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[Joisan]

Shenzi wrote...

Is anyone avaiable for a grammer proof read? I just finished up chapter 4 on my fic.

I'm here!

[VutaatVerd]

Greetings FemShepards,



I do not know how many of you are voting in the Mass Effect Survivor, it seams that Ashley Williams and Kaidan Alenko time is closing in. We maybe saved today as it appears that Thane is going to bite the dust. I am just curious if we (Ashley and Kaidan Fans) team up, who would we vote off for tomorrow /Day 1. I my self see Samara going tomorrow. Feel free to let any of us know on the Ashley Support Forums

[Shenzi]

Joisan wrote...

Shenzi wrote...

Is anyone avaiable for a grammer proof read? I just finished up chapter 4 on my fic.

I'm here!

You have mail

[Joisan]

Shenzi wrote...

You have mail

Alright, commencing proofread now!

[stardust923]

Shenzi wrote...

Is anyone avaiable for a grammer proof read? I just finished up chapter 4 on my fic.

If you want an extra person to proofread, I have some time to look over it right now.  I've really enjoyed the story so far, by the way.  

[PopDisaster]

VutaatVerd wrote...

Greetings FemShepards,

I do not know how many of you are voting in the Mass Effect Survivor, it seams that Ashley Williams and Kaidan Alenko time is closing in. We maybe saved today as it appears that Thane is going to bite the dust. I am just curious if we (Ashley and Kaidan Fans) team up, who would we vote off for tomorrow /Day 1. I my self see Samara going tomorrow. Feel free to let any of us know on the Ashley Support Forums

I was looking at that earlier... I'm surprised that they have both made it so far. I thought Kaidan would be one of the first to go. But I'm not going to vote until a little later, it's too early to tell if Thane is really going or not. But if Ash/Kai get targeted, and you guys are voting a certain way, I'll join in.

[Shenzi]

stardust923 wrote...

Shenzi wrote...

Is anyone avaiable for a grammer proof read? I just finished up chapter 4 on my fic.

If you want an extra person to proofread, I have some time to look over it right now.  I've really enjoyed the story so far, by the way.  

Sent you a link as well

[Shenzi]

PopDisaster wrote...

VutaatVerd wrote...

Greetings FemShepards,

I do not know how many of you are voting in the Mass Effect Survivor, it seams that Ashley Williams and Kaidan Alenko time is closing in. We maybe saved today as it appears that Thane is going to bite the dust. I am just curious if we (Ashley and Kaidan Fans) team up, who would we vote off for tomorrow /Day 1. I my self see Samara going tomorrow. Feel free to let any of us know on the Ashley Support Forums

I was looking at that earlier... I'm surprised that they have both made it so far. I thought Kaidan would be one of the first to go. But I'm not going to vote until a little later, it's too early to tell if Thane is really going or not. But if Ash/Kai get targeted, and you guys are voting a certain way, I'll join in.

I typically have been voting for the non ME1 LI that's in the lead an hour or so before the poll closes.

[Tatooine92]

Shenzi wrote...

Joisan wrote...

Tatooine92 wrote...

Stoooooooop, before I get the gal in my avatar involved with K-bear in a mildly kinky fanfic. XD

If that's the case, then I think you should definitely keep it up, Kim.   'Cause kinky Tat fanfic sounds amazing.

I want to read that fic too

Well, thank you for the votes of support!  Give me a setting and a prompt, and I'll see what I can do!  

[Joisan]

Sent off the first part of my proofread, Shenzi. Working on the second now.  ETA: My apologies if the tone comes off as less than friendly, but I thought it would be better for a proofread to simply stick to pointing out the grammar/spelling errors I see.

Modifié par Joisan, 23 avril 2010 - 06:46 .

[*Kioux*]

Joisan wrote...

Sent off the first part of my proofread, Shenzi. Working on the second now.  ETA: My apologies if the tone comes off as less than friendly, but I thought it would be better for a proofread to simply stick to pointing out the grammar/spelling errors I see.

