Warming to Miranda (Support Thread) 2.0
#1001
Posté 20 février 2010 - 07:58
#1002
Posté 20 février 2010 - 07:58
I thought I had mentioned that - must have been in one of the deleted paragraphs. I also compared Miranda's making with Grunt's on the physical level. Lots of discards to make one perfect "specimen". Ah, we don't know enough! What a perfect setup for another little story. I hope BW does something with it.ComTrav wrote...
A little suprised that you didn't refer to Miranda's line that "there were others." One possibility of something
that would put Miranda over the edge was the discovery of the fate of the "beta Mirandas". Or perhaps there's the realization that she's more project then person to him. (Which, interestingly, mirrors her initial attitude towards Shepard.)
BTW, I admire your dedication. Usually I don't manage to read things once they've gone too far into the past of the thread. 10-15 pages is about the limit, so I hope this thread doesn't grow much faster.
Modifié par Ieldra2, 20 février 2010 - 07:59 .
#1003
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:03
Haha. Thats awesome, Yannkee!Yannkee wrote...
Here come the Miri Effect Wallpaper:
#1004
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:03
ComTrav wrote...
andysilv87 wrote...
Hey, Com is here! Thread revitalized.
I love how my mere apearance invokes this reaction.
You realize that I've been keeping really weird hours for someone on the US East coast, roflmao.
A fellow sleep wierdo! I am not alone!
#1005
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:08
#1006
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:09
#1007
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:09
I like it! Miranda in a low-cut dress (must look really nice) with interesting things hidden in interesting places. Not exactly subtle, but it sounds completely appropriate. The last sentence is an instant classic!Rathias0114 wrote...
Psst - guys! I managed to steal this away from Meg when she wasn't looking! Enjoy!Shepard led Miranda up the stairs into the long passageway that led into the vibrant upper level of Afterlife. As the doors hissed open, the sound of bass and people chatting instantly drowned out any other noises. Lights were flashing across the ceiling – and hundreds of people surrounded the main bar, either dancing or binge drinking. Miranda held onto Shepard tighter in order to avoid them getting separated while walking past the bar.
Neither of them were expecting trouble – though they didn’t hesitate to take precautions. Under her low-cut red dress, Miranda had a small pistol and shield generator in her left and right garter. Shepard, on the other hand, was wearing a dark suit with a white button up – his shield generator was attached to the back of his belt, while his pistol was in a holster at near his ribs. Every step caused the gun to rub against his wound, but it didn’t cause too much pain – and it constantly reminded Shepard that, even though this was to be a pleasant night with the woman he cared for, he was a very valuable target – and he needed to be prepared.
As they approached Aria’s loft, her Turian guard waved them through without a word. They walked past him, commanding the attention of everyone in the club – and hushed whisperings began to circulate the room. Aria turned as they entered, a smug look on her face.
“Well, it seems you took my advice after all. Good for you. I told you a nice girl would loosen you up.” she motioned for them to join her on the couch.
“What makes you think she’s nice?” he shouted over the music. Miranda nudged his wounded side causing him to grimace in pain.
Aria laughed, “I guess she’s not. Which means I like her already.” Her face grew serious once again. “So, not that I don’t love these little chats, but what do you want now?”
“Don’t worry,” he said. “We’re just here for some drinks with a friend. There won’t be a body count with this visit. We just need you to get us into the VIP club.”
Aria looked out at the club, a disinterested tone filling her voice. “Sure. Consider it done. I owe you more than that after what you did for me.” She turned her gaze toward him again. “I don’t mind a body count, Shepard.” A cruel edge carried her words. “I just don’t want any well-intentioned idiots thinking they can **** with the way I run Omega. And you… the entire purpose of your existence is to give well-intentioned idiots bad ideas.”
I really shouldn't quote text this long, but it was either all or nothing. BTW, can we read your fanfic somewhere else and in whole chapters yet?
#1008
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:13
#1009
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:17
#1010
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:19
LOL. I know I won't manage that. But I did - completely by accident - manage to avoid any Miranda-related ME2 preview material except the cover image. I don't like her image on the cover much, so my curiosity was never piqued. The general opinion on the forums was also mixed. No reason to follow up.aeetos21 wrote...
I just want to know she'll be back as a squaddie in ME3, then I'll try to go to media blackout as much as possible. me2 was gripping when i first went through it but i want me3 to be a total mind-opener, example:
"Wow! Combat is still the same, well mostly, but what the hell did they do to the thermal clip system? Cans of worms? This is an assault rifle not a fishing pole!"
Then I play the game, and there she is - and turns out be interesting as a character as well as good-looking. Quite the pleasant surprise.
#1011
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:42
#1012
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:57
Hell yeah! That is sweet as sweet can be.Yannkee wrote...
Here come the Miri Effect Wallpaper:
#1013
Posté 20 février 2010 - 08:58
Deja vuandysilv87 wrote...
Woo hoo, 1000!! I feel like we've been here before...
#1014
Posté 20 février 2010 - 09:13
so much character, so much depth, not to mention the figure!
#1015
Posté 20 février 2010 - 09:17
ToshiStation38 wrote...
I'm also thinking of maybe turning her down at the elevator (which is damn hard to do).
Noooooooooooooo!
Poor Miri, so close and yet so far...
@Com I would consider changing it but only issue I have is that I've not got an 'uneditted' version of that pic
*suddenly remembers he has the video of the end scene*
Err, ignore what I said I'll make a new version later
#1016
Posté 20 février 2010 - 09:19
But 1000 posts!
#1017
Posté 20 février 2010 - 10:11
I'm going back to my run of ME1->ME2.
#1018
Posté 20 février 2010 - 10:22
*wonders if he can really go through with it or whether he'll bail at the biotic stage and ensure a loyal person lives and fill the door defence line with the combat mob* (gonna have thane loyal for the romance hehe)
#1019
Posté 20 février 2010 - 10:23

I love this pic.
#1020
Posté 20 février 2010 - 10:24

@luet1991:
#1021
Posté 20 février 2010 - 10:28
ComTrav wrote...
I love this pic.
Course, naturally my Shepherd agreed with her and selected her as the fire team leader. I just liked how could get that whole part in without messing Miranda up or the next sentence being on it. Will see if can get some more pics whilst doing this suicide run hehe
#1022
Posté 20 février 2010 - 10:45
#1023
Posté 20 février 2010 - 11:16
Glad you enjoyed it - and that line is a very good one. Have Meg to think for that, haha.
#1024
Guest_Maviarab_*
Posté 20 février 2010 - 11:29
Guest_Maviarab_*
Night to the ones who have left us...
Rath...great new excerpt...
Yankee...love the Miri Effect wall (you noticed my new ones yet?)
Morning folks
Modifié par Maviarab, 20 février 2010 - 11:31 .
#1025
Guest_Maviarab_*
Posté 20 février 2010 - 11:36
Guest_Maviarab_*
Was thinking of doing both costumes, but would you guys prefer the her in-game outfit )white/black) or the promo vids outfit (thats actually cream/brown) ?
let me know your thouhgts




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