sagequeen wrote...
Shep: [gazes longingly at picture]
*cut to citadel. Kaidan is standing beside a woman in a medical uniform*
Kaidan: I'm sorry. The date was nice, but... It's not you. It's me.
Citadel Doctor:
Kaidan: Okay, scratch that, it's that my girlfriend, the one I loved with all my heart and thought was dead has come back and... well, this is embarassing, but as long as there's a chance in hell that we could be together, I'm going to have to figure that out first.
Citadel Doctor:
Kaidan: Good bye.
Citadel Doctor:
Kaidan: [walks away. he goes to the spot along the wards where he once said something embarrassing in front of shepard, stares out at the ward arms. feeling extremely nostalgic and heartsick, he fires up his contraband holo....]
Shepard's voice: I'm Commander Shepard and I delete viruses like you on the way to real errors."
Kaidan: [sigh]
BRILLIANT! I love it.
I did at first, too. To smarmy. Actually, that's what I called Zev for a quite a while--"Smarmy Elf."sesheeta:
re Alistair - I just think that my warden is only supposed to be fairly young and inexperienced as well so Alistair suits her perfectly. I find Zev off putting as a LI - he's too jaded and too much of a braggart about his prowess (which sets off alarm bells in my head, lol).
But I created a character my 3rd time through for him. And yeah, he's a bit of a braggart. But when he actually falls in love, he's rather cute. His eyes get all wide and open (as opposed to that half-lidded expression he usually wears) and he just looks so vulnerable. And your elf can actually get engaged to him--which is more than I can say for Alistair.




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