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Warming to Miranda (Support Thread) 2.0


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#4301
Sleepy Buddha

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shinobi602 wrote...

*Harbinger scans over various Collectors to take control of*

*Skims by one holding Miranda*

*Does double take*

O.O

ASSUMING CONTROL

*telepathic link breaks*

??? S****. NO. NOOO!!! ASSUME CONTROL! ASSUME CONTROLLL!!!! @$#^@$^#@!@#!!!



Sorry, Shin. I ASSUMED DIRECT CONTROL first. :devil:

Modifié par Sleepy Buddha, 26 février 2010 - 02:27 .


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Rathias0114

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shinobi602 wrote...

If this is ugly, then DO WANT UGLY.

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If that is ugly - then I don't want pretty.

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This was my joke in the "If you were Shepard" thread.....


/////// 2 WEEKS AFTER ENDING OF ME2, CAPTAINS QUARTERS.....:wub:
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Shepard: Sweetie, could you pass me a pillow?

Miranda: How about we play a game; let's pretend we're married.

Shepard: Ok?

Miranda: Go get the damned pillow your self.

Shepard: .......................................

*Farts*

Modifié par Dr. Burpenstien, 26 février 2010 - 02:29 .


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Sir Ulrich Von Lichenstien

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Dr. Burpenstien wrote...

This was my joke in the "If you were Shepard" thread....

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I guess Yvonne Strahovski is ugly too then eh?

Started a new playthrough, trying out the Sentinel, pretty fun so far and it's at least a little different than my Vanguard. Still gonna romance the Miri :)



Oh, 4 more days till Chuck!

#4306
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Where is everyone lol?

#4307
Jediknight120

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shinobi602 wrote...

Where is everyone lol?


Writing!

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Yep, Miri's made us creative geniuses

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Jediknight120

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Flashy91 wrote...

Yep, Miri's made us creative geniuses


Is there anything she can't do?

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So...Jediknight120. Have any more excerpts you might want to share?

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Sir Ulrich Von Lichenstien

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Jediknight120 wrote...

Flashy91 wrote...

Yep, Miri's made us creative geniuses


Is there anything she can't do?


She can't go in the vents... :lol:

*sighs* amount of people I saw saying that she could earlier today... silly saps. :whistle::P

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Jediknight120

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Captain_Goodguy wrote...

So...Jediknight120. Have any more excerpts you might want to share?


Maybe.

#4313
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Jediknight120 wrote...

Is there anything she can't do?


Fail. Disappoint as well. Impossible for her to do either. :D

#4314
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Jediknight120 wrote...

Captain_Goodguy wrote...

So...Jediknight120. Have any more excerpts you might want to share?


Maybe.


Care to indulge? *wink wink nudge nudge*

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Jediknight120 wrote...

Captain_Goodguy wrote...

So...Jediknight120. Have any more excerpts you might want to share?


Maybe.


Oh, really? Well, I'm sure someone like you wouldn't happen to accidently post an excerpt from your fanfic?Posted Image

#4316
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Keep in mind Shepard's dialog needs to be tweaked some. Although I must say, I'm kinda proud of how I've managed to work in the usage of some... memorable in-game lines throughout the story lol. This is one example


As Miranda exited the briefing room, she found Shepard waiting for her.

“Going behind my back to the Illusive man again, are we Miss Lawson?” he said, a wry smile on his face.

“Not at all, Commander Shepard. We were just…” She hesitated, knowing she was about to lie to the only man she had ever truly cared for. “We were just discussing Oriana. Apparently she and her family are settling into their new home, and there’s no indication that my father was able to track her.”

At least it was a half truth, she thought.

“It’s ok. I thought you would be able to tell when I was teasing you by now” he said with a laugh. Miranda stammered for a moment, and her face began ever so slightly to turn red.

“Why Miss Lawson, I don’t think I’ve ever seen you flustered before. It’s cute.”

She regained her composure, although his obvious attempts at flirting made her smile in spite of herself. “Now is not the time, Commander. We have to get Grunt down to the surface before he tears the cargo hold apart. I’ll meet you in the shuttle bay.” She turned and walked down the hallway.

