Mox Ruuga wrote...
Yeah, she was so vulnerable she didn't think twice of using Shepard as one of her instruments in her personal vendetta. Or ranting on and on about crushing people so what remains can be squeezed into coffee cups. 
Err... have you seen Jack? Showing unneccesary aggression is a very common way to hide your vulnerability. Tell me, did Liara every behave that violently before?
Besides, I don't buy that look being something that Shepard picked up as an invitation to keep his/her distance. And why wasn't there a chance to break up? You seem to think that intentionally disappointing people, but forcing them to remain chained to the wrecked character is a good move? Wouldn't it be more savvy to allow our Shepards to react? You've admitted yourself that the push to "move on" was there from the writing. So why did they not allow the player the chance to react, to dump the cold fish, or, if you were merely disappointed but still anxious to try and salvage the romance, to try and dig a little more (beyond the "why are you angry at SB"), see what's hurt her so bad, even if the result would be her clamming up? I don't call that sort of railroading good writing, in a story where our decisions and choices were supposedly so important.
I just told you that Bioware did this in order to build dramatic tension in the third game. Why would you care to "break it up" with her? As I said, this would just put you in the same camp as not romancing anyone at all for one game and trying to "save it" for someone else. Every RPG needs to railroad you to tell a good story. Bethesda show that easily enough.
Angry? Perhaps. But it also destroyed the character for me, whom I've now given up as FUBAR. If that was Bioware's goal, they've succeeded. I can't say I agree it's good writing, aiming to leave people disappointed tho. Better to leave them hanging, make them wishing for more. Anxious to see what that third act brings us. Leaving people confused and angry, pissing off fans on purpose, burning those bridges... That's risky. What if they now bring in Liara as a very important, central character in ME3... and nobody cares? Rather, many fans now start dismissing her for her ME2 behaviour and wishing Tali or Miranda or the Ilium bartender had got that role instead? Will you still say that this "reaction" is good for the story, since it is a reaction? Trolling gets reactions, too... As in "a big giant space flea out of nowhere" type of "storytelling".
Bioware can't account for the absolute most hardcore of the hardcore. To give a fringe opinion unneccesary weight would jepordize the cohesion of their entire property. I'm not judging your opinions, but you have to admit that not 1% of the population feels as strongly about this issue as you do. Most people feel vaguely sad but interested to see what Bioware does in the sequel. Bioware is committed to carrying the ME1 LIs through the trilogy because they intend for you to have a great moment of tension in the third game between your ME1 LI and your ME2 LI... slacking off and making the ME1 LIs in the third game uninteresting would run utterly counter to that objective, so I'm sorry if I do not share your slippery slope predictions.
Sigh. I'm feeling you are not reading what I'm writing. Why force us to meta game about Shepard's feelings in a case like this, where at the stake is one of the supposedly most important decisions made in ME1? Especially considering the "cinematic presentation" ambitions Bioware clearly has for this work. Again, compare the Virmire survivor and Liara. It's made blatant that there both was a relationship, and there might yet be one with Kaidan and Ash. With Liara, there's nothing. What the Virmire survivor got was the bare minimum for a romance carryover. Liara got less, there was practically zero amount of romance specific content for her.
Yes, the LI you choose in ME1 is important.... in ME3. In ME2 you're supposed to be isolated and distant from that person, so it doesn't "matter" that much. And I'm sorry, but again, I was much more willing to salvage a relationship with Liara than I was with Kaiden. Liara I at least still felt trust with and knew that she still felt for me, she just wasn't able to show those feelings at this time. Kaiden pissed me off and made me want to slap him in the face, and I'm sorry, but that letter didn't make it up for me as a player. It's all about the subtleties. But it doesn't matter how you feel they were presented, as I said, all 3 of the LIs were purposely cold/pissed towards you and were meant you to drive you away from them.... temporarily.
What you say is merely your own view of Bioware's intentions. But I don't buy your explanation about never being angered by bad writing. Surely you get angry at having wasted your time, or having been misled, or having wasted your money, or seeing something you value being wasted or wrecked, or whatever. Whether you stay angry and/or anxious, and interested in what comes next... That's the point. Bioware didn't ultimately leave me wanting more Liara, or anxiously expecting some silver bullet bit of writing that solves her character issues in ME3 or some hypothetical DLC. After my initial reaction, sure. But no longer. Gone baby gone.
No I really don't. Anger and love are two sides of the same coin and both stem from intense emotions and engagement. Disinterest is what stems from bad writing. I used to read those crappy RA Salvatore books about Drizzt. The last one I read, I got halfway through, dropped it, and never picked it up again. I had read (I believe) 9 of those books before I finally let the series go because I realized it wasn't that good. I don't hate the series either... I nothing it. It's just not something I ever think about any more.
I help teach a creative writing class for one of my professors on campus and one of the things he always tells me is that what he enjoys more than anything else is when doing peer reviews of a class member's work, someone raises their hand and says, "I hated it". It doesn't happen very often, but I can tell right now when that happens, the writer actually did do something right.
(This statement does not reflect the views of the author who themself does not care for the writing of Liara's character in either game)

I understand.
You're white knighting for ME2 and its writing team, anxious about people not loving them as well as you do.
That seems unneccessarily hostile towards someone who has done very well to try and engage a friendly discussion with you without resorting to any kind of crude comments. These forums are for discussion, and when you make those kinds of comments towards your opponents, it makes them not want to bother discussing it with you. And then what use are a forum if nobody actually talks to each other?
EDIT: I mentioned a little further up in this post that I helped a professor at school to teaches a creative writing course. I wasn't using this as a (pathetic rather) appeal to authority or experience. Was just a part of my anecdote. In case there was any confusion.
Modifié par SurfaceBeneath, 18 février 2010 - 12:48 .