Wow, yet again I am late to say this...screwoffreg wrote...
DAMNIT I am done. That took forever. I finished the story and it took a lot out of me. For those of you who can actually get through it, imagine yourselves winning an endurance reward. I had to tone down the ending because the dumb site has "rules" about mature content, but I think I got the point across. Hope ya'll enjoy.
http://www.fanfiction.net/~kanelam
Just realized you have to give it a few more minutes for Chapter 5 to load...
Anyway, great job on the story. The ending was very sweet.
I think one of my FemSheps was actually named Victoria (before I got red-ringed and my harddrive went to hell).
That would be great if BioWare could pull off something like that in the expansion, there definitely needs to be a high amount of emotional conversations to have it all make sense. (Who doesn't want to have an emotional conversation with Liara in the first place?).
Maybe you should get that story to Mac (somehow). Tell him, "THIS IS HOW YOU WRITE A ROCKY ROMANCE!!!".
I forgot to say last time, good job on explaining Shepard's lack of emotions during the reunion scene.
Although, I strongly hope BioWare changes the first reunion scene altogether to make it realistic in the expansion. Liara would only need several more conversation replies for that specific scene, but Shepard would definitely need to add some emotional conversation options.
Again, great job!




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