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#9226
Merilsell

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Glorfindel709 wrote...

Burn in the Beyond. Creators take you. Falon'Din abandon you.

That one is good. Very Lenya-like. The others are good too but I need something brisk, short. The others are rather good usable when she is glaring at someone and swears. In *that* scene however,  I simply wanted a term that is stronger than "go away" and I didn't want to use "****** off".

So thanks, guys. ^_^

#9227
Glorfindel709

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I win!

#9228
inquartata02

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Aveline's thumb went somewhere?

#9229
erynnar

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Um...the forum finally comes back up and I walk into Aveline and her thumb visiting places...perhaps inappropriate places? Or my dirty little mind makes it so.

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The Forum comes back up and I walk into Aveline and her thumb...visiting inappropriate places by any chance? At least my dirty little mind makes it so. ROFL!

#9231
Glorfindel709

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Inquartata... I called it with Fiona *sniffles*

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Falon **** you?

#9233
Raonar

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Maria13 wrote...

Falon **** you?


Not a good idea, since falon means friend (Falon'Din =friend of the dead).

#9234
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Urgggggggggggggh... I blame DA2, it's rotting my brain... I sound like Rimmer in Red Dwarf!!!

I think I meant: "Fen **** you" or "Shem'alas fen **** you" (may the wolf **** you filthy human).:blink:

Modifié par Maria13, 13 mars 2011 - 11:07 .


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Raonar wrote...
Another thing. We get the codex about magic and how it's impossible to teleport in both DAO and DA2... and yet practically everyy enemy mage worth taking note that I encountered (human or abomination alike) have been teleporting about constantly. What is up with THAT?

Gameplay nonsense vs. lore. There's a lot of this in both games, like plenty of apostates running around, freely casting magic in the presence of templars or chantry officials, while Anders is whining about how terribly oppressed the mages are.

:P

Modifié par klarabella, 13 mars 2011 - 02:49 .


#9236
Merilsell

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Maria13 wrote...

Urgggggggggggggh... I blame DA2, it's rotting my brain... I sound like Rimmer in Red Dwarf!!!

I think I meant: "Fen **** you" or "Shem'alas fen **** you" (may the wolf **** you filthy human).:blink:


WUT? :blink: Do I need to understand this?

In any case, you are swearing more/louder than Lenya ever did, Maria xD

#9237
Maria13

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Hey, just trying to help and probably over-overcompensating...

BTW modelled my Hawke on Lenya.

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Glorfindel709

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Hehe I like gameplay mechanic nonsense. I want to teleport!!!!! =D

My Warden will learn the Keeper method of travel though... muhahahaha

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Merilsell

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Maria13 wrote...

Hey, just trying to help and probably over-overcompensating...

BTW modelled my Hawke on Lenya.


Aww, that is sweet <3

Nah, the swearing is a bit too much for this scene, but very much appropriate for the next chapter :whistle:

#9240
Maria13

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Thank you.

Good, use it then! I like a good foul-mouthed character...

#9241
inquartata02

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 Glor: I'm sorry! :crying::crying:

#9242
Glorfindel709

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*hugs* It's alright Inquartata

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erynnar

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can you see me now? Last night after the crash and the server came back I tried to post and no go.

Aw I am sorry too Glor!

#9244
Raonar

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What are you all apologizing to Glor for?

#9245
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{Minor Spoiler}















In re: Elves in the Circle, First Enchanter Orsino in Kirkwall is an elf. Drat. Now I have to rewrite...

#9246
inquartata02

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Raonar: I was apologizing for something I wrote.

#9247
Glorfindel709

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Don't apologize! It made for excellent story telling. It just made me sad

#9248
erynnar

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It was Inquarta's writing, I knew what Glor meant. It made me sad too.

#9249
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Well after playing through DA2, I was thinking that there is much room for fanfiction to take place between the main events of it. 10 years but we only playthrough three of them if even that many. You would be limited on the main events that take place, but there is much potential there. Now if I can just finish my DAO fanfiction, I might write some DA2 fanfiction. LOL.

Modifié par DreGregoire, 15 mars 2011 - 03:05 .


#9250
Raonar

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I was just told that my fiction is probably a self-insert with mild case of mary sue-ism... lol

I can see why people would think so, but meh. Clearly they haven't fought Meredith yet, because THAT is THE epitome of DA2 mary sues. :)))

SPOILER









After seeing her jump 100 meters into the air and break the granite when landing, unscathed, and then animate 10-meter tall statues JUST with the power of ONE sword... (she wasn't even a mage) I really am NOT guilty about giving my wardens some badass abilities. They aren't anywhere near as cheesy.