“And I told you to stop smiling, dammit!”

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Dr. Burpenstien

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Ha, glad to get a response here for my joke.



QUESTION: Does Miranda look like she has a really skimpy outfit on? [Don't hit me.]

#4318
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Dr. Burpenstien wrote...

Ha, glad to get a response here for my joke.

QUESTION: Does Miranda look like she has a really skimpy outfit on? [Don't hit me.]


Perception is everything. ;)

You could say that Jack has a skimpy outfit.. but the Jack fans would argue that it's fitting for her character. Everyone has their own opinions.

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Jediknight120 wrote...

Keep in mind Shepard's dialog needs to be tweaked some. Although I must say, I'm kinda proud of how I've managed to work in the usage of some... memorable in-game lines throughout the story lol. This is one example


As Miranda exited the briefing room, she found Shepard waiting for her.

“Going behind my back to the Illusive man again, are we Miss Lawson?” he said, a wry smile on his face.

“Not at all, Commander Shepard. We were just…” She hesitated, knowing she was about to lie to the only man she had ever truly cared for. “We were just discussing Oriana. Apparently she and her family are settling into their new home, and there’s no indication that my father was able to track her.”

At least it was a half truth, she thought.

“It’s ok. I thought you would be able to tell when I was teasing you by now” he said with a laugh. Miranda stammered for a moment, and her face began ever so slightly to turn red.

“Why Miss Lawson, I don’t think I’ve ever seen you flustered before. It’s cute.”

She regained her composure, although his obvious attempts at flirting made her smile in spite of herself. “Now is not the time, Commander. We have to get Grunt down to the surface before he tears the cargo hold apart. I’ll meet you in the shuttle bay.” She turned and walked down the hallway.

“And I told you to stop smiling, dammit!”


Very nice. I think just tweaking the dialog a little. Maybe make it flow a bit better. Ask like Rathias/Meg for help(sorry about not mentioning everyone else). Don't ask me, I'm horrible at writingPosted Image

#4320
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@Jedi: I love it. :D I love all that is Miri/Shep

Oh god, I've been drinking too much Monster and now I'm all hyper. I had nachos for dinner while working on my essay (it's somewhat finished). And now I have the strangest urge to write a crack fic about 'things that should never be witnessed on the Normandy'... either that or Miri/Shep mega fluff. Meh. I'm indecisive, someone pick for me? Or a vote?

Modifié par pyro_technician, 26 février 2010 - 03:12 .


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Jediknight120

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@ Captain_Goodguy - thanks. :) The dialogue is gonna get rewritten a couple times I'm sure. Right now I'm trying to get all the ideas down before my inspiration leaves - that's usually my problem when writing, I get bogged down too soon and lose focus.

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Jediknight120 wrote...

@ Captain_Goodguy - thanks. :) The dialogue is gonna get rewritten a couple times I'm sure. Right now I'm trying to get all the ideas down before my inspiration leaves - that's usually my problem when writing, I get bogged down too soon and lose focus.


Ugh, I know all too well how that feels. 

One of the things I do nowadays to help me with my block - is to just relax, listen to some music, and start thinking how I would respond to the situation. I modeled my Shepard after me, pretty much - so if I can figure out how I would respond, then it helps me when I'm trying to put it on Word. ;)

Don't get too discourage should you hit a block - nothing is worse than that feeling of letting yourself down. Push through it - and keep writing!

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Woow Miri 2.0 thread! Yay!

I think I'm one of the weird femshep players that actually liked having Miranda around :)

Modifié par Cypher0020, 26 février 2010 - 03:53 .


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Ok how can I put a Miranda support banner in my siggy? They keep erroring out on me...

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Cypher0020 wrote...

Woow Miri 2.0 thread! Yay!

I think I'm one of the weird femshep players that actually liked having Miranda around :)


Hi! :) I think I'm one of the few MaleShep players who had a bromance with Kaiden.