Cypher0020 wrote...
well who ever made the vid I'm looking at it right now
I believe that was rynluna.
Cypher0020 wrote...
well who ever made the vid I'm looking at it right now
Great idea Jib (as always)jlb524 wrote...
adneate wrote...
jlb524 wrote...
I still want a private bondmate ceremony to occur on the Normandy, on the eve of the final battle. I think it would mean so much for them to spend what could be their last moments of life declaring their undying love for one another. After wards, they could have a larger, public ceremony.
I quite like that idea as well, for all they know the Normandy could be destroyed in the opening barrage between the two fleets. Besides what better background could there be than an armada of tens of thousands of ships preparing for a full scale intergalatic conflict? It's dramatic to say the least!
Yes, very. dramatic That's what my Shepard would want to do on what could be the very last night of her life. The vows would be amazing.
Lizardviking wrote...
Here's the link.
http://social.biowar...41/1959#4813154
Its great. But i think u should give the beginning of the story more "time" to develop itself... (or i was reading it to fast xD )So many things were running through his head. Suddenly the voice of EDI, the ship’s AI. Snapped him out of his line of thought.
“Shepard. You have just received a message from Cerberus command, I suggest you take a look at it.”
......(reduced)...
Perhaps there was still a chance?
Modifié par arcuido27, 17 septembre 2010 - 07:57 .
arcuido27 wrote...
Lizardviking wrote...
Here's the link.
http://social.biowar...41/1959#4813154
My first reading of a maleshep fanfic ! Yay !
It was quite nice, especially for your first one ! Thanks for sharing it.
But, ( yeah yeah i know but i cant hold myself back) I find it somehow rushed. I dont know exactly how to explain in engl. Like *Bäm bäm*placing many informations in a short amount of time. I personally love the ending. This part:Its great. But i think u should give the beginning of the story more "time" to develop itself...So many things were running through his head. Suddenly the voice of EDI, the ship’s AI. Snapped him out of his line of thought.
“Shepard. You have just received a message from Cerberus command, I suggest you take a look at it.”
......(reduced)...
Perhaps there was still a chance?
But who am i to talk about writing
I dont know if u wanted a little review or my thought about it, but now u got it, sry if im to harsh or something. I still like it !
jlb524 wrote...
Ajosraa wrote...
It seems that many others act in a selfish, and in my opinion juvinille fassion because she wont drop everything to jump into Shepard's pocket. One attractive thing about her is that she can be independent, and an equil. Isent that more fun anyway? In the end ive played the game 3 times and i couldent imagine picking anyone else.
Welcome, and I agree 100%. Liara is an independent woman with a mind of her own.
I do see a lot of people around these boards that I know dropped her in ME2 for another, and now want her back b/c she's 'nice' to their Shepard again...I do not like this one bit, but there's nothing that I can do about it. I would have hoped the LotSB romance would have been shut off for those that did take another LI, but it wasn't.
Modifié par TMA LIVE, 17 septembre 2010 - 08:06 .
Lizardviking wrote...
JamieCOTC wrote...
Lizardviking wrote...
arcuido27 wrote...
Here's the link.
http://social.biowar...41/1959#4813154
Very well done. Nice piece for getting into dudeShep's head. You don't find many fics of that.
Dudeshep have feelings too!
Lizardviking wrote...
arcuido27 wrote...
Lizardviking wrote...
Here's the link.
http://social.biowar...41/1959#4813154
My first reading of a maleshep fanfic ! Yay !
It was quite nice, especially for your first one ! Thanks for sharing it.
But, ( yeah yeah i know but i cant hold myself back) I find it somehow rushed. I dont know exactly how to explain in engl. Like *Bäm bäm*placing many informations in a short amount of time. I personally love the ending. This part:Its great. But i think u should give the beginning of the story more "time" to develop itself...So many things were running through his head. Suddenly the voice of EDI, the ship’s AI. Snapped him out of his line of thought.
“Shepard. You have just received a message from Cerberus command, I suggest you take a look at it.”
......(reduced)...
Perhaps there was still a chance?
But who am i to talk about writing
I dont know if u wanted a little review or my thought about it, but now u got it, sry if im to harsh or something. I still like it !
"runs off crying"
Nah, just joking!
I'm acutelly glad you decided to give some criticism, I needed that. Now I know where I should strive to improve, which is a good thing. But i'm glad you liked it and hopefully won't be against reading more maleshep fics in the future.
Modifié par arcuido27, 17 septembre 2010 - 08:07 .
jlb524 wrote...
ValerioN7 wrote...
And i'll make sure to thank you again:lol:
No problem! I touched up the sig you are currently using of mine, if you want to change the link (I'm using the new sig now).
arcuido27 wrote...
What do i do now ... does someone have a nice liara pic ? The smile she has as she was making herself ready for the "Date" on the normandy ? She was going away, looking from the side to shep and smiled nice ! Does someone have it ?
Modifié par arcuido27, 17 septembre 2010 - 08:14 .
arcuido27 wrote...
no, not that, but thats also quite nice. I mean the smile on the shadow broker base.shep invited her for a date on the normandy. she is going away, she said she needed a moment to make herself ready or somehting, than she looks a little bit to the side and smiles.
jlb524 wrote...
arcuido27 wrote...
no, not that, but thats also quite nice. I mean the smile on the shadow broker base.shep invited her for a date on the normandy. she is going away, she said she needed a moment to make herself ready or somehting, than she looks a little bit to the side and smiles.
This one?
arcuido27 wrote...
no, not that, but thats also quite nice. I mean the smile on the shadow broker base.shep invited her for a date on the normandy. she is going away, she said she needed a moment to make herself ready or somehting, than she looks a little bit to the side and smiles.
*starting game for screenshot* brb ! ^^

Ajosraa wrote...
Is that when she looks at you after glancing to the her left at the fish tank? I see it wasent just me who liked that smile:)
Modifié par Captain Iglo, 17 septembre 2010 - 08:24 .
TMA LIVE wrote...
Do you have one where she nods her head in a cute way when Shepard tells her, "He didn't want Saren to succeed?"
rynluna wrote...
jlb524 wrote...
I do see a lot of people around these boards that I know dropped her in ME2 for another, and now want her back b/c she's 'nice' to their Shepard again...I do not like this one bit, but there's nothing that I can do about it. I would have hoped the LotSB romance would have been shut off for those that did take another LI, but it wasn't.
If there was one flaw with the DLC, it's that. The sad thing is, as soon as their ME2 flame gets more romance content, they'll probably dump Liara again. That's what you call a fair-weather fan or a scumbag.
Modifié par Ajosraa, 17 septembre 2010 - 08:30 .