Clan, and effectively therefore has no last name, but may, for the sake of brevity or clarity when among humans, perhaps refer to himself as Tallis Mahariel. This makes sense, to me at least
It will be interesting though to see if Merrill is given a last name in DA2, and if that will be Mahariel or something else. Because there will be those who will assume it means the warden and Merrill were blood relations, rather than it just being a clan designation, if you like. I suspect they will either not refer to her as having a last name (other than saying 'Merrill of the Mahariel Clan' as above), or will give her a unique last name which would throw a little confusion on the status of the Mahariel name the warden carried. iyswim.
*makes no sense, even to herself*
#7791
Posté 15 janvier 2011 - 07:42
Modifié par mousestalker, 15 janvier 2011 - 07:43 .
#7792
Posté 15 janvier 2011 - 07:45
We have codex entries written by "Gisharel of the Raleferin clan" which would suggest clan name, but to be totally fair, he could be "Gisharel surname of the Raleferin clan" just as easily. I think you're justified in going either way with it at this point, until the devs clear it up further.
#7793
Posté 15 janvier 2011 - 08:40
Sandtigress wrote...
Actually, there's no game lore that states for sure whether Mahariel is the PC's surname or clan name. I've tried to ask the devs but with no reply so far. I think most of us have assumed that it's a clan name and are just going with that assumption, but there's no hard evidence that I know of to decide for sure one way or another.
We have codex entries written by "Gisharel of the Raleferin clan" which would suggest clan name, but to be totally fair, he could be "Gisharel surname of the Raleferin clan" just as easily. I think you're justified in going either way with it at this point, until the devs clear it up further.
Ooh, okay, thank you
#7794
Posté 15 janvier 2011 - 10:41
HEY LENYA, JUST THAT YOU KNOW: I HAVE A PLOT TO FOLLOW. *mutters* Stupid, sturdy Dalish....<_<
*looks at her 4k word WIP-chapter with nothing than convos and bangs head on the wall*
Modifié par Merilsell, 15 janvier 2011 - 10:44 .
#7795
Posté 16 janvier 2011 - 12:41
In Awakening Velanna just says "you're from Marethari's clan, aren't you?" Seems like if it was a clan name she would use Mahariel.Sandtigress wrote...
Actually, there's no game lore that states for sure whether Mahariel is the PC's surname or clan name. I've tried to ask the devs but with no reply so far. I think most of us have assumed that it's a clan name and are just going with that assumption, but there's no hard evidence that I know of to decide for sure one way or another.
#7796
Posté 16 janvier 2011 - 12:47
Addai67 wrote...
In Awakening Velanna just says "you're from Marethari's clan, aren't you?" Seems like if it was a clan name she would use Mahariel.Sandtigress wrote...
Actually, there's no game lore that states for sure whether Mahariel is the PC's surname or clan name. I've tried to ask the devs but with no reply so far. I think most of us have assumed that it's a clan name and are just going with that assumption, but there's no hard evidence that I know of to decide for sure one way or another.
She could, but it doesn't necessarily mean she'd have to. "You're one of Hamish's family, aren't you?" could be just another way of saying "You're from the McDonald Clan, right?"
But the first option would imply more familiarity than the second, IMO.
Edit: I believe we were discussing the family/clan name thing a few pages back? Didn't someone confirm that the Dragon Age Player's Handguide confirms the Dalish surnames are clan names?
Here's a piece from the book:
Dalish elves generally only identify themselves by first name as well, but they also have a clan name that is used in formal situations. Dalish clan names generally correspond to the noble houses of the Dales that they descend from.
Sample Dalish Clan Names: Alvar, Brightmore, Brunwyn, Ellwood, Fadrick, Goldhawk, Litwyn, Redway,
Winbow, Yonwyn.
...Oh dear. Is it just me, or does anyone else cringe at reading some of those clan names? What happened, did they get translated out of elvish? :/
Modifié par Shadow of Light Dragon, 16 janvier 2011 - 12:55 .
#7797
Posté 16 janvier 2011 - 01:03
And yeah, a lot of those clan names are awful, which is why I ignored them. :-P
#7798
Posté 16 janvier 2011 - 02:45
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
Here's a piece from the book:
Dalish elves generally only identify themselves by first name as well, but they also have a clan name that is used in formal situations. Dalish clan names generally correspond to the noble houses of the Dales that they descend from.
Not directed at shadow of light dragon directly, but this doesn't really work out to be an accurate indicator of last (or clan) name use. If clan names come from the noble houses of the dales then as the keeper is changed there is a likelihood that the clans name would be changed based on which noble house the new keeper is from. I changed the facts for my dalish elf but according to information from his nursemaid the pc is the son of the previous clan leader and an outsider. I suppose there is a chance some would keep a previous clan name based on which keeper they were born under. Here's the other thing; I always assumed that there was some moving of the dalish from clan to clan as they came across each other. I mean the pickings would get a bit slim if a clan only interacted with there own dalish.
Just an added; the term clan can be used to describe those you live with or those from which you come. Do you think that all dalish only consider the group they are travelling with as clan or do they feel kinship with other groups as well?
#7799
Posté 16 janvier 2011 - 02:50
#7800
Posté 16 janvier 2011 - 03:04
So in terms of bloodlines, I don't think it works perfectly. But the Dalish might not give a crap about being strict about bloodlines. I think simply remembering the roots of the clan is more important to them (although the idea of more violent of 'purist' clans might be fun to toy with).
Modifié par Shadow of Light Dragon, 16 janvier 2011 - 03:05 .





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