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[Andysilv]

MegWithAMouth wrote...

She also opened up to Chuck during that one scene. She never used to put herself out there like that for him. I think she's slowly and subtly opening herself up to him. Maybe that's my hopeful optimistic side kicking in though.

I know, right? It seemed to me like she was pretty much saying "I'm here Chuck, take me!" But of course, that would be too easy for Mr Bartowski wouldn't it, lol.

[MegWithAMouth]

@keegdarv: Really? I would use it, but I don't mind waiting a couple hours to watch it. It's better than poor Andy who has to wait an entire day.



@Andy: Lol. Of course. Although, did you see the previews for next week? Squee!



Also, happy St. Patrick's Day everyone!!

[Andysilv]

MegWithAMouth wrote...

@Andy: Lol. Of course. Although, did you see the previews for next week? Squee!

Oh my god, I just watched it! I'm so excited, although the realist in me tells me that scene will probably be interrupted in some way.

[Kabraxal]

At this point there is no excuse to end the season with them apart. Hopefully it really starts to explode soon.

[MegWithAMouth]

Yeah, I know, but still. That's a good sign! And did you read the synopsis for the episode after vs. The Final Exam? 3.12, I think? Sounds very promising.

[Kabraxal]

MegWithAMouth wrote...

Yeah, I know, but still. That's a good sign! And did you read the synopsis for the episode after vs. The Final Exam? 3.12, I think? Sounds very promising.

I did.  Hopefully it goes well!

[keegdarv1]

since its late and not many around ill post it here



http://watchchuckstr...-intersect.html



has every single episode only season 1 has any real issue and thats just cause thier all megavideo

[Andysilv]

MegWithAMouth wrote...

Yeah, I know, but still. That's a good sign! And did you read the synopsis for the episode after vs. The Final Exam? 3.12, I think? Sounds very promising.

 Just read it, sounds AMAZING! Argh, March 29th can't come soon enough!

[Caihn]

Hi everyone,
Concerning Chuck :
I think next episode will be as painful as episode 8. I would say even more.

[Kabraxal]

Hopefully it's a good present for me...

[MegWithAMouth]

Kabraxal wrote...

Hopefully it's a good present for me...

Is it your birthday that day or something?

[Caihn]

andysilv87 wrote...

MegWithAMouth wrote...

Yeah, I know, but still. That's a good sign! And did you read the synopsis for the episode after vs. The Final Exam? 3.12, I think? Sounds very promising.

 Just read it, sounds AMAZING! Argh, March 29th can't come soon enough!

Avril 5th for me. I can't wait 3.13.

[Kabraxal]

MegWithAMouth wrote...

Kabraxal wrote...

Hopefully it's a good present for me...

Is it your birthday that day or something?

Day before.

Anyway, going to play some DA now.  Have fun and keep the love alive!

[Andysilv]

See ya later, Kab.

[MegWithAMouth]

I'm pretty tired so I'm heading to bed.



To make up for my OT talk, I leave you a parting gift.





Goodnight everyone!

[Caihn]

goodnight, thanks for the gift

[Andysilv]

Night Meg. I'm going to go and try to get back into Lost Odyssey...it's only been 9 and a half months since I played it, lol.

[Caihn]

I'm leaving too.

I'm going to "StarWars in concert" show in few hours. See you later.

[Ieldra]

Breakdown Boy wrote...

Good morning Mirimaniacs!

I just finished my first chapter (ever) of my fanfic, please check it out and read authors note before commenting.

http://social.biowar...4530/blog/3420/

Be gentle......

All right....

First, I can't comment much on the language since English isn't my native language as well. But I think it would be good if you ran your fanfic through a grammar and spell checker. Not that I could see many mistakes, it's just that this helped me very much when writing my own story.

All in all, I like the way you try to portray both characters, as far as can be determined from this one chapter. I do have one major point of criticism, though: there's too much thinking and internal dialog going on without adding to the mood of the story. For instance, when Shepard is dying, the calm analyzing and reporting style when he thinks of Terra Nova seems a bit inadequate. IMO, short, disconnected images would be better, and don't let Shepard analyze them but leave that for the reader. The same with Miranda later when she goes over Shepard's history in her mind: it reads as if she was reading a report. But she knows all that already, so it would be better to go over it like through a checklist, with the facts coming almost in a staccato, short and with little to no additional exposition. For instance, the details of exactly how he held his position during the Skyllian Blitz are superfluous here and better left for later, when someone has a better reason to think about them.

This is, of course, all IMO. I hope this comes across as constructive as intended.
 

[Ieldra]

keegdarv1 wrote...

well here we go, hope it doesnt suck to bad, first two chapters are alittle shorter then the next few may be but whatever

http://www.fanfictio..._Above_the_Rest

Quite convincing, I must say. I like the irony coming across in some scenes. So appropriate to the situation. One little detail: "...a smile found its way to her beautiful face." Leave the "beautiful" out of it, since this is written from Miranda's own perspective and makes her seem overly vain.

[SlySpy00]

She Said I Have To Go Home,

'Cause I'm Real Tired You See,

But I Hate Sleepin' Alone,

Why Don't You Come With Me,

I Said My Baby's At Home

She's Probably Worried Tonight

I Didn't Call On The Phone,

To Say That I'm Alright



Miranda Walked Up To Me,

She Said I'm All Yours Tonight,

At That I Ran To The Phone,

Sayin' "Baby I'm Alright",

I Said "But Unlock The Door,

Because I Forgot The Key,"

She Said "He's Not Coming Back,

Because He's Sleeping With Me",



DIRTY MIRANDA, NAH

DIRTY MIRANDA, NAH

DIRTY MIRANDA, NAH

DIRTY MIRANDA, NO

[Ieldra]

^^And what are we supposed to make of this? Well, I guess:

Modifié par Ieldra2, 17 mars 2010 - 09:26 .

[Vamp44]

SgtPotato wrote...

Muwahahahah!

I will use Shaw in this thread, unless you will pay me...



ONE MILLION DOLLARS!

lol..

[Jebel Krong]

Modifié par Jebel Krong, 17 mars 2010 - 10:20 .

[gutty47]

Jebel Krong wrote...

Haven't seen this one before... wheres it from?

Edit: Of course I haven't seen it. Its only a day old pic. Still great.

Modifié par gutty47, 17 mars 2010 - 10:33 .