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[King Killoth]

ok this is my own creation with typos please ignore them and dont complane about them..I do my best and dont handle rude critasisum but acept honesty. thank you here it is.

In the few days after the fall of the Circle of Magi I found him. The perfect host. His soul lost to the fade yet his body still alive. I moved quickly to become one with him. his memorys his feeling all overwhelming me at first. I awoke on the cold blood slick floor of the tower. my eyes hurt from the lights of the tourches  on the wall. was this what it was like in this world. so bright and cold. I pushes off of the floor my new body acked with pain from laying on the floor for so long. I did not need to alter this body. With out a soul to fight me It remaind in its human apearence. I sat up looking at the dead sloth demon. it was odd he had no wounds on him. as if he was killed in the fade.

The door kicked open as the Templars rushed in swords drawn. They shouted at me. so loud hard to under stand. "Who are you!" shouted the templar into my face as he draged me to my feet. I searched my bodys mind for a name.  "Niall..My name is Niall" my voice sounded so strange. it was not mine but the bodys voice. the templar looked me over as he lead me out of the room . the feeling of the floor under my feet was new i felt the waight of my body. my body is weak but it will do. the templar took me down stairs to meet with other mages. they knew this body. they spoke as if friends. I smiled and used my bodys memorys to speak with them.

The templars questioned me asking me what happened. I told them all that the body knew untill the sloth demon took the soul into the fade. they gave me food and water. I never ate anything befor. it was so new. tasteing the bread was moveing. my body craved it desired it. the water poured down my thought not so mutch taste as mutch as a feeling of cold  moveing with in me. my body craved it. I could feel my body getting restored from the food and water in my belly.

The templars shouted as one was thrown threw the wall by a rage abomination. the fool should have laied dormant. the mages attacked along side the templars. one mage fell droping his staff. my hand reached for it. the wood was warm to the touch. I could feel the connection of the body to the wood. the connection of the magic of the staff and the magic of my body. my body was not strong in magic. But I was. Merging more of my self into my body allowing my power to blend with the bodys.

I lifted the staff and took aim at the rage demon. my body knew spells to attack. I called out the words " Esto Verata Nickto!" a surge of lightning bolted from the staff sticking the already weakening fleash of the abomination. my cast was the killing blow. the body fell turning into a smoldering corpse. the templars cheered with the mages at their victory. I could only smile as they embraced me as a friend.

Over the past few days we have been rebuilding the Tower killing the last of the abominations yesterday. I feel at home now my body settleing in. I have found a deep friendship with a fellow mage her name is  Karen. I am finding myself fond of her. she is smart and kind..for a human. I have spent a lot of time with karen workign on rebuilding the tower. she smiles at me often and whispers to ehr friends about me being cute. today we where cleanign up the library when my hand touched hers. my heart stared racesing. emotions flooded me. How could a human have sutch an effect over one sutch as I. I am finding that I enjoy talking with her but its more than that. I enjoy lisenign to her voice and breathign in her smell. Is it my body or me that feels for her.

The templars have given the call to arms. The first enchanter has sent word that the Warden is marching on Denerim to face the Darkspawn. I would ahve stayed but Karen was going. I felt compeled to defend her. So I volitiered to go . She smiles as we marched off to war. we only camped the one night. I layed in my tent stairing up at the fabric keeping out the night air. The flap folded back as I saw Karen crawl inside. " what are you doing in here if some one finds out you will be punished," I protested for ehr safty. she smiles  to me as she lifts my sheets climbing under them. her body warm to mine. " if we die tomarrow I dont want to have any regrets about my life." her voice sencer and nervous. I put my arms around her holding her warmth to me. I felt the softness of her lips on mine. My heart was raceing hard as if trying to burst from my chest. My eyes closed as my body took over for the night of passion.

I awoke befor her and the rest of the camp. I steped out of my tent and watched the sun rise. I had been in this world for almost a week now. Yet never took the time to realy see this world. the cold morning air embraced me as the burst of light casted arcoss the mountan side. I ws in awe of the beutie of this world. I felt a pair of warm arms wrap around me. my head turned to greet karen with a smile. She looked up to me and whispered " Morning love" her voice soft and sweet as she has ever been. with in me I felt her words. she loved me. or did she only love my body. I could not help but truely love her. not my body but me a Demon of the Fade. I felt this not my body. I turned to face her embraceing her. " We need to talk..It is something I need to explane to you" my voice heavy with fear of how she would react to me. Her smile faded as I led her away from the camp.

I held her hands as I tooka  deep breath " I am not Niall.. at least not his soul.. I am a Demon of the Fade an Abomination.. Niall was dead befor I took his body his soul lost to the fade forever." her eyes wide with horror as she lisened to my words. her eyes full of pain and tears. I did not want to hurt her I just wanted her to know What I was. she did not speak only looked into my eyes. "why would you tell me this" was the only words she spoke to me. "I love you Karen..not my body but me the demon with in it. I truely love you and I give you my self to do with as you desire. I am yours" I pledge my self to her judgement. I droped to my knees as tears ran down my face for the first time. This was a new feeling. saddness. it hurt in my heart. i did not like this feeling.

I knelt there wheeping for her awaiting her to call the templars.than I felt her warm embrace as her lips met mine. "I dont care what you are I love you Niall" she cryed onto my shoudler as she held onto me tightly. The pain of sarrow melted away in an instent. my lips met hers as we fell back onto the dirt. we made love for the second time in my life.

We hurried back to camp as the horn was sounded to wake us. We dressed in our robes and took up our staves. we marched  for hours side by side till we met with the army from redcliff and the dwarves from Orzammar and the Dalish elves from the woods. we all joined witht he wardens at the front. We marched on tward Denerim.

We arived to the sight of the darkspawn horde. Karen and I cast our spells healign and attacking  fighting off the darkspawn. the dwarves stood befor us hacking and slashing at the darkspawn as Karen and I healed them. the was was going in our favor untill. That one stray arrow found  her. Karen was struck down by a darkspawn Alpha. her body whent limp as  if the world was moveing in slow motion. when her long golden hair hit the blood soaked dirt i let my full power consume the body. I let out a rage filled roar as my body tansformed into a monster. the dwarves stood back as the saw the true face of a Demon. I ignored them as I charged at the darkspawn useing ever ounch of rage and power i had to sloughter them left and right. the dwarves saw this and left me to my killing.

After the fall of the Arch Demon the dark spawn flead wail i was still on my rampage.With just one left in my path. the darkspawn that shot the arrow that killed my beloved. I used all thatw as left of me to pour as mutch pain into it as I could. with its final screams fadeing I droped to my knees exoseted all of my power to bind me to this world as well as the fade. I was slipping into nothingness. I crawled to her body. craddleing her in my arms her once warmth not snuffed out in battle. my eyes looked into the fade her soul above her body looking at my true face. Her hand reaching out to caress me one last time befor  Blackness took over.

The end of an Abomination.

[King Killoth]

Well i hope some one out there enjoys this story I put a lot of time into it.

[King Killoth]

well That was my first and alst story I will post here.. now for it to fade away into the bowls of the forums. my it rest in peace

[DOLFY01]

Really good story!!!



Well done!

[King Killoth]

DOLFY01 wrote...

Really good story!!!

Well done!

some one actualy read it...I thought it was dead...