TeenZombie wrote...
legbamel wrote...
Okay, so I decided to skip lunch to post my first ever fanfic. It's a first attempt, so please don't judge me too harshly! Now I've got to write the second half!
The Commander Takes a Shower, Part 1
[runs and hides]
Hey, don't run away! I loved your story! I totally felt your Shepard's pain and embarrassment, and I assume the same thing about the scars on the rest of Shepard's body.
And the shower design was a huge mystery to me, too, along with no chairs around the table in the briefing room. Why even have the table?
@legbamel: That was great! No running required.
@TZ: You know, that must be why the briefings only ever had Miranda or Jacob in them. No one else is willing to stand around uncomfortably in the weird comm room unless they have to. <_<




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