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The Making of Miranda – a hypothesisThis little article is inspired by the debate about Miranda’s father. Ever since she told us about him, I have asked myself: what can he have done to inspire a parting where "shots were fired"? Miranda is not an extreme personality, not particularly predisposed to being easily provoked into violent behavior. So I think what he did must have been pretty extreme. On the other side, at some time, Miranda was a teenager, and we all know this is a separate human race prone to explosions of passion and recklessness, exceptions notwithstanding. So, what may have happened? I consider it likely that it had something to do with her father’s tendency to be more than usually controlling, with a desire to control not only his daughter’s physical makeup, but also her personality. The question of what parents are allowed to do to shape their children is nothing new, but better knowledge of the cause and effect in the development of personality traits might just elevate the debate to a new level, and the possibility of genetic engineering only makes it worse.
The physical - genetic makeup and biotic abilityI consider most of Miranda’s enhancements to be generally beneficial, and made with the intent of benefitting her in terms of capability and competence. Enhanced cognitive ability, enhanced physical prowess, enhanced health and attractiveness (I assume he didn’t go so far as to manipulate her pheromone production), all these are things most people would find very desirable. While Miranda may have resented her father for making her feel her achievements are not her own, I can see nothing here to result in a parting involving gunshots. There’s the matter of biotics. We know biotic ability in humans is the result of early exposition to element zero, and we know this often has severe side effects. These side effects seem not to be present in Miranda. It also does not seem likely that she resents her biotic abilities, given the fact that she seems to appreciate all of what she can do and seems quite comfortable with it all. Her doubt in her own achievements doesn’t change this. I can imagine violent arguments between her and her father involving questions like "Why the hell did you make me like this?", but again, basically nothing that would result in a shootout. I conclude that the fact she was physically enhanced by her father was, if any, only a minor factor in their "gunshot parting".
The psychological – shaping of a personalityGenetic predisposition only provides a platform for further development, especially regarding personality aspects. You can be engineered to be as smart or as strong as possible, if you don’t develop your enhanced capabilities, nothing will come from it. Miranda’s father must have wanted to make sure Miranda grew up into the person he wished her to be. To some extent all parents do this, but if we believe Miranda – he paints her father as extremely controlling – he may have gone farther in this than your average parent. If you, as a parent, know exactly which kind of experiences shape a personality in certain ways, you might want to stage such events. This may include painful experiences, as finding yourself inadequate to a situation may well motivate you to do better next time more efficiently than anything else. The right amount of stress may draw out the best in you. Too little, and you’re not challenged, too much, and you break. Now, almost everyone experiences such situations. No doubt Miranda has, too. But she has superior abilities; her father may have thought it required more extreme experiences to draw out the best in her. What if her father staged such events, and she later found out about it? To give an example: In C J Cherryh’s SF trilogy "Cyteen", someone staged a rape for that reason. It need not even be that extreme. Imagine: what would you think if found that your father, who you trusted, had staged extremely painful experiences you had considered the result of nothing more but bad luck or even bad judgment on your own part. Add her father’s absolute refusal to let her go her own way, and I think we have a setup sufficient for a "gunshot parting". I consider it also quite sufficient to make Miranda abduct her sister.
What do you think about this? I refuse to pass final judgment on Miranda's father before having heard this side, but I think my hypothesis fits all the known facts rather well, not that there are that many of them.
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(Three more pages added to the thread while I was writing this. It'll be almost impossible to catch up.... Rath and Meg, I'd like to say something meaningful about your fanfic, but I'd rather wait until I can read it in larger instalments - otherwise it takes too much time).