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[syllogi]

legbamel wrote...

So, let's say I pretty much finished my Interlude section and wanted to post the whole thing somewhere in one piece so that people who liked the stories on fanfiction.net could find it. How would I go about that? Can I link it from my profile there (assuming I can find a place to get it out there) or do they frown on that?

And, yes, Kaidan does have very expressive eyebrows.  It's a big factor in some of the "hubba hubba" pictures, like your avatar. 

If you have a livejournal, that's always a good spot, you can have an age warning on the post, and links to your LJ wouldn't be objectionable.  I've seen links to adultfanfiction.net on fanfiction.net too, so I doubt they have a problem with that. 

[legbamel]

Okay, peeps. I put the whole mess together and posted it at Adult Fanfiction.net. If anyone over 18 wants to take a run through it and let me know if there's a way I can improve it, I'd love some feedback.

[Tatooine92]

Happy almost-Friday, ladies! What have I missed? XD

[fortunesque]

legbamel wrote...

Okay, peeps. I put the whole mess together and posted it at Adult Fanfiction.net. If anyone over 18 wants to take a run through it and let me know if there's a way I can improve it, I'd love some feedback.

Very nice

Though you may want to move it to its proper section here.

[syllogi]

legbamel wrote...

Okay, peeps. I put the whole mess together and posted it at Adult Fanfiction.net. If anyone over 18 wants to take a run through it and let me know if there's a way I can improve it, I'd love some feedback.

OOH!  Biotics!  People talk about incorporating them into stories, but few actually do it...I approve!  The only feedback I would give is to put it in the Mass Effect category under the Anime/Games Archive on the top menu.  Thanks again for sharing this!

[AngryFrozenWater]

@TeenZombie:

Hehe. I like your sig! I knew someone would do something like that.

Modifié par AngryFrozenWater, 23 avril 2010 - 01:32 .

[syllogi]

AngryFrozenWater wrote...

@TeenZombie:

Hehe. I like your sig! I knew someone would do something like that.

LOL, I was thinking about adding the Jacob bar, but I don't really want him to love FemShep.  

[fortunesque]

TeenZombie wrote...

AngryFrozenWater wrote...

@TeenZombie:

Hehe. I like your sig! I knew someone would do something like that.

LOL, I was thinking about adding the Jacob bar, but I don't really want him to love FemShep.  

She doesn't want him to love her either.

[Tatooine92]

Are there any sekret pics today? Because I was hanging around on a thread full of demotivational posters... until one came along bashing our dear Kai Kai. Now I am grumpy.

[fortunesque]

I don't venture into the motivational thread that often. It's cool over there to bash Kaibear. Unfortunately, there are no new sekrit pics.

[Tatooine92]

Well, I am informed, then. I just won't go back there, even though I had some of my own to share. *thumbs nose at them*



And old pictures work just as well as new ones!

[fortunesque]

I just find it funny how some folks will say, "I'm not character bashing. I'm just making jokes." But how often are those 'jokes' incredibly mean-spirited? I mean, it's one thing to say that you don't like a character, but it's another thing entirely to just all-out attack them.

[flippingthemako]

@legbamel:



Love it! Great use of the biotics in there.

[Shenzi]

Just finished putting up the second chapter to Just Because Horizon Was That Bloody Awful 

[syllogi]

Shenzi wrote...

Just finished putting up the second chapter to Just Because Horizon Was That Bloody Awful 

Hehe, didn't get a chance to say this out earlier, but I love the title!

[Shenzi]

legbamel wrote...

Okay, peeps. I put the whole mess together and posted it at Adult Fanfiction.net. If anyone over 18 wants to take a run through it and let me know if there's a way I can improve it, I'd love some feedback.

That's really well done

[Joisan]

sesheta255 wrote...

@Pyro - I'm good thanks, just going through the morning ritual of getting school lunches ready, lol

@Shotty - I have the same problem with freezing on that scene. I generally find I have to reload 3 times, for some reason it always works the 3rd time, lol

I used to have that problem all the time, and the same problem on the flight into the Citadel.  Then I upgraded my compy and bye bye problems!

[Shenzi]

I'm just curious, what is supposed to be the limit for ff.net as far as explicit sex scenes? What legbamel posted on AFF.net isn't any more over the line so to speak than a lot of the stories on ff.net

[fortunesque]

This is the official guide from fictionratings.com:

Not suitable for children or teens below the age of 16 with possible strong but non-explicit adult themes, references to violence, and strong coarse language. (for works rated M)

I follow by the lines of mild R, hard pg-13. If someone wants to read my explicit stuff, it's easily accessible on aff.

Edit: What I mean to say is that I don't cut corners when it comes to explicit work. Young teens have no business reading my explicit writing.

Modifié par fortunesque, 23 avril 2010 - 03:04 .

[Joisan]

Tatooine92 wrote...

Happy almost-Friday, ladies! What have I missed? XD

Tat!  You missed a troll and my latest ficlet.  And we missed you!

[jillyfae]

Shenzi wrote...

Just finished putting up the second chapter to Just Because Horizon Was That Bloody Awful 

yeah!  Thanks Shenzi.

And I've also seen things on ff.net that I'd say were too mature for their content policy... and I had no trouble finding Fort's stuff after following her blurb on her profile, so I'm not sure why so few people actually pay attention to the thing.

[Star]

Shenzi wrote...

I just put the first chapter of my fic new fic up on FF.net after getting lots and lots of feedback from my betas Jo and Sia.

Just Because Horizon Was That Bloody Awful

It’s an A/U piece told from Kaidan’s PoV with the change being that Kaidan was taken by the Collectors on Horizon and that abomination of scene between the two of them never happened.   The story itself is cheesy in parts I readily admit it, it starts out pretty dark but ends up on the goofy side with a happy ending.

If the feedback is positive to the story I'll write a companion piece  from Shepard's PoV.

Shenzi -- please keep going with this!  It's great! 

[sesheta255]

Joisan wrote...

sesheta255 wrote...

@Pyro - I'm good thanks, just going through the morning ritual of getting school lunches ready, lol

@Shotty - I have the same problem with freezing on that scene. I generally find I have to reload 3 times, for some reason it always works the 3rd time, lol

I used to have that problem all the time, and the same problem on the flight into the Citadel.  Then I upgraded my compy and bye bye problems!

I was hoping to have mine upgraded before DAO was released, got as far as a new graphics card and power supply, then every spare cent I had got sucked away by solicitors.  Oh well, maybe I'll be able to get it upgraded in time for ME3, lol

Afternoon all

[Shenzi]

Thanks Star

It's going to be 5'ish chapters when I'm done with it unless I decide to break apart any of the other chapters.  Originally 1 & 2 were one chapter.  I actually have a rough draft of it all done I just need to edit it a lot so I'll prolly put up a chapter a day.

I  went to edit chapter 2 tonight and I wound up doubling the size of it.

I’m heading to bed, night all .
Fort – Thanks for the explanation, I actually had wondered about that for awhile. 

Modifié par Shenzi, 23 avril 2010 - 03:19 .

[Joisan]

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