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[PopDisaster]

Cypher0020 wrote...

Ok...... so I just finished the drabble... which turned into 3 pages LOL

Can I post in here in the thread??

Post it! post it!

[sesheta255]

PopDisaster wrote...

All this talk about writing makes me want to take a stab at it... Looking forward to new fics though. :happy:
Also, Kaidan/Shep, great romance or greatest romance? (Compared to all videogame pairings) I just can't get into any other one like Kaidanbear

do it, do it, you should take a stab at it.  

Kaidan/Shepard would have to be up there as one of the greatest if not at the top of the list.  I am partial to the Alistair/warden one, just don't like the turns it takes at the end, lol.

[Cypher0020]

Ok here it is. I'll put it on my FF account shortly.  Oh yes... Shep's lines are supposed to be in italics....stupid posts epicly fails in this.... anyways enjoy shenko fans
 
Kaidan paced up and down the sandy shores of the beach, reaching down and picking up a smooth white stone, before retracting his arm back into a wide arch and then thrust it forward with some added biotic strength, sending it skipping across the glassy waves before it sank beneath the surface with a soft plop.
Wow, you can hurl geth across rooms but can’t get a rock to go more than a foot. Nice.
Kaidan stopped, closed his eyes and smiled.
“Shepard…”
He felt her hand brush against his. He felt her lips press tenderly against the back of his neck. He turned, reaching for her, and holding her close.

“I suppose… heh I know you could do better than me. You’re an amazing woman…. But I’m sure you already know that.”
Maybe.  I just love hearing you say it.
“I love you Shepard.”

She looked wonderful. No, perfect in his eyes. Her hair was flowing softly in the breeze, her eyes light and carefree. She strolled along the beach as if she didn’t have a care in the world- the time was just for them, their own perfect piece of eternity, untarnished by the ravages of war and death.   Kaidan smiled, gazing at her with moist eyes.

“Have I ever told you how beautiful you look?”
Shepard eyed with thoughtfully, testing him.  Her laugh was like wind chimes, and his soul immediately felt lighter.
Such a flatterer. Do you always say that to your female superioers?
“No.”  he touched her face. “Just the one that I love.”
Really? There must have been others.

“Never. Just you. Only you. Always you.”  Kaidan said with a short laugh.  Shepard tucked a loose lock of her hair back, and reached out to touch his cheek, running it over the faint traces of stubble.
"
Wow. That’s new. Feels weird."
“I thought it’d give more of a rugged edge. You like?”  Kaidan offered, with hopeful eyes.
Its dashing I’ll admit. It’ll grow on me. But if any other woman eyes you, shave it off.
Kaidan mock saluted. “Yes ma’am!”

Another musical sounding laugh.
"Always so serious Alenko. "

Kaidan felt the heat of a blush sneak onto his face.  Shepard’s eyes twinkled mischeviously.  Kaidan slowly took her hand in his, bringing it to his lips, kissing her knuckles lightly.  Shepard only smiled, as he did so.
You always know what makes me feel good.
Kaidan grinned wolfishly. “I aim to please, ma’am.”
You sassin’ me soldier? That calls for some punishment

Kaidan kissed her neck, which elicited a whimper of pleasure from his lover.
“Whatever you say, Shepard.”
Alright, drop and give me twenty
“I may need some assistance.”

Shepard grinned devilishly, and kissed him passionately.  He fell backwards into the sand as she began dotting his face and neck with hot kisses. He moaned lightly, her name escaped from his lips with lusty abandon.
“Shepard!!”
His eyes snapped open, as he shot up from his sleeping position on the shoreline. The sun was sinking beneath the cliffs, waves splashing mindlessly against the shore as he slumbered on undisturbed.  Kaidan rubbed his eyes.

Damn…. Just another dream.  Shepard…. I miss you so damn much.
He fell back listlessly against the sand, cushioning his head on his hands, staring up into space, tears slipping down his face. He felt the kiss of a gentle breeze on his tear stained face.
I miss you too Kaidan

[PopDisaster]

Cypher, That's adorable! I couldn't stop smiling while reading through it!