Haha... like the dreadful correction-red... *brrr*

[Shenzi]

Joisan wrote...

Sent off the first part of my proofread, Shenzi. Working on the second now.  ETA: My apologies if the tone comes off as less than friendly, but I thought it would be better for a proofread to simply stick to pointing out the grammar/spelling errors I see.

What you sent over is perfect

[Shenzi]

OMG no picture of Kaidan in 3 pages



Still my favorite.

Modifié par Shenzi, 23 avril 2010 - 07:04 .

[Joisan]

I'm still rather fond of this one







I want to see something like this in ME3.

[Tatooine92]

Now we have the first Kaidan in three pages!



Aaaaaand I have no ideas for my fic. =( I need some!

[Joisan]

Tatooine92 wrote...

Now we have the first Kaidan in three pages!

Aaaaaand I have no ideas for my fic. =( I need some!

Hmm... well somebody already mentioned the potential of that table in the briefing room on the SR2

[Jhourney]

Tatooine92 wrote...

Now we have the first Kaidan in three pages!

Aaaaaand I have no ideas for my fic. =( I need some!

*raises hand* Let's see....Kaidan and Shepard sparring, neither wants to back down, things heat up, serious biotic fight, hand to hand combat, sweat, heated tempers, anger and then slowly it turns into something else? But who will win when half the crew is watching? Both have their pride but lust could win as well...oohhh the tension

I dunno

[Tatooine92]

Joisan wrote...

Tatooine92 wrote...

Now we have the first Kaidan in three pages!

Aaaaaand I have no ideas for my fic. =( I need some!

Hmm... well somebody already mentioned the potential of that table in the briefing room on the SR2

Hel-LO!  Now, we must get K-bear onto the SR2 pronto!  Is this the part where he sneaks aboard to surprise FemShep?

[Tatooine92]

Jhosephine wrote...

Tatooine92 wrote...

Now we have the first Kaidan in three pages!

Aaaaaand I have no ideas for my fic. =( I need some!

*raises hand* Let's see....Kaidan and Shepard sparring, neither wants to back down, things heat up, serious biotic fight, hand to hand combat, sweat, heated tempers, anger and then slowly it turns into something else? But who will win when half the crew is watching? Both have their pride but lust could win as well...oohhh the tension

I dunno

He had reach, but she had flexibility.  

Er, wait.  Wrong appreciation thread.

[Jhourney]

Joisan wrote...

I'm still rather fond of this one



I want to see something like this in ME3.

Would prefer it the other way around I think...Kaidan reaching for Shepard. Hmm, who will take initiative to mend the relationship? It's been said Kaidan might actively go after Shepard so I'm hopeful..but still...

[Jhourney]

Tatooine92 wrote...

Jhosephine wrote...

Tatooine92 wrote...

Now we have the first Kaidan in three pages!

Aaaaaand I have no ideas for my fic. =( I need some!

*raises hand* Let's see....Kaidan and Shepard sparring, neither wants to back down, things heat up, serious biotic fight, hand to hand combat, sweat, heated tempers, anger and then slowly it turns into something else? But who will win when half the crew is watching? Both have their pride but lust could win as well...oohhh the tension

I dunno

He had reach, but she had flexibility.  

Er, wait.  Wrong appreciation thread.

lol Well I can see Kaidan and Shepard turning a simple work out into something more, especially since they have issues that need resolving *chuckles* Oh heck, just toss them into a tub

[Tatooine92]

A tub? Nay. A SHOWER!

[Jhourney]

Tatooine92 wrote...

A tub? Nay. A SHOWER!

But we just had shower fics...hmm...then again, can never have enough shower scenes

[Tatooine92]

Seeee? But tubs... tubs are underused. Hrm.

[Joisan]

Tatooine92 wrote...

A tub? Nay. A SHOWER!

You have seen Legbamel's "The Commander Takes a Shower" right?  It involves sneaking on to the SR2 and a sexy shower interlude.