Brobodan wrote...
GuyWithFace wrote...
Admiral-165 wrote...
GuyWithFace wrote...
Or, I'm simply saying that you need to get your opinion across in a less-rude way, with less swearing and the like.. I said 'calm down', not 'shut up'.
you know this isn't worth arguing over, obviously what i said was effective because we all agree now, you can't be nice to trolls and other people like them because they take it as a sign of weakness, i know this from personal experience...
We were arguing? And I never said what you had said was 'ineffective', I simply said you could have used less curse words. =P
And, while that is true, getting angry at them also spurs them on. You need to walk a fine line with trolls.
I still do not understand why I am a troll simply for posting this. While it is true that the scenes themselves show no love, what emotions do they bring you? They obviously bring more Tali love from the fans, since they rise so eagerly to defend her. So how does it not belong here?
You said you wanted to strike an emotional string, but ones besides 'fluffies and bunnies.' And I can honestly say those stories did nothing emotionally for me. Absolutely nothing. There was no winding up to build suspense. I just got in there and
bam, dead.
I know it's obvious, but stories need that build-up, and a climax. Your fanfic was over and done with before it even got off the ground.
It was well written, and descriptive enough to provide that 'mental image', but it did nothing for me on an emotional level.
PS: I've only seen one person 'defend her.' Everyone else just kind of ignored it.