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#826
Posté 01 mai 2010 - 07:18
#827
Posté 01 mai 2010 - 07:42
I only have trouble with Wynne, when I try to make her too "busy body" or too much of a biddy. I have to watch I don't do that to her.
#828
Posté 01 mai 2010 - 07:49
I think Leliana is driven by a desire to change the world for the better. She doesn't like to see or cause suffering. She also has a streak of the dramatic--she likes to be on a stage, to have an audience. After Marjolaine's betrayal, I think she is also driven by a desire to be loved again and to be happy.
Wynne is the mentor-mother figure and the voice of reason. If someone's walking off the straight and narrow or flirting with disaster, she tries to give counsel (even when it's not wanted). I think she's driven by a desire to nurture moral and ethical maturity in the hearts of her companions, to ensure they become forces for good.
#829
Posté 01 mai 2010 - 07:51
#830
Posté 01 mai 2010 - 08:19
Or female, at any rate.
#831
Posté 01 mai 2010 - 10:04
Gilgamesh1138 wrote...
Aw, that is sweet! My mum is a nicer version of Morrigan. She is a Scorpio, LOL! Posted more fan art, newer versions of ones I did already. I may delete the old ones, please let me know what you think.
I only have trouble with Wynne, when I try to make her too "busy body" or too much of a biddy. I have to watch I don't do that to her.
"Wait... There is a nicer version of Morrigan? Surely you're talking about a broodmother or something..."
Flemeth reminds me of my mum... Let's not go there, shall we...
#832
Posté 01 mai 2010 - 10:05
Modifié par Maria13, 01 mai 2010 - 10:44 .
#833
Posté 01 mai 2010 - 04:34
It is official then, Shadow is a Goddess! :happy:
Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 01 mai 2010 - 04:35 .
#834
Posté 02 mai 2010 - 09:06
#835
Posté 02 mai 2010 - 09:44
Gilgamesh1138 wrote...
Okay, question for all you talented, talented people out there. I just wrote an angsty chapter where my PC has a little bit of a whine and a moan. And I worried that it would be too much angst and that gets tedious. So, how do you all keep from having too much whine with your cheese?
Your PC can't be a shiny, happy person all the time. It would be unnatural if she was.
Using humour is probably a good deflection. And after all Kai has been through, I'm really not surprised she's having a good moan!
#836
Posté 02 mai 2010 - 10:06
#837
Posté 02 mai 2010 - 11:22
You have a lot less angst in your FF than I have in mine right now. Hopefully I wil have Zev back to himself a little more in my next chapter.
On that note - Zev and sailing - I think he would love it - any thoughts from y'all?
#838
Posté 02 mai 2010 - 11:33
#839
Posté 02 mai 2010 - 11:36
Don't think I'll put him in a pirate costume, but he is on Isabela's ship.
#840
Posté 02 mai 2010 - 11:43
But Zev, your Zev Tanith is the yum no matter where he is or what he is dressed in. Or not dressed in...*ehem, clears throat and wipes brow* Has it gotten warm in here? And as for angst, yes you do. But you do it in a classy way. And it fits. I was trying to emulate you, my angst hero. Really I read the stuff you all write, and I think, okay, I need to take a page from Miri's book, and I need to do angst like Tanith. Kai thanks you for the kleenex. : D
#841
Posté 02 mai 2010 - 11:47
And, um yes, there will be some not dressed Zev in this chapter - they have to make up- don't they?
#842
Posté 03 mai 2010 - 12:01
#843
Posté 03 mai 2010 - 12:02
#844
Posté 03 mai 2010 - 12:05
Hm...elven mascara...
#845
Posté 03 mai 2010 - 12:08
#846
Posté 03 mai 2010 - 12:24
Miri, I am with you, why does he? *sigh*
Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 03 mai 2010 - 12:25 .
#847
Posté 03 mai 2010 - 12:44
#848
Posté 03 mai 2010 - 12:51
#849
Posté 03 mai 2010 - 01:04
#850
Posté 03 mai 2010 - 01:12





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