For anyone not on yesterday afternoon I put out chapter 5 yesterday Just Because Horizon Was That Bloody Awful
Kaidan Alenko Support Thread Part 2
#31076
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 09:55
For anyone not on yesterday afternoon I put out chapter 5 yesterday Just Because Horizon Was That Bloody Awful
#31077
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 09:58
Jhosephine wrote...
Oh the joy of Keeper scanning....gotta catch em all.....
There are worse things. Planet scanning comes to mind. great screen shots by the way.
#31078
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:04
stephee wrote...
Jhosephine wrote...
Oh the joy of Keeper scanning....gotta catch em all.....
There are worse things. Planet scanning comes to mind. great screen shots by the way.
Nothing like an artificial time sink.
I thought I had escaped farming when I left behind MMOs.
#31079
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:05
#31080
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:07
oh don't get me started on MMOs. I tried to return to one recently, but found i couldn't stand the daily grind. games should not be a chore.Shenzi wrote...
stephee wrote...
Jhosephine wrote...
Oh the joy of Keeper scanning....gotta catch em all.....
There are worse things. Planet scanning comes to mind. great screen shots by the way.
Nothing like an artificial time sink.
I thought I had escaped farming when I left behind MMOs.
#31081
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:10

not sure that we really need a motivational for this though.
#31082
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:12
sapphyreelf wrote...
Oh, and as promised (and thanks again to Jilly for linking for me yesterday while at work), I did post the start of my Shenko fic: Everything's Not Fine.
Wow Sapphyr, that's some impressive writing. It read so smoothly and the doctor was strangle worthy. Fantastic! Please continue, would love to see more. Great job
#31083
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:18
Jhosephine wrote...
sapphyreelf wrote...
Oh, and as promised (and thanks again to Jilly for linking for me yesterday while at work), I did post the start of my Shenko fic: Everything's Not Fine.
Wow Sapphyr, that's some impressive writing. It read so smoothly and the doctor was strangle worthy. Fantastic! Please continue, would love to see more. Great job
Thanks! As Sia can attest, I was very unsure about angry Shep while I was writing this story. It seems Shep made her point loud and clear though.
I'm still fiddling with the next chapter, but there is a lot left to be told to this story.
#31084
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:19
Just started my 5th (?) playthrough of Mass Effect 1 yesterday. Will be rushing through the story just to advance Kaidan romance as fast as possible. Just want to hear him talk. No bad ass attitude, no endless drama-whining, no forced-on flirting.
Playing ME1 again reminds me how dissapointed I was with ME2 story. In ME1 Kaidan really feels like this second-in-command person who has his own opinions and views of what is going on. In ME2 the squad members usually just say something general or something after a discussion has ended, they just stand on the background, letting Shepard deal with all the crap.
*sigh* I miss Kaidan.
As for the Citadel Doctor question, I did feel a bit nasty when it was said in the email. One of those "damn, that's like a real-life BS situation" things. Still it's understandable thinking that Kaidan thought Shep was dead. 2 years is a long time, I'm glad Bioware decided to make the mourning time that long. Would've been pretty damn dumb if he was already with someone after like half a year or so. My Shepard, who I play more or less as my alter ego but just way more bad ass, would probably just show her that she is not to be messed around with. Maybe just by saying "he chose me so deal with it" or something.
As for MMOs...yeah just quit WoW for like the 6th time due to my head exploding after all the grind. I still play Guild Wars on and off but then again, it's not even a real MMO. GW2 is coming up too, still I'm more hoping to get my hands on ME3 or maybe a freaking ME1 Love Interest DLC. Me want!
#31085
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:28
Milana_Saros wrote...
*sigh* I miss Kaidan.
As for the Citadel Doctor question, I did feel a bit nasty when it was said in the email. One of those "damn, that's like a real-life BS situation" things. Still it's understandable thinking that Kaidan thought Shep was dead. 2 years is a long time, I'm glad Bioware decided to make the mourning time that long. Would've been pretty damn dumb if he was already with someone after like half a year or so. My Shepard, who I play more or less as my alter ego but just way more bad ass, would probably just show her that she is not to be messed around with. Maybe just by saying "he chose me so deal with it" or something.
Whoever wrote the Horizon dialogue for Shep also wrote that letter.
While it's realistic that he would have attempted dating 2 years after dating that would have been more appropriate for the sit down talk with Kaidan that we should have gotten to have in ME2.
Modifié par Shenzi, 30 avril 2010 - 10:29 .
#31086
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:31
#31087
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:35
Quick question: do we have anyone with good medical knowledge here? Someone that can help me out with the right terms and descriptions concerning an injured person? If so, please let me know - I'd like to have someone proofread something for me.
#31088
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:39
I think its only normal that he would start to move on with his life after 2 years. My Shep may still have a chat to her with missile launcher in hand if she finds out who she is though, lol
#31089
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:45
I am back online. I woke up to a random Horizon thought.
Shepard finds Kaidan still in stasis and knows he can see her and probably hear her. She goes up to him and says in his ear "I know it's been two years for you, but it's only been a month or two for me. I love you Kaidan."
Yeah that is what I wanted to say to when he was yelling at me too.!!!
Obsessed, I don't know where you would get that Idea?
