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#826
Miri1984

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Lelli is really difficult, I agree. Wynne, not so much. She reminds me of my mum. Or how I'd like to be at her age :).

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Aw, that is sweet! My mum is a nicer version of Morrigan. She is a Scorpio, LOL! Posted more fan art, newer versions of ones I did already. I may delete the old ones, please let me know what you think.



I only have trouble with Wynne, when I try to make her too "busy body" or too much of a biddy. I have to watch I don't do that to her.

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My two cents...



I think Leliana is driven by a desire to change the world for the better. She doesn't like to see or cause suffering. She also has a streak of the dramatic--she likes to be on a stage, to have an audience. After Marjolaine's betrayal, I think she is also driven by a desire to be loved again and to be happy.



Wynne is the mentor-mother figure and the voice of reason. If someone's walking off the straight and narrow or flirting with disaster, she tries to give counsel (even when it's not wanted). I think she's driven by a desire to nurture moral and ethical maturity in the hearts of her companions, to ensure they become forces for good.

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Oh, thanks Shadow that helps a lot. And both make sense! But then again, you are a Goddess. Or God, as the case may be. : D

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*Definitely* a goddess.



Or female, at any rate. ;)

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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...

Aw, that is sweet! My mum is a nicer version of Morrigan. She is a Scorpio, LOL! Posted more fan art, newer versions of ones I did already. I may delete the old ones, please let me know what you think.

I only have trouble with Wynne, when I try to make her too "busy body" or too much of a biddy. I have to watch I don't do that to her.


"Wait... There is a nicer version of Morrigan? Surely you're talking about a broodmother or something..."

Flemeth reminds me of my mum...  Let's not go there, shall we...:blink:

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Double post

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#833
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OH my! Luckily I have no Flemeth's in my life.

It is official then, Shadow is  a Goddess! :happy:

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 01 mai 2010 - 04:35 .


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Okay, question for all you talented, talented people out there.  I just wrote an angsty chapter where my PC has a little bit of a whine and a moan.  And I worried that it would be too much angst and that gets tedious.  So, how do you all keep from having too much whine with your cheese?  :P

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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...

Okay, question for all you talented, talented people out there.  I just wrote an angsty chapter where my PC has a little bit of a whine and a moan.  And I worried that it would be too much angst and that gets tedious.  So, how do you all keep from having too much whine with your cheese?  :P


Your PC can't be a shiny, happy person all the time. It would be unnatural if she was.

Using humour is probably a good deflection. And after all Kai has been through, I'm really not surprised she's having a good moan! :D

#836
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ROFL, well good! I have read some fanfics (no one here) that have been nothing but "oh woe is me" the whole time until I wanted to kick their PC's arse. I hope you will all tell me if I start to give you that feeling. Ugh! And I plowed through it anyways, because I can't stop once I start. Or I don't like to. I have read many a bad novel because of that personality flaw. : P

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Kai definitely has earned the right to whine more than a little - I think Zev and Alistair will keep her from going overboard. Sends Kleenex for Kai - I think she needs it.



You have a lot less angst in your FF than I have in mine right now. Hopefully I wil have Zev back to himself a little more in my next chapter.



On that note - Zev and sailing - I think he would love it - any thoughts from y'all?

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OOoh, Zev in a pirate costume. Yum. Makes me think of that Zev Zorro picture that Louvette did. Seen it?

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Oh my, yes. Yummy.



Don't think I'll put him in a pirate costume, but he is on Isabela's ship.

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ROFL Miri, I had the same thought. And I love Zev in that Zorro costume too.



But Zev, your Zev Tanith is the yum no matter where he is or what he is dressed in. Or not dressed in...*ehem, clears throat and wipes brow* Has it gotten warm in here? And as for angst, yes you do. But you do it in a classy way. And it fits. I was trying to emulate you, my angst hero. Really I read the stuff you all write, and I think, okay, I need to take a page from Miri's book, and I need to do angst like Tanith. Kai thanks you for the kleenex. : D

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As you well know, I really worry about overdoing the angst - Zev and Aithne just can't seem to get things right.



And, um yes, there will be some not dressed Zev in this chapter - they have to make up- don't they?

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OH make up sex! WOOHOO! Well you do well with the angst because you worry about overdoing it. Hey you are on team Zev so you are ridiculously awesome. : D

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Yay team Zev.

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I'm picturing Zev as Jack Sparrow right now. I blame you guys.



Hm...elven mascara...

#845
Miri1984

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Oh, Johnny Depp. Why are you so happily married and so far away?

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@ Shadow, oh my now that does things for my fevered little brain! Girl you crack me up. You know Zev wouldn't mind. He would ask if it was part of role playing.:devil:

Miri, I am with you, why does he? *sigh*=]

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#847
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You guys are probably too young to remember him in 21 Jump street :).

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Um, *looks shifty eyed* I was going to mention 21 Jumpstreet, and then I didn't because you all might think I am old. : D

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Hehe. Embrace your agedness!

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LOL I will since I am not the only one here that knows 21 Jumpstreet. I thought I was the old lady in a group of youngsters. And I wanna be one of the cool kids, I am never growing up, dontcha know?: D