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#9476
Posté 31 mars 2011 - 05:59
#9477
Posté 31 mars 2011 - 06:11
Roonya wrote...
Does anyone else have this horrible habit of snacking constantly when trying to write? 'Hmm what should she say here...' *Grabs cookies*
I have the opposite problem. I forget to eat. hehe
#9478
Posté 31 mars 2011 - 06:14
#9479
Posté 31 mars 2011 - 07:01
That aside, I have reached the Deep Roads expedition part... and it will be insane. My DN protagonist is a doom magnet after all.
#9480
Posté 31 mars 2011 - 08:19
#9481
Posté 31 mars 2011 - 11:22
DreGregoire wrote...
I have the opposite problem. I forget to eat. hehe
Me too. Not good.
#9482
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 01:01
#9483
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 01:26
Mahariel Mage and Templar Oneshot Goodness within the next two weeks, y'all!
#9484
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 01:34
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
DreGregoire wrote...
I have the opposite problem. I forget to eat. hehe
Me too. Not good.
Well, eating occasionally is good for you, but I'm impressed that you have such demanding muses. I'm lucky if I can stay focused for an hour.
#9485
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 02:37
#9486
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 05:54
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
I am eating calamari and chips right now. It is nummy.
Raw calamari?
#9487
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 05:59
#9488
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 06:16
Glorfindel709 wrote...
Cotton Candy and Pepsi.
Cotton candy and pepsi are a lie. You should know this.
#9489
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 06:31
#9490
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 06:36
Glorfindel709 wrote...
Really? Because the gurgling in my stomach disagrees.
The gurgling might just be an illusion you know...
#9491
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 10:20
maxernst wrote...
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
DreGregoire wrote...
I have the opposite problem. I forget to eat. hehe
Me too. Not good.
Well, eating occasionally is good for you, but I'm impressed that you have such demanding muses. I'm lucky if I can stay focused for an hour.
i forget to eat also, though it happens more for drawing for me then writing. when i get going i can paint and draw for hours without stopping. what usually stops me is waiting for paint to dry in which i start planning my next painting or work on another one, other times i use it for checking messages and what not. you can tell when i've been in a really intense drawing/ painting session... i cant talk or make sense of words... its so wierd. it kina feels like i've just been woken up from a dream...theres that same groggy feeling.
#9492
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 10:34
Roonya wrote...
Does anyone else have this horrible habit of snacking constantly when trying to write? 'Hmm what should she say here...' *Grabs cookies*
Yes, I snack while writing, it's like I need to gnaw on something to get the brain going.
#9493
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 11:00
I am a bad person, aren't I?
#9494
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 01:32
Raonar wrote...
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
I am eating calamari and chips right now. It is nummy.
Raw calamari?
It's chewier raw.
#9495
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 03:11
And I am also boggled.
Basically, in one short line, it says the characters are overpowered (YMMV, since other reviewers disagree with this). The one-liner even urges readers to flee... which I was not perturbed by. I'll just take it as him/her seeking the other potential readers' wellbeing.
What left me stumped is the fact that the review is for a chapter... which has just flashbacks and absolutely no sort of fighting whatsoever.
Modifié par Raonar, 01 avril 2011 - 03:16 .
#9496
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 07:51
#9497
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 08:24
"Harry, I don't think we should get involved in this whole mystery thing... the last time we did Voldemort was involved and you almost died, along with all three of us."
"Relax Hermione, we're just a couple of kids living in an ancient castle surrounded by hormonal children and insane teachers all carrying deadly weapons. What could possibly go wrong with following a few clues to see what the adults clearly don't want us to know about?"
"SOMEONE DIED!!! IT'S ALL MY FAULT!! *sobs and breaks things* NEVER AGAIN! NEVER AGAAAIIIN!"
And now we have a preview for the next installment of the Harry Potter series.... Harry Potter and the Dying Mystery. Everyone dies. and it's all Harrys' fault.
>.> <.<
Modifié par Glorfindel709, 01 avril 2011 - 08:33 .
#9498
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 08:26
jackkel dragon wrote...
Your characters must make flashbacks look too easy, Raonar. How dare they be able to see/learn from the past!
Huh? It was a flashback of no battles... Well, there was this thing about the DN gaining glory in a deep roads excursion, but the story isn't said from the start... and I only put it in because I needed something to justify the prestige he has at the start of the game (plus, just what happens is explained later, and it's not pretty.)
Although, to be fair, I DID make him a defective spirit warrior from the get-go (sort of). This means healing magic doesn't work on him and elemental weapons are the bane of his existence, among other things.
In other news, I found this no punctuation review for DA2, courtesy of Glorf.
#9499
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 08:29
Glorfindel709 wrote...
Everyone knows that real deep characters don't grow from past mistakes. They repeat them again and again.
"Harry, I don't think we should get involved in this whole mystery thing... the last time we did Voldemort was involved and you almost died, along with all three of us."
"Relax Hermione, we're just a couple of kids living in an ancient castle surrounded by hormonal children and insane teachers all carrying deadly weapons. What could possibly go wrong with following a few clues to see what the adults clearly don't want us to know about?"
"SOMEONE DIED!!! IT'S ALL MY FAULT!! *sobs and breaks things* NEVER AGAIN! NEVER AGAAAIIIN!"
>.> <.<
Hahahahahahahaha! Yeah, it's a really unfortunate trend that many people seem to abhor characters that are actually sane and reasonable (and I'm not speaking of me or anyone's stories here... just things I noticed on the internet and in RL).
Modifié par Raonar, 01 avril 2011 - 08:29 .
#9500
Posté 01 avril 2011 - 08:37
Dragon Age: Origins "Like a D&D nerd who got his ear pierced cause he has a crush on the goth girl"
Modifié par Glorfindel709, 01 avril 2011 - 08:45 .





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