MarineBorn wrote...
GuyWithFace wrote...
nitefyre410 wrote...
www.fanfiction.net/s/5735724/1/Heart_of_Courage
Okay guys story is now post on FF.Net ... Check it out. drop a Review. blackout you better add to favorite author list I added you ... 
Might want to... erm... proofread it. I got through the first bit, and the grammatical errors, missing words, and lack of structure really threw me off. D:
wth?? i thought it was about tali and shep? unless shep is the damn fighter?
Argg... Will have Shep... still in the Two years Pior to the game Shep still Dead...
@Guy will do first chapter always the hardest . Trying to get pacing and structure down... as story progress become more refined. No beta this time around... she lives in London.
@Marine... Patience marine settle in enjoy ride, I have a very set plan for this. I wanted to start BEFORE She meets Shepherd again on Freedoms Progress. Story starts Six months after the Normandy SR -1 is blown to bits...
@GWF I will go and edit in the more in the morning ... right now my eyes are hurting from staring at my laptop screen for too long..
im off to bed guys
Oh Marine want to get an Idea of my stories work read Crossroads of Destiny is on my Profile.