Kaidan Alenko Support Thread Part 2
#29301
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:01
Looking forward to reading the rest of your fic, I love it so far.
I just did some minor rewrites on my reunion fic today, once its approved by my beta I will finally be able to get it out of my hair, its been floating around on my desktop for a month, lol
#29302
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:01
legbamel wrote...
Okay, peeps. I put the whole mess together and posted it at Adult Fanfiction.net. If anyone over 18 wants to take a run through it and let me know if there's a way I can improve it, I'd love some feedback.
Hot, steamy, yummy...I can go on for a bit but you get it
#29303
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:01
As I was writing it I was thinking "I'm actually podding Kaidan? I'm lucky no one knows who I am in KAAS, irl"
#29304
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:06
Jhosephine wrote...
legbamel wrote...
Okay, peeps. I put the whole mess together and posted it at Adult Fanfiction.net. If anyone over 18 wants to take a run through it and let me know if there's a way I can improve it, I'd love some feedback.
Hot, steamy, yummy...I can go on for a bit but you get itThank you for sharing, nothing says Rawr better than a smexy fanfic in the morning
Loved it, very tastefully written and yet hot at the same time which I love. Now only one thing needs to be said....MOAR!
:P
I loved that too
I haven't written any sex scenes yet in my fics, I think I'd need a ghost writer for them or else they would read like cheesiest romance novels you can find.
If I had write one it would be like -
"He throws her down on the bed with the intent to ravish her thoroughly "
Followed by
"... a few hours later they take a walk around the beach"
Modifié par Shenzi, 23 avril 2010 - 09:07 .
#29305
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:10
Shenzi wrote...
Thanks Jho
As I was writing it I was thinking "I'm actually podding Kaidan? I'm lucky no one knows who I am in KAAS, irl"
Actually podding Kaidan would have such an emotional impact on the game for me, that tension throughout the game knowing they have him and wanting to save him, building up to the moment you can pull him out of there if you play things right....argh.
But despite me wanting it, I think the way Kaidan is in game now has done wonders for his character. He gained a lot of fans while loosing a few. Sometimes I wonder if I would be this rabid had he gotten a larger role in ME2, I mean his cameo pulled me out of my lurking state to actually show my support through this thread. I've always supported and loved Kaidan, just never this vocally since I generally hate forums. And it gave me this Kaidan pics obsession, which was a first too.
So I guess there IS a silver lining...in a way
#29306
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:11
Modifié par Shenzi, 23 avril 2010 - 09:12 .
#29307
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:13
Shenzi wrote...
Jhosephine wrote...
legbamel wrote...
Okay, peeps. I put the whole mess together and posted it at Adult Fanfiction.net. If anyone over 18 wants to take a run through it and let me know if there's a way I can improve it, I'd love some feedback.
Hot, steamy, yummy...I can go on for a bit but you get itThank you for sharing, nothing says Rawr better than a smexy fanfic in the morning
Loved it, very tastefully written and yet hot at the same time which I love. Now only one thing needs to be said....MOAR!
:P
I loved that too
I haven't written any sex scenes yet in my fics, I think I'd need a ghost writer for them or else they would read like cheesiest romance novels you can find.
If I had write one it would be like -
"He throws her down on the bed with the intent to ravish her thoroughly "
Followed by
"... a few hours later they take a walk around the beach"
hehe...if it was cheesy you would have to describe the wonders of a bedlamp after he throws her onto the bed. Describe the lamp in detail as if the camera just zoomed in on it, blurring out the couple in the back. And then the light switched off, fade to black...and they are on the beach...*giggles*
Could be hilarious btw
#29308
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:17
don't forget the sound of thunder and waves crashing onto the beach, lolJhosephine wrote...
Shenzi wrote...
Jhosephine wrote...
legbamel wrote...
Okay, peeps. I put the whole mess together and posted it at Adult Fanfiction.net. If anyone over 18 wants to take a run through it and let me know if there's a way I can improve it, I'd love some feedback.
Hot, steamy, yummy...I can go on for a bit but you get itThank you for sharing, nothing says Rawr better than a smexy fanfic in the morning
Loved it, very tastefully written and yet hot at the same time which I love. Now only one thing needs to be said....MOAR!
:P
I loved that too
I haven't written any sex scenes yet in my fics, I think I'd need a ghost writer for them or else they would read like cheesiest romance novels you can find.
If I had write one it would be like -
"He throws her down on the bed with the intent to ravish her thoroughly "
Followed by
"... a few hours later they take a walk around the beach"
hehe...if it was cheesy you would have to describe the wonders of a bedlamp after he throws her onto the bed. Describe the lamp in detail as if the camera just zoomed in on it, blurring out the couple in the back. And then the light switched off, fade to black...and they are on the beach...*giggles*
Could be hilarious btw
#29309
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:18
I also had played a few minutes of ME2 when I first got it but it really felt like I was watching the middle movie of a trilogy not having played the first one.
Modifié par Shenzi, 23 avril 2010 - 09:19 .
#29310
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:20

Love that pic.
#29311
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:21
sesheta255 wrote...
don't forget the sound of thunder and waves crashing onto the beach, lol
Ah yes, the sound of thunder...must have that.
#29312
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:23
#29313
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:24
or the rearing horse image, lmaoJhosephine wrote...
sesheta255 wrote...
don't forget the sound of thunder and waves crashing onto the beach, lol
Ah yes, the sound of thunder...must have that.
#29314
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:26
sesheta255 wrote...
