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[Joisan]

It's not precisely Mass Effect related, but if anyone wants to see my somewhat snarkier version of the conversation with Loghain when you arrive in Denerim before the Landsmeet, let me know.

[OdScIs]

@Ki, loved it!!

and sometimes i think that Kelly is annoying, i picture her just like in the fics, but i agree with jillyfae, she just wants to be Shepard's bff. By the way, how does she knows about Kaidan and Shepard?

[*Kioux*]

jillyfae wrote...

See, I thought Kelly was kinda cute... trying too hard to be Shepard's BFF by asking about all her friends and recruits, but she meant well. Of course, most of the forum seems to have decided she's a selfish, raging nympho, judging by her appearances in both smoothie and scale-itch motivationals. *laughs*

eta: Though I can't imagine she'd be to Joker's taste.  Depending on how you interpret her character, she either comes across as really young, or really skanky.

This! I'm gonna give her a chance as small character in my ff - if it doesn't work... well she can be repalced or forgotten.

[Shenzi]

OdScIs wrote...

@Ki, loved it!!
and sometimes i think that Kelly is annoying, i picture her just like in the fics, but i agree with jillyfae, she just wants to be Shepard's bff. By the way, how does she knows about Kaidan and Shepard?

Well there is the photo in Shep's cabin.

[*Kioux*]

Joisan wrote...

It's not precisely Mass Effect related, but if anyone wants to see my somewhat snarkier version of the conversation with Loghain when you arrive in Denerim before the Landsmeet, let me know.

Sure... why not?

[*Kioux*]

OdScIs wrote...

@Ki, loved it!!
and sometimes i think that Kelly is annoying, i picture her just like in the fics, but i agree with jillyfae, she just wants to be Shepard's bff. By the way, how does she knows about Kaidan and Shepard?

Thanks

Joker knows, I'm damn sure Miranda knows from TIM (who obviously knows it) then there is the picture, and she might have access to videos or audio sources. Who knows, maybe Garrus and Tali talked, or Garrus asked her for some inspiration when he realizes (in some cases) that he might be interested...
I can come up with a dozen of plausible and not so plausible ideas and reason 

[Shenzi]

Kioux wrote...

Joisan wrote...

It's not precisely Mass Effect related, but if anyone wants to see my somewhat snarkier version of the conversation with Loghain when you arrive in Denerim before the Landsmeet, let me know.

Sure... why not?

I'll take a copy too

[Joisan]

@Ki and Shenzi: Sent.

You may be happy to know I got bored with DA:O so my muse is prodding me to do a little work on reworking those snippets I was talking about earlier.

Modifié par Joisan, 17 mai 2010 - 01:46 .

[*Kioux*]

I like DA:O as I love Mass Effect. I couldn't really compare them as a whole either - just a few features I suppose.

But I can enjoy a good DA:O as well as a good ME ff on the same level... as long as it is not any pairing with Loghain... gosh I hate that character with a passion or without Alistair... lol. Ok, a few with Zevran I can take and Nathaniel I make an exception as well... or all together but that's besides the point.



I just mean that I'm glad about most works (within my given perimeters) no matter if DA:O or ME... and I keep repeating myself and add typos here and there...and think that 4:00am is a good time to consider going to sleep...

[Sialater]

Augh. I really didn't need a new character voice. I really didn't.



It's titled, "Paragon of Virtue." Told after the end of ME2 and from both Avery's and Kaidan's viewpoints. First person POV, each chapter subtitled with sections "he said," "she said." Plot: Cerberus tries to reclaim the Normandy, AKA EDI, and Avery needs Kaidan's and the Alliance's help.

[*Kioux*]

Ok, I'll just assume everyone headed to bed or is lurking and I didn't kill the thread. I know I'm heading to bed now.
Just to check...

Just kidding, just kidding... sorry... I really am... or at least I try to be.
Anyway, here to make it all better again...

If this image accompanies me through the night... *sighs* Good night ladies (and gents... if you are around somewhere) and I haunt you all tomorrow.
Urz is really happy about every review - Urz and I also like constructive criticism... if you prefer that over compliments.
(just to emphasize... and don't worry, my picture quota for the next days... is all used up)

Modifié par Kioux, 17 mai 2010 - 02:22 .

[Shenzi]

Sialater wrote...

Augh. I really didn't need a new character voice. I really didn't.

It's titled, "Paragon of Virtue." Told after the end of ME2 and from both Avery's and Kaidan's viewpoints. First person POV, each chapter subtitled with sections "he said," "she said." Plot: Cerberus tries to reclaim the Normandy, AKA EDI, and Avery needs Kaidan's and the Alliance's help.

You do realize now I'm gonna be bugging you for this too in addtion to everything else.

[Shenzi]

Night Ki!  I'm out of here as well in a few till my chronic insomnia kicks in.

Then I'll be back on to bug the hell out of the early early morning crew.

[Sialater]

Shenzi wrote...

Sialater wrote...

Augh. I really didn't need a new character voice. I really didn't.

It's titled, "Paragon of Virtue." Told after the end of ME2 and from both Avery's and Kaidan's viewpoints. First person POV, each chapter subtitled with sections "he said," "she said." Plot: Cerberus tries to reclaim the Normandy, AKA EDI, and Avery needs Kaidan's and the Alliance's help.

You do realize now I'm gonna be bugging you for this too in addtion to everything else.

Keep in mind, I DO have a job and a husband.  Both of which I have to pay attention to on occasion.  (Though right now my better half is cussing at mechs.)

