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[Auzden]

oh no mr random dude is every ones name for me. any way i wonder if miranda went to school and stuff

[Nightvision91]

Auzden wrote...

oh no mr random dude is every ones name for me. any way i wonder if miranda went to school and stuff

I would think so possibly. It depends if when she was being modified if they implanted some information into her.

[TheSixthghoul]

Well, I was going to watch Dawn of the Dead which, I just found,but I have the time. On that note was thing about putting some dialogue that my Shepard would say to Miranda and others later on, I might even put some up today,not sure if I have the time later.

[VampireCommando]

Auzden wrote...

oh no mr random dude is every ones name for me. any way i wonder if miranda went to school and stuff

Lol, okay then. i dont think Miri went to school per her say, i think her father probbly hired the best personal, and one to one tutors avaliable, to give her the best education, i belive she even says this her self, something along the lines of her having the best education and training money could but, something like that anyway.

[VampireCommando]

Sixth Goul wrote...

Well, I was going to watch Dawn of the Dead.

Wise choice, but which version the new one or old one.

[TheSixthghoul]

VampireCommando wrote...

Sixth Goul wrote...

Well, I was going to watch Dawn of the Dead.

Wise choice, but which version the new one or old one.

The new one,I've only seen the ending to the old. note Miranda=rating

[VampireCommando]

Sixth Goul wrote...

VampireCommando wrote...

Sixth Goul wrote...

Well, I was going to watch Dawn of the Dead.

Wise choice, but which version the new one or old one.

The new one,I've only seen the ending to the old. note Miranda=rating

Ahhh good choice, i much prefer the new one to the old one, and what do you mean 'Miranda-rating'?

[TheSixthghoul]

VampireCommando wrote...

Sixth Goul wrote...

VampireCommando wrote...

Sixth Goul wrote...

Well, I was going to watch Dawn of the Dead.

Wise choice, but which version the new one or old one.

The new one,I've only seen the ending to the old. note Miranda=rating

Ahhh good choice, i much prefer the new one to the old one, and what do you mean 'Miranda-rating'?

Nothing, just making it about MirandaB).

[VampireCommando]

Sixth Goul wrote...

VampireCommando wrote...

Sixth Goul wrote...

VampireCommando wrote...

Sixth Goul wrote...

Well, I was going to watch Dawn of the Dead.

Wise choice, but which version the new one or old one.

The new one,I've only seen the ending to the old. note Miranda=rating

Ahhh good choice, i much prefer the new one to the old one, and what do you mean 'Miranda-rating'?

Nothing, just making it about MirandaB).

i like what you did there, hey do you guys know that Woo shut the Ash support thread down for being off topic, he said the lsat 12 out of 15 pages had been off topic, i was like  WTF were they talking about.

On a brighter notw i think we need some new Miri pics, and art

[TheSixthghoul]

12 pages? Are max is two to three.Can't blame them what could they write about a lame letter and a half arse cameo.

Modifié par Sixth Goul, 25 mai 2010 - 11:59 .

[VampireCommando]

Sixth Goul wrote...

12 pages? Are max is two to three.Can't blame them what could they write about a lame letter and a half arse cameo.

lololololololololololol

On a serious note though i dont know what they can talk about, aprt from her role in ME1, but i think they've been talking about that for a few years now.

[VampireCommando]

I'm off to work now so i'll speak to y'all inabit .

[TheSixthghoul]

Later. All heil,Miranda!!! All heil,Miranda!!!

[Valmy]

jtav wrote...

Well folks, I'm going to disappear for a while so I can finally get work worthy of the name done on this story. Keep your torches and pitchforks ready. You'll need them.

No worries I have a little jtav doll I am going to burn in effigy when you are done!

Good writing!

[Some Dude]

Auzden wrote...

oh no mr random dude is every ones name for me. any way i wonder if miranda went to school and stuff

Some Dude is my name....

[jtav]

I'm actually done for the day. Did a page, but could be worse, all things considered. I'm trying to stretch myself and terrified that this will blow up in my face.

[Valmy]

Auzden wrote...

oh no mr random dude is every ones name for me. any way i wonder if miranda went to school and stuff

She specifically said she got the best education but it was probably private instruction.  She talked about how she was kept from having friends and so forth.

Modifié par Valmy, 26 mai 2010 - 01:56 .

[Valmy]

jtav wrote...

I'm actually done for the day. Did a page, but could be worse, all things considered. I'm trying to stretch myself and terrified that this will blow up in my face.

Relax.  The best way to get better at writing is just to do it.  Keep going and maybe as you do it you might think of another direction to take the story you hadn't considered at first that might work better,

[jtav]

Right *deep breath* There won't be an actual mob with pitchforks. I won't get exiled from the thread. At least Miranda is a hero this time.



Something about Miranda compels me to try ambitious projects and step outside my comfort zone.

[Valmy]

jtav wrote...
Something about Miranda compels me to try ambitious projects and step outside my comfort zone.

As she should.  The character Miranda feels herself compelled to do so constantly for her own self worth.

[Pwnisher]

Hopefully in one of the DLCs that's coming out, Shepard can track down Miranda's father so she can put a bullet through that s#!tbags eyes. That man did monsterous things to Miranda, and monsters always kill their creators.

[kraidy1117]

Did Jtav upload the first chapter? Anyways, Valmy you are right, also there is one way to be a good writer, have a few people you know read it and give you feedback, that's what I am doing with my End run fic, it's a big project, have about 5 people I trust to read it, make sure it's not borning, feedback, erros ect.

[TheSixthghoul]

Okay...Here some dialogue that said I was going to tonight. A little info first, this starts just after keeping the base.Yes, this is fiction no clue what happens after the credits role; just adding my take on my character emotion's and his romance with Miranda. Letting everyone see some of my character development skill.

Anyways,the set up starts in Miranda's office she just finished filing the latest report, she decided to go speck to Shepard,but to her shock he was already leaning on the walls behind her holding a hamster in his hand...



Shepard: It's amazing how much are lives are entangled, so complicated,yet simple.(gets off the wall and walks forward) Oh, sorry I didn't hello, didn't want to disturb you.

Miranda: Uh,how...how long have you been here?Never mind what are you doing?

Shepard: Hmm...Would you believe, I was sniffing through you pantie drawer again?The boy's down stairs do enjoy tales of my... conquest's. Huh those enviousness bastard's.

Miranda: Really,how quick you'll end up as those bastard's.

Shepard: All right, I'm kidding{sigh} that's not really why I'm here.

(Shepard sits down)

Shepard: I've been thinking,about us and I wanted to thank you. You see before you, I've considered myself a diamond trapped in sea full of half wits and at least I'm not the diamond.(setting back)

Shepard:I must admit,of all the similar things we have in common,one thing I know your a better person...

Wow had to rush on this gotta get bed getting early.I was going write more in detail but know time tell me what you think.

[Ieldra]

One question: would you describe Miranda as a "hard woman"?

This is what Samara says about her when you ask. I thought that's not what I'd have said if asked to describe Miranda in a few words (which is impossible anyway), and almost comical coming from Samara, who is hard as diamond when it comes to her duties. What do you think?

And good morning, everyone.

Modifié par Ieldra2, 26 mai 2010 - 06:57 .

[Andaius20]

She make lots of friends!



Miri doesn't soften up until you get to know her. Other wise she's all business, and ruthlessness.