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[Sialater]

I'm blaming y'all. Another character reared her head today. Bringing the citizenship in my imagination to 5.



Avery Shepard is telling me her story.

[Star]

Sialater wrote...

I'm blaming y'all. Another character reared her head today. Bringing the citizenship in my imagination to 5.

Avery Shepard is telling me her story.

It's addicting isn't it!

[Shenzi]

Sialater wrote...

I'm blaming y'all. Another character reared her head today. Bringing the citizenship in my imagination to 5.

Avery Shepard is telling me her story.

[jillyfae]

Yeah! Avery!

[Shenzi]

I can barely write for one toon, can't imagine juggling 5.

[*Kioux*]

Hmm... I feel like I'm in a David vs Goliath situation here, lol.
May my Chapter not be crushed by the power of your writing, Sia... now that's a wish for the night.

[chem light]

Kioux wrote...

Hmm... I feel like I'm in a David vs Goliath situation here, lol.
May my Chapter not be crushed by the power of your writing, Sia... now that's a wish for the night.

URZ!  I loved Urz.  Was heartbroken when I couldn't bring him with me.

[Sialater]

Shenzi wrote...

I can barely write for one toon, can't imagine juggling 5.

Sorry, 6.  Three toons, three originals. 

[Sialater]

Kioux wrote...

Hmm... I feel like I'm in a David vs Goliath situation here, lol.
May my Chapter not be crushed by the power of your writing, Sia... now that's a wish for the night.

Oh, don't say that.  I don't know when Avery's going to be done, and I'm really not that good. 


Sinvraal on the other hand....

[Shenzi]

Sialater wrote...

Kioux wrote...

Hmm... I feel like I'm in a David vs Goliath situation here, lol.
May my Chapter not be crushed by the power of your writing, Sia... now that's a wish for the night.

Oh, don't say that.  I don't know when Avery's going to be done, and I'm really not that good. 


Sinvraal on the other hand....

I tried to lure Sinvraal to this thread the other day after we exchanged a few PMs, she had sent me one thanking me for a review.  No luck though, she doesn't frequent the bioware forums.

She did however strongly suggest that her Shep will be remaining faithful.

[stephee]

Good morning all, hope everyones well

@kioux - love ch 10. it would be nice to have urz on the normandy. could imagine him stealing the bed in shep's cabin though.

[chem light]

Shenzi wrote...

Sialater wrote...

Kioux wrote...

Hmm... I feel like I'm in a David vs Goliath situation here, lol.
May my Chapter not be crushed by the power of your writing, Sia... now that's a wish for the night.

Oh, don't say that.  I don't know when Avery's going to be done, and I'm really not that good. 


Sinvraal on the other hand....

I tried to lure Sinvraal to this thread the other day after we exchanged a few PMs, she had sent me one thanking me for a review.  No luck though, she doesn't frequent the bioware forums.

She did however strongly suggest that her Shep will be remaining faithful.

Aww good.  I feel like her stories are the novelization of the real Shepard.  I  take all the little side stories from her works as cannon now.   But I'm not obsessive or anything.

[chem light]

stephee wrote...

Good morning all, hope everyones well

@kioux - love ch 10. it would be nice to have urz on the normandy. could imagine him stealing the bed in shep's cabin though.

Oh yes, this.  Just keep the boy away from Kelly. I don't want him getting molested.

[Shenzi]

chem light wrote...

Shenzi wrote...

Sialater wrote...

Kioux wrote...

Hmm... I feel like I'm in a David vs Goliath situation here, lol.
May my Chapter not be crushed by the power of your writing, Sia... now that's a wish for the night.

Oh, don't say that.  I don't know when Avery's going to be done, and I'm really not that good. 


Sinvraal on the other hand....

I tried to lure Sinvraal to this thread the other day after we exchanged a few PMs, she had sent me one thanking me for a review.  No luck though, she doesn't frequent the bioware forums.

She did however strongly suggest that her Shep will be remaining faithful.

Aww good.  I feel like her stories are the novelization of the real Shepard.  I  take all the little side stories from her works as cannon now.   But I'm not obsessive or anything.

Last 2 weeks the updates showed up at about 11:30, not that I'm actually waiting for them to show up on Thursdays

[Shenzi]

chem light wrote...

stephee wrote...

Good morning all, hope everyones well

@kioux - love ch 10. it would be nice to have urz on the normandy. could imagine him stealing the bed in shep's cabin though.

Oh yes, this.  Just keep the boy away from Kelly. I don't want him getting molested.

Kelly's a problem for sure, I had to have Kaidan pull her off of Garrus literally last chapter in my fic and my Shep's gonna space her if she goes near Kaidan.

[*Kioux*]

Sialater wrote...

Kioux wrote...

Hmm... I feel like I'm in a David vs Goliath situation here, lol.
May my Chapter not be crushed by the power of your writing, Sia... now that's a wish for the night.

Oh, don't say that.  I don't know when Avery's going to be done, and I'm really not that good. 

Sinvraal on the other hand....