I would never have played Mass Effect if the teens hadn't talked me into it by telling me 'Carth' was in it, lol. I generally avoid anything that requires my character to use a gun, lol. Generally prefer to stick to bashing someone to death with a sword or lightsaber. I can't imagine playing ME2 without having played ME1.
I completely sucked at ME1 my first play through, my husband plays shooters but I hadn't before besides Fallout3.
I've gotten a lot better at it in the last few months of playing both games.
Modifié par Shenzi, 23 avril 2010 - 09:27 .
#29315
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:27
Yana Montana wrote...
Love that pic.
Indeed, it's odd in a way. After all these years since ME1 was released, we still get to see new shots in angles I've never seen before. Just as interesting as it is to see the amount of detail the old graphics have as well.
While ME2 highlights a lot of things like Kaidan's wavy/curly hair, if you look at more high res shots of ME1, it's already there.
Sure ME2 has improved graphics, but the ones in ME1 were great as well. I use shots from both ME1 and 2 for my pics and there's very little difference between them imo. ME2 Kaidan on Horizon just has better lighting...whereas ME1 Kaidan is often in red/orange or blue hues.
Love seeing all these new Kaidan shots
#29316
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:32
#29317
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:38
Yeah I sucked too. The teens told me to play as a soldier the first time and I didn't really get into it, until I discovered biotics, lol. I've never been into shooters, it takes me too long to aim usually which is why I avoid the sniper rifle, lol. I think the only other one i've played on the pc is farcry2 and only because it came with the graphics card, lol. Teen just told me that we actually have fallout3 so I may have to give that a try one of these days. He's been trying to get me to play Oblivian for ages.Shenzi wrote...
sesheta255 wrote...
I would never have played Mass Effect if the teens hadn't talked me into it by telling me 'Carth' was in it, lol. I generally avoid anything that requires my character to use a gun, lol. Generally prefer to stick to bashing someone to death with a sword or lightsaber. I can't imagine playing ME2 without having played ME1.
I completely sucked at ME1 my first play through, my husband plays shooters but I hadn't before besides Fallout3.
I've gotten a lot better at it in the last few months of playing both games.
#29318
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:40
Well, now you made me curious and I had to go and Wikia it!Jhosephine wrote...
Okay question. An omni tool can be used to sent and receive mail as well right?
http://masseffect.wi...wiki/Omni-tools
#29319
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:43
#29320
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:44
I'm not sure if it can ingame, but I think it can in most fics I've read or written, lolJhosephine wrote...
Okay question. An omni tool can be used to sent and receive mail as well right?
edit : @Jen - I was too lazy to look in the wiki, thought about it then couldn't be bothered, but I did get sidetracked by the teen who has decided to make some pods, lol
Modifié par sesheta255, 23 avril 2010 - 09:48 .
#29321
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:45
Jenova65 wrote...
Well, now you made me curious and I had to go and Wikia it!Jhosephine wrote...
Okay question. An omni tool can be used to sent and receive mail as well right?
http://masseffect.wi...wiki/Omni-tools
Okay Jacob could watch the news on his, Shepard gets that message from TIM through an omni-tool...so I can assume it's like a multi-media tool as well? Like an Ipad or whatever it's called?
Edit : oh and video games as well? wow
Modifié par Jhosephine, 23 avril 2010 - 09:46 .
#29322
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 09:53
sesheta255 wrote...
Yeah I sucked too. The teens told me to play as a soldier the first time and I didn't really get into it, until I discovered biotics, lol. I've never been into shooters, it takes me too long to aim usually which is why I avoid the sniper rifle, lol. I think the only other one i've played on the pc is farcry2 and only because it came with the graphics card, lol. Teen just told me that we actually have fallout3 so I may have to give that a try one of these days. He's been trying to get me to play Oblivian for ages.Shenzi wrote...
sesheta255 wrote...
I would never have played Mass Effect if the teens hadn't talked me into it by telling me 'Carth' was in it, lol. I generally avoid anything that requires my character to use a gun, lol. Generally prefer to stick to bashing someone to death with a sword or lightsaber. I can't imagine playing ME2 without having played ME1.
I completely sucked at ME1 my first play through, my husband plays shooters but I hadn't before besides Fallout3.
I've gotten a lot better at it in the last few months of playing both games.
I always played casters in MMOs so I'm better with biotic based character than ones that rely mostly on shooting.
#29323
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 10:02
Shenzi wrote...
I always played casters in MMOs so I'm better with biotic based character than ones that rely mostly on shooting.
Same here, I prefer supporting characters more though. While I play an adept on my 'main' Shepard, I really love the engineer in ME2 as well. For the time I played with the class.
I think I would love the Sentinel but I cannot bring myself into trying it since my favourite sentinel might be at my side once more in ME3 and I want Kaidan and Shepard to be seperate classes for some reason
I do hope they bring back the medic skills though in ME3, I always made Kaidan this biotic field medic in ME1 and he rocked.
#29324
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 10:04
Still here.....
#29325
Posté 23 avril 2010 - 10:05
I know, pretty spiffy piece of equipment, huh?Jhosephine wrote...
Jenova65 wrote...
Well, now you made me curious and I had to go and Wikia it!Jhosephine wrote...
Okay question. An omni tool can be used to sent and receive mail as well right?
http://masseffect.wi...wiki/Omni-tools
Okay Jacob could watch the news on his, Shepard gets that message from TIM through an omni-tool...so I can assume it's like a multi-media tool as well? Like an Ipad or whatever it's called?
Edit : oh and video games as well? wow




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