@Sesheta Yeah, I know what you mean. I can't let Alistair die, but I always get jealous watching him with Morrigan lol. It's a lose/lose. Great romance, but the end part ruins it for me...

[Cypher0020]

Really? Squeeee! I hope people get what I was tryin to say though...

[sesheta255]

Thats great Cypher. Did you just write that in such a short space of time? It would take me days to come up with that.

[Jhourney]

sesheta255 wrote...

Thats great Cypher. Did you just write that in such a short space of time? It would take me days to come up with that.

Indeed, lovely to read..specially from work Poor Kai Kai...

[Cypher0020]

I wrote that in about 20mins if anyone cares LOL

[stardust923]

Aww, so cute Cypher! Great distraction from getting research done.

[PopDisaster]

Alrighty, time to hit the hay. Sweet Kaidanbear dreams to all!

[sesheta255]

Cypher0020 wrote...

I wrote that in about 20mins if anyone cares LOL

I would kill to be able to come up with something that good in such a short space of time, lol

[Cypher0020]

Really? How much do you write? My longest chappy for a fic was 31 pages I think....

[sesheta255]

I don't write a lot, a long fic for me is about 6 pages, and they are usually only that long because I tend to ramble a bit, lol. I've got something in the works that looks like being fairly long, but its on hold while I try and get a bunch of others cleared from my desktop. What you just wrote in 20 minutes would take me 3 days to write, then another 3 to edit and rewrite, lol

[Cypher0020]

Oooooo can I see some of your stuff? I have 34 stories on my FF profile... mostly Potter/Narnia related



I do have a DA fic and another ME2 fic in mind though

[sesheta255]

some of it is on Bri's fic site :



http://writersblockf...n.blogspot.com/



and I have 3 that are in final editing and one I'm working on at the moment, so they'll probably go up there once they're done.

[Cypher0020]

Sweeeet -goes to read-

[Jhourney]

Kaidan hugs for all!

[Cypher0020]

oooooooooooo I LOVE that! Shep in Cerb gear and Kai in SA gear....



damn....

[AkodoRyu]

Lellandra wrote...

http://social.biowar...120/polls/4978/

New SURVIVOR day is up! Remember NOT to vote for Kaidan.

I say Liara gets the boot but I think Miranda is winning.

*boycots*

I protest against hate threads
(edited to get rid of pyramide quotes)

Modifié par AkodoRyu, 21 avril 2010 - 09:39 .

[Nightodie]

Good Evening Everyone!!! I have a trainee with me tonight so won't be on much. I will miss you guys!



@ Sbri > link to video is

http://mobile.twitte...tus/11953237290

hope it works doing it from Iphone and sometimes....



@Fort> I loved the peek can't wait to read more!



Everyone else carry on / will try to peek in now & then.

[Nightodie]

Oops tha @Fort was suposed to be@ Cypher- stupid Iphone won't let me edit!





Aaargh!!

[Shenzi]

Good Morning

[sapphyreelf]

Morning all.

@Cypher: Loved your little drabble as you called it. Very touching.

[Shenzi]

AkodoRyu wrote...

Lellandra wrote...

http://social.biowar...120/polls/4978/

New SURVIVOR day is up! Remember NOT to vote for Kaidan.

I say Liara gets the boot but I think Miranda is winning.

*boycots*

I protest against hate threads
(edited to get rid of pyramide quotes)

I'm actually very surprised that Kaidan made it this far in the contest given how much Kaidan hate we run into whenever we venture into other threads.

I don't mind someone trying to rally support for their favorite character but I was pretty disgusted yesterday that I found people were actually openly discussing making multiple accounts to just vote on these forums in another character support group.

[Jenova65]

Hi everyone :-)

@Shenzi, as I said yesterday it is hollow victory if they cheat because they will always know a level playing field would have beaten them.