Modifié par Nightodie, 30 avril 2010 - 10:46 .
#31090
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:47
Nightodie wrote...
Good Morning Everyone!!!
I am back online. I woke up to a random Horizon thought.
Shepard finds Kaidan still in stasis and knows he can see her and probably hear her. She goes up to him and says in his ear "I know it's been two years for you, but it's only been a month or two for me. I love you Kaidan."
Yeah that is what I wanted to say to when he was yelling at me too.!!!
Obsessed, I don't know where you would get that Idea?
I think if my Shep had found him in stasis in the field that she would have had Joker send a shuttle to come pick him up right then and there.
After she knew he was secure on the shuttle, then she'd finish the mission for Horizon.
#31091
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:48
sesheta255 wrote...
lol, I just wrote a bit of dialogue between Kaidan & Joker about the 'citadel doctor" not very long ago in the fic I've been trying to work on all day.
I think its only normal that he would start to move on with his life after 2 years. My Shep may still have a chat to her with missile launcher in hand if she finds out who she is though, lol
I liked how Jaer addressed it in A Woman's Armor where Shepard actually got to meet the doctor.
"So tell me about the doctor you had drinks with."
Her tone was different this time. Full more of curiosity than belligerence.
"Why do you want to know?"
Shepard paused in their walk through the Citadel and gave him a careful study. "Because I liked her." That said, she gave a shrug and smiled. "Mind you, I would also like to dump her out an airlock in deep space, but I did like her."
Modifié par Shenzi, 30 avril 2010 - 10:48 .
#31092
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:48
Nightodie wrote...
Good Morning Everyone!!!
I am back online. I woke up to a random Horizon thought.
Shepard finds Kaidan still in stasis and knows he can see her and probably hear her. She goes up to him and says in his ear "I know it's been two years for you, but it's only been a month or two for me. I love you Kaidan."
Yeah that is what I wanted to say to when he was yelling at me too.!!!
Obsessed, I don't know where you would get that Idea?
I hear ya - that would have been nice. Hell, even if he eventually dropped out of the statsis and would have fallen into her arms, finding her support him... *sighs*
#31093
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:50
Kioux wrote...
Nightodie wrote...
Good Morning Everyone!!!
I am back online. I woke up to a random Horizon thought.
Shepard finds Kaidan still in stasis and knows he can see her and probably hear her. She goes up to him and says in his ear "I know it's been two years for you, but it's only been a month or two for me. I love you Kaidan."
Yeah that is what I wanted to say to when he was yelling at me too.!!!
Obsessed, I don't know where you would get that Idea?
I hear ya - that would have been nice. Hell, even if he eventually dropped out of the statsis and would have fallen into her arms, finding her support him... *sighs*
*melts*
#31094
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:53
@ sapphyreelf - Really liked angry Shepard
#31095
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:55
milkabi wrote...
@Shenzi - Loved the story
@ sapphyreelf - Really liked angry Shepard
Yep DITTO
And I was a good girl, I left review
#31096
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:56
Kioux wrote...
Nightodie wrote...
Good Morning Everyone!!!
I am back online. I woke up to a random Horizon thought.
Shepard finds Kaidan still in stasis and knows he can see her and probably hear her. She goes up to him and says in his ear "I know it's been two years for you, but it's only been a month or two for me. I love you Kaidan."
Yeah that is what I wanted to say to when he was yelling at me too.!!!
Obsessed, I don't know where you would get that Idea?
I hear ya - that would have been nice. Hell, even if he eventually dropped out of the statsis and would have fallen into her arms, finding her support him... *sighs*
Now there's a lovely image to take with me to work today. Shep being the white knight for Kaidan.
And with that, off for another long day of work.
#31097
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:56
Nightodie wrote...
Good Morning Everyone!!!
I am back online. I woke up to a random Horizon thought.
Shepard finds Kaidan still in stasis and knows he can see her and probably hear her. She goes up to him and says in his ear "I know it's been two years for you, but it's only been a month or two for me. I love you Kaidan."
Yeah that is what I wanted to say to when he was yelling at me too.!!!
Obsessed, I don't know where you would get that Idea?
Repeating what I was told the first time I came up with an idea for a fic for a topic I hadn't seen addressed before, you should write that scene up for us.
Modifié par Shenzi, 30 avril 2010 - 10:57 .
#31098
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 10:59
Kioux wrote...
Morning.
Quick question: do we have anyone with good medical knowledge here? Someone that can help me out with the right terms and descriptions concerning an injured person? If so, please let me know - I'd like to have someone proofread something for me.
I wish I could help you on that one. I’m only an expert on the injuries I’ve suffered as I rotate through injuring my hips, shoulders and back on a regular basis.
#31099
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 11:01
I think that would take care of any anger issues he had though... All he really wants to know is that she loved him IMHO.
#31100
Posté 30 avril 2010 - 11:05
I am getting to the Virmire part, and I don't want to kill Ashley - I have been thinking of ways around it. That's where I am stuck. I have two good scenes in my random thoughts file for after; one where she lives, one where she dies. I like them both. I don't like her dying though - seems so pointless. I will have to see where it goes when I start to write it.
Modifié par Nightodie, 30 avril 2010 - 11:16 .




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