[Sialater]

Yikes! I didn't mean to kill the thread!

[sesheta255]

I think we've all had a turn at killing the thread lately Sia.  I've been lurking while I'm working on a fic.  Looks like quiet time before the next shift kicks in started a bit earlier than normal today.  Lets see if a Kaidan can revive it.

[legbamel]

Collider wrote...

I tend to think that they overdid Kelly. It seems they wanted some sort of deviation from the standard "Humanity first" or "I want to save humanity" model for Cerberus. So they went with a free love kind of character that sounds like a fortune cookie. She didn't really feel like a real person.

They made her far too easy as an LI.  It was more like, "Hey, my name is Kelly.  I'll be reading all your messages, telling you about your crew's personal issues, and, by the way, would you like me to dance for you?"  [shudder]  I've never taken her up on it but hubby likes to keep his fish fed so he goes down that path a ways every time.  She's just way too perky for me.

[Sialater]

sesheta255 wrote...

I think we've all had a turn at killing the thread lately Sia.  I've been lurking while I'm working on a fic.  Looks like quiet time before the next shift kicks in started a bit earlier than normal today.  Lets see if a Kaidan can revive it.

And what a lovely Kaidan you've chosen.

But, it's time to stop letting fic drive me nuts and go to sleep.  Adios.

[sesheta255]

legbamel wrote...

Collider wrote...

I tend to think that they overdid Kelly. It seems they wanted some sort of deviation from the standard "Humanity first" or "I want to save humanity" model for Cerberus. So they went with a free love kind of character that sounds like a fortune cookie. She didn't really feel like a real person.

They made her far too easy as an LI.  It was more like, "Hey, my name is Kelly.  I'll be reading all your messages, telling you about your crew's personal issues, and, by the way, would you like me to dance for you?"  [shudder]  I've never taken her up on it but hubby likes to keep his fish fed so he goes down that path a ways every time.  She's just way too perky for me.

I'm with you.  My brain doesn't process perky, lol.  Plus I've seen her dance on you tube and it doesn't interest me in the slightest.  I really wish they'd stuck with their plans for Ken.  That might have been a bit more interesting.

[legbamel]

sesheta255 wrote...

legbamel wrote...

Collider wrote...

I tend to think that they overdid Kelly. It seems they wanted some sort of deviation from the standard "Humanity first" or "I want to save humanity" model for Cerberus. So they went with a free love kind of character that sounds like a fortune cookie. She didn't really feel like a real person.

They made her far too easy as an LI.  It was more like, "Hey, my name is Kelly.  I'll be reading all your messages, telling you about your crew's personal issues, and, by the way, would you like me to dance for you?"  [shudder]  I've never taken her up on it but hubby likes to keep his fish fed so he goes down that path a ways every time.  She's just way too perky for me.

I'm with you.  My brain doesn't process perky, lol.  Plus I've seen her dance on you tube and it doesn't interest me in the slightest.  I really wish they'd stuck with their plans for Ken.  That might have been a bit more interesting.

I refuse to admit that I go through every available dialogue option with him just to listen to him talk.    Err, I mean, yes, Ken would have been much better as an LI for my smartass Shep.

[legbamel]

Sialater wrote...

sesheta255 wrote...
I think we've all had a turn at killing the thread lately Sia.  I've been lurking while I'm working on a fic.  Looks like quiet time before the next shift kicks in started a bit earlier than normal today.  Lets see if a Kaidan can revive it.

And what a lovely Kaidan you've chosen.

But, it's time to stop letting fic drive me nuts and go to sleep.  Adios.

I just got Kaidan and Shep in the same room and it so happens that this is the exact look he's giving her.  Luckily I've already written most of the argument because they have a lot to get through before they can start rebuilding.  This is such an "I don't trust you and boy am I mad" look.    But he's still hot, even with the narrowed eyes.  

[sesheta255]

legbamel wrote...

I refuse to admit that I go through every available dialogue option with him just to listen to him talk.    Err, I mean, yes, Ken would have been much better as an LI for my smartass Shep.

I can neither confirm or deny that I do too, but he could have bored at least one of my Shepards with tech, lol

[legbamel]

sesheta255 wrote...

legbamel wrote...

I refuse to admit that I go through every available dialogue option with him just to listen to him talk.    Err, I mean, yes, Ken would have been much better as an LI for my smartass Shep.

I can neither confirm or deny that I do too, but he could have bored at least one of my Shepards with tech, lol

Heh heh, bored. 

Dang, how did I get back in this gutter?  [eyes sesh]

Modifié par legbamel, 17 mai 2010 - 04:04 .

[Lady of the Waters]

Given that people have mentioned Dragon Age: Origins fanfiction I thought that perhaps they might want to check out my fanfiction entitled "Denerim High" which is based around the DAO characters set in a high school environment... (I posted it once before in this thread but it went unnoticed so I thought I may as well post it at least one more time just to be sure) All reviews are welcome!

http://www.fanfictio.../1/Denerim_High

It's my first piece of fanfiction ever and it's still a work in progress so sorry if it's not completely up to par with some of the other people here.

Modifié par Lady of the Waters, 17 mai 2010 - 04:06 .

[Nightodie]

Good Evening Everyone!!



The Night crew is back online!!



I find Kelly a little too childish for a councillor - the things she tells Shepard about the crew should be helpful but instead are trite or sexually oriented. Yeah I could take her or leave her!



Carry on!!