What was the next step up from Goliath? LoL... I know there are plenty of authors that induce the feeling of unworthiness inside of me. The only reason I actually write is because I consider life too short to not do what I love and if I get a few people to smile with my stuff, I think it's all I can ask for.

So, thank you chem and stephee for the kind words here.

chem light wrote...

Oh yes, this.  Just keep the boy
away from Kelly. I don't want him getting molested.

LoL... I actually will have a small comment on that in Chapter 11. I  know it's all a bit fluffy in 10, but I wanted to give it a try.

Modifié par Kioux, 17 mai 2010 - 12:45 .

[legbamel]

Shenzi wrote...

chem light wrote...

stephee wrote...
Good morning all, hope everyones well

@kioux - love ch 10. it would be nice to have urz on the normandy. could imagine him stealing the bed in shep's cabin though.

Oh yes, this.  Just keep the boy away from Kelly. I don't want him getting molested.

Kelly's a problem for sure, I had to have Kaidan pull her off of Garrus literally last chapter in my fic and my Shep's gonna space her if she goes near Kaidan.

I'm glad I'm not the only one who writes Kelly as an uber-frisky sex kitten.  But then I podded her, so I kinda feel bad about it. 

[Shenzi]

legbamel wrote...

Shenzi wrote...

chem light wrote...

stephee wrote...
Good morning all, hope everyones well

@kioux - love ch 10. it would be nice to have urz on the normandy. could imagine him stealing the bed in shep's cabin though.

Oh yes, this.  Just keep the boy away from Kelly. I don't want him getting molested.

Kelly's a problem for sure, I had to have Kaidan pull her off of Garrus literally last chapter in my fic and my Shep's gonna space her if she goes near Kaidan.

I'm glad I'm not the only one who writes Kelly as an uber-frisky sex kitten.  But then I podded her, so I kinda feel bad about it. 

An overly perky uber-frisky sex kitten that has made the rounds of almost the entire male population of the Normandy and a few of the females as well.

[sesheta255]

@stephee - morning. You'll be happy to know that Star has anew story up on ff.net

@Ki - I know how you feel about the induced feelings of unworthiness. My brain went into meltdown years ago and I have no idea why I suddenly decided to attempt writing fics when you guys are all so talented, lol. But someone may get a laugh out of the stuff that dribbles out of my warped mind, and it keeps me occupied and out of trouble.

@Shenzi - you are evil, lol. Star has already got me coming up with ideas for even more misunderstandings, lol. Now I have 3 of my own I'm working on, 2 possible ideas with Star, and 1 with Shotty, lol. Its lucky I have no life to speak of, lmao

My Shep will be introducing Kelly to her missile launcher if she so much as looks at Kaidan.  the thought occured to me for a random stupidity that I don't recall her showing any interest in Joker so far.  who knows he might finally get lucky.

Modifié par sesheta255, 17 mai 2010 - 12:58 .

[Shenzi]

I can't picture Kelly taking Joker's fragile bones into account, he might get lucky but he'd be broken afterwards.

[stephee]

sesheta255 wrote...

@stephee - morning. You'll be happy to know that Star has anew story up on ff.net

My Shep will be introducing Kelly to her missile launcher if she so much as looks at Kaidan.  the thought occured to me for a random stupidity that I don't recall her showing any interest in Joker so far.  who knows he might finally get lucky.

hi sesh, i've read star's new one, while i like,i have a hard time seeing Kaidan pulling off an effective aussie accent in order to fool those other guys. As for Kelly suddenly showing interest in Joker, i think we'd have a problem with a rogue ship after that.

[*Kioux*]

I honestly don't have much of a problem with Kelly. I never tried to LI her in any possible way and while her questions seemed a bit... odd at times, I didn't really care much. She'll be around, not as best buddy but as part of the crew.



I won't turn her into a sex-hungry omnivore... but she'll get her quirks.

[jillyfae]

See, I thought Kelly was kinda cute... trying too hard to be Shepard's BFF by asking about all her friends and recruits, but she meant well. Of course, most of the forum seems to have decided she's a selfish, raging nympho, judging by her appearances in both smoothie and scale-itch motivationals. *laughs*

eta: Though I can't imagine she'd be to Joker's taste.  Depending on how you interpret her character, she either comes across as really young, or really skanky.

Modifié par jillyfae, 17 mai 2010 - 01:18 .

[chem light]

Shenzi wrote...

chem light wrote...

stephee wrote...

Good morning all, hope everyones well

@kioux - love ch 10. it would be nice to have urz on the normandy. could imagine him stealing the bed in shep's cabin though.

Oh yes, this.  Just keep the boy away from Kelly. I don't want him getting molested.

Kelly's a problem for sure, I had to have Kaidan pull her off of Garrus literally last chapter in my fic and my Shep's gonna space her if she goes near Kaidan.

And she'd be justified.

[Collider]

I tend to think that they overdid Kelly. It seems they wanted some sort of deviation from the standard "Humanity first" or "I want to save humanity" model for Cerberus. So they went with a free love kind of character that sounds like a fortune cookie. She didn't really feel like a real person.