Nightwriter wrote...
1.) The wink and coy remarks in the elevator.
2.) "Should've known you wouldn't settle for the captain's quarters" - don't know why but this line was a bit of a mood killer, made it seem like it was just about sex.
3.) LACK OF DIALOGUE IN THE SCENE.
Oh come now we had had the big emotional set up and they were both exicted and ready for the intimate part. Having a little fun and all. I would bring up my own experience here but it would gross Vyn out

Anyway dialogue would have been a mood killer to me. You were alone with romantic lights of the engine and it hum. It was sweet and passionate I thought.
And it was a make out scene. Nobody even had clothes off, it might be a lead up to foreplay scene perhaps. ME1 was a sex scene.
Anyway I find this all rather absurd the entire romance was the dialog leading up to it. Once you both admit you care about each other and she begs you not to die because she is allowing herself to fall for you emotionally...what more do you need to indicate this is a serious connection? A huge neon sign? It is hardly subtle.