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Warming to Miranda (Support Thread) 2.0


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#8576
Andysilv

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DarthReavus wrote...

Where is everybody?


Sorry, still putting my trousers through the wash. Image IPB

#8577
SgtPotato

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DarthReavus wrote...

Where is everybody?


I'm here...

playing Battlefield Bad Company 2. :whistle:

#8578
Jediknight120

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Trying to finish a section of my story so I can post it for opinions! Almost there...

#8579
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Still here...just pre-occupied :)

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playing DAO.

#8581
DarthReavus

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Maviarab wrote...

Still here...just pre-occupied :)

Anything you need help with?

#8582
firecleaner

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Sorry to here about your friend Odin....



To everyone else yea sorry bout my disappearance I had to call my cellular carrier because it seems that my phone wont work in London and all this other stuff...

#8583
Andysilv

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firecleaner wrote...

Sorry to here about your friend Odin....

To everyone else yea sorry bout my disappearance I had to call my cellular carrier because it seems that my phone wont work in London and all this other stuff...


London? Come to visit lovely England, eh?

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Where is everyone? asleep or working? Europe, lets then move this thread :]



oh ****.. maybe not. ive just got my memory refreshed... tomorrow need to retake the history exam. and i have not been learning even for a 10 minutes... hell. now i am screwed. T.T bye bye nice evening with me2 *cries*

#8585
DarthReavus

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andysilv87 wrote...

firecleaner wrote...

Sorry to here about your friend Odin....

To everyone else yea sorry bout my disappearance I had to call my cellular carrier because it seems that my phone wont work in London and all this other stuff...


London? Come to visit lovely England, eh?

I'm only about 30 miles away from London.  Look north and you might see the dark cloud hanging over me :devil:

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DarthReavus wrote...

Where is everybody?

Right here. And yet another evening almost gone without doing anything but ME-related stuff. I'll get square-shaped eyes if this goes on.

#8587
Jediknight120

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Ok here's another section. This is the result of about three passes and I'm still not entirely happy with the last 3 paragraphs. I'm better at the manly conversations and action than the emotionally intense stuff, lol. Opinions welcome!



The elevator ride to deck 1 seemed to take an eternity. Miranda leaned against the wall and covered her face with her hand. She’d spent the last few days trying to prepare for this moment, but now that it was here her resolve was weakening.

She wished she could have gotten it over with sooner, but the week since the attack on the Collector base had been filled with activity. The Normandy had just barely held together during the jump back to the Omega-4 relay and was in need of serious repairs. Shepard had contacted Councilman Anderson to try to smooth things over with the Alliance, but that would take time. Jacob had some contacts from his Alliance Corsair days that could help, but it would take a few more days to arrange everything. In the meantime, they were making what repairs they could and keeping a low profile.

Finally, the elevator doors slid open. Miranda summoned her courage and knocked on the door of the captain’s cabin.

“It’s open” called a voice from inside.

“Commander, do you have a minute?” she asked as she stepped through the door.

Shepard looked up from his desk. “You’re still calling me Commander? Even in private?” he said with a grin.

“You ass.”

He put down the datapad he’d been examining for the better part of an hour and stood up as she approached. The data from the Collector base could wait. He reached out and took Miranda’s hands in his.

“I never properly thanked you for saving me… on the platform. I thought I was dead” she said quietly.

Shepard pulled her into an embrace and held her tightly. “You don’t need to thank me. There’s no way I was going to lose you. It would have been unbearable.”

He continued to hold her close. Miranda closed her eyes. She wanted nothing more than to stay there in his arms, but she knew that she couldn’t… not today. She gently pulled away and placed her hands on his chest. “There’s something I need to tell you… something important. I want this to work… and that means I can’t keep secrets from you.”

#8588
Kleskus

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Nobody post pic of Miri? I'm sad :(

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Ieldra

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shinobi602 wrote...
No, the best thing I like about this thread is its maturity.

I seem to remember something about the rendering of a fine behind being the epitome of innovation in video games. Must've been an illusion. Well, at least it was coherently worded, which is more than you can see in quite a lot of posts in these forums.

Modifié par Ieldra2, 02 mars 2010 - 07:59 .


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#8591
Andysilv

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Kleskus wrote...

Nobody post pic of Miri? I'm sad :(


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#8592
shinobi602

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Ieldra2 wrote...

shinobi602 wrote...
No, the best thing I like about this thread is its maturity.

I seem to remember something about the rendering of a fine behind being the epitome of innovation in video games. Must've been an illusion. Well, at least it was coherently worded, which is more than you can see in quite a lot of posts in these forums.


Lol, I read that. Though I'm fairly certain whoever posted that wasn't really serious. It was just some fun they were having. :o

#8593
Kleskus

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Ach, what a relief :) BTW, I'm going to play ME2 :) be back eta 2h

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@ andy Yes I am, anything really important I should do there?



@ Darth hahaha I'll be looking for that cloud.

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And you posted part of that before Jedi?....

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DarthReavus

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firecleaner wrote...

@ andy Yes I am, anything really important I should do there?

@ Darth hahaha I'll be looking for that cloud.

Shoot the Prime Minister.  You'll be doing us all a bloody favour...

#8597
Andysilv

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DarthReavus wrote...

firecleaner wrote...

@ andy Yes I am, anything really important I should do there?

@ Darth hahaha I'll be looking for that cloud.

Shoot the Prime Minister.  You'll be doing us all a bloody favour...


Image IPB I can't say anything for London since I haven't been there since I was a little lad. Nowhere near the area now either.

#8598
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And sorry Darth...nahh i'm ok...just mind wandering a little...you know how it is :)

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DarthReavus wrote...

firecleaner wrote...

@ andy Yes I am, anything really important I should do there?

@ Darth hahaha I'll be looking for that cloud.

Shoot the Prime Minister.  You'll be doing us all a bloody favour...



+1...

we need a new Guy Fawkes to idolise....

#8600
Jediknight120

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@ Maviarab - yeah, but I rewrote a lot of it and changed the